Humko Tumse Pyra Hai (Page 4)

Awesum job!

tooooooooo gooddddddddd...

part 7
this part is taking placein sujal office. sujal is working and then all of he sudden he stops and thinks to himself.
s= i can't stop thinking about kashish. What is happening to me. is mom right am i really falling in luv? i have to go see kashish. maybe that will help get kashish out of my head.
he then get up and goes to the hospital.
b4 getting out of the car sujal looked in the mirror.
s= i look dashing as always
sujal enters the hospital.
he sees kashish in a lovely pink shalwar kameez.
s=kashish!
kashish turns around and sees him. but she ignores him.
k= doc plz give the file 4 kiran
s= kashish
she again ignores him
sujal than gets and grabs her by the hand
k= behave yourself r. sujal
s= why are u ignoring me
k= this is a hospital and i only listen to patients only
s= ok have it your way
sujal then grabs a glass bottle and hit on his hnd
k= what are u doing
s= now u have to talk to me
scene eds

omg...poor Sujal!...lol..but that was sweet of him!

Awesome job

very good job.. sujal is soooooooo cuteeeeee... & y is this kashish ignoring sujal very bad.. hmm tho sujal kashish se baat karne ke liye ab patient ban gaya..cool...
please write soon & please write a bigger part this was too short........     

part 8
first of all i only got 2 comment which made me sad . Ok so lets get on with the scene the settig is still the same.
k= oh my god. so much blood is coming out. nurse plz get me the first aid kit
s= it ok! there i no need for medicine.
k= shut up! Look at how much blood is coming out
s= why do u care
k= because i am a doctor
n= here is the kit
k= thank u
s= i think i have to bleed everything i need your attention
k= plz mr. sujal. Why do u want my attention
s= because.............
k= becaus what!!!!!!!!!!!
s= because i like u
kashish is stunned at this point
k= mr. sujal u luv me
s= yes
k= no u don't. How can u luve me. u don't know anyhthing about me. u don't where i am from, who r my parents, what color do i like, what is my favorite book, what are my hobbies
s= but i know your heart
k= no one can know someone in their first meeting. So no one can fall in luv
s= luv only needs a second
k= this is not luv
s= the what is it
k= attraction
s= if it was attraction.......... then y do i think about u every second. why don't i forget u? Why can't i get u out of my head. whay have u become a part of my identity
k= u are going crazy
s= i am crazy for u
k= i don't bebleive u
s= i will make u beleive
sujal babdaging is done. He leaves and kashish is sort of in a shock
Just then we see mukti
m= didi
k= mukti what r u doing here
m= i just came here to give u your lunch
k= oh
m= did i really think he luvs u
k= no he doesn't it is just an attraction he will forget me in a week
m= if he didn't luv u he wouldn't have cut his hand for u. Just look into his eyes and u will see.
,mukti leaves and kashish is just standing there

scene ends
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nice part. continue soon

jus read da whole ting woawww....n i ve only got one word...itz MINDBLOWING....gud job....totally luvin ur story....awwn sujal cut his hand 4 kash.....sucha sweet pyaar ka izhaar.....lolz...keep up da gud work...