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Humko Tumse Pyra Hai (Page 3)

kashish805 Senior Member

Joined: 27 September 2005
Posts: 456

Posted: 17 May 2006 at 8:34pm | IP Logged
part 4
The last scene was about sujal looking at kashish. the setting is still the same
k= how did this happen, madame
v= oh i fell off the stairs.
k= well it looks like you have been hit
veena sort of gets nervous
v= no no nothing like that. iur name is kashish right
k= yes
s= very nice name
he gives one of his dashing smiles
k= thanks
kashish looks as hime weirdly
v= u go 2 college
k= yes, it is my final year
v= u work here
k= yes
v= oh
k=mrs. kandelwal your bandage is done
v= don't call m mrs. kandelwal call me veena aunty
k= ok
v= oh this is my son sujal
kashish gives him a look
k= hi sujal
s= hi
v= thank u. God bless u
k= thank u
v= sujal lets go
sujal is staring at kashish
v= sujal
s= yes mom
v= lets go
sujal and veena leave the hospital and come to the parking lot they sit in the car.
v= kashish was a very nice girl
s= and very pretty
v= what
s= nothng
v= don't hide anythng from me. i know u very well
s= mom
v= u liked her
sujal is blushing at this point Embarrassed
s= how r u feeling
v= don't try to change the subject
s= mom!!!!
veena laughs LOL

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Posts: 556

Posted: 17 May 2006 at 8:39pm | IP Logged
finally caught up!!!! wonderful story..and it is progressing really well...keep up the good work Clap Clap
shahidlover24 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 10006

Posted: 17 May 2006 at 9:21pm | IP Logged
Awesum job with the last few parts!'s really cute Tongue
jyothi_cool IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 13020

Posted: 18 May 2006 at 4:04am | IP Logged
Clap very very very gud story
MysticRiver IF-Addictz

Joined: 16 October 2004
Posts: 77166

Posted: 18 May 2006 at 5:09am | IP Logged
dear wah wah wah sujal staring at kashish , kashish giving sujal a wierd look..shooooo sweet......... Embarrassed
ab jaldi se kashish aur sujal ko dubara milwaoo aur unki mulakhaten karwathe raho... LOL
& plz post the next part soon.......... Big smile
cute_angle92 Groupbie

Joined: 01 April 2006
Posts: 129

Posted: 18 May 2006 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
part 5
ok now this scene i only about sujal. It is night time and sujal is in his bedroom. He is sitting on his bed and thinking to himself. he is miling
s= Wow what a girl! Men she is probably the most beautiful girl i have ever seen in my life and will never be able to see again.... Is this love....
Right then Angad enters the room
a= bhaiya pls sign these papers
sujal doesn't reply
a= bhaiya...
sujal still doesn't reply
a= bhaiya!
s= yes
a= are u ok
s= yes
a= ok plz sign these papers
Just then veena enters
a= mom i don't bahiyaa is feeling good
v= i know he is sick
a= what is the illness
v= love LOL
a= bhaiya your in luv
s= where do u want me to sign
v= don't try to change the subject
s= mom i think u should rest or else u will get sick
v= don't worry if i get sivk we will call Kashish okay
sujal just blushes
a= in smell luv in the air
v= me to
sujal blushes
s= mom
and then he leaves his room
a= mom i think he is in luv
v= i know he is i just hope he gets his luv
scene end

kashish805 Senior Member

Joined: 27 September 2005
Posts: 456

Posted: 18 May 2006 at 3:38pm | IP Logged
part 6
ok this is scene is taking place in kashish and multi's houses all of them are sitting and having chai.
P= Prena m= mukti k= kashish
p= so how was your day girls
m= every bad in have two new project to complete by nex week
k= that is a good thing u will get to learn
m= didi u r such a nerd LOL
k= shut up
p= how was your day kashish. how as the exam
k= the exam was very easy and then i went to work
p= any intersting cases in the hospital
k= yes. Mrs. Veena Kandelwal she says she had injuries on her face. She said she fell off the stairs but i thought someone hit her
p= oh wll maybe someone hit
k= of someone hit her why didn't she call the police
p= maybe she had been abused and was scared to tell the truth
k= maybe u are right
p= it is late now i think both of u should go to bed
k= ok
m= no i want to watch Bunty aur Babli
p= go to sllep
m= alright
k= good night
m= good night
p= good night
kashish and mukti are now in their room and on there bed
k= mukti.........
m= yes didi
k= ummm
m= what?
k= a guy came to the hospital today
m= so
k= he was looking at me
m= so
k= he was looking me strangly
m= what do u mean
k= i was bandaging veena aunty and he kept staring at me
m= really , 4 how long
k= like 30 minutes
m= wow. did i think he loves u
k= love how could anybody fall i love with me soo quickly
m= love only needs a second
k= that love is only an attraction.
m= didi u are soo unromatic
k= shut up and go to sleep ok
scene ends

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Posted: 18 May 2006 at 7:04pm | IP Logged
LOL LOL LOL 30min mein pyaar..... lol very interesting...i like it....good work!!!update soon

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