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kashish805 Senior Member
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Posted: 15 May 2006 at 5:24pm | IP Logged
Part 2
So this scene is taking place at the Kandelwal residents. It is 10 o' clock which is Dilip's breakfast time. Sujal, Angad and Prem are at the dinning table. Venna is standing by Dilip's chair. Then we see a man in a white suit he comes and sits down.Veena has hired a new servant
D= dilip v= veena s=sujal a=angad p=prem ser=servant
D= where is my breakfast!!!!!!!!!!!!!
v= it is coming plz wait
d= i am not a women, women wait not men
ser= here is the breakfast sir
d= ok now go
Dilip looks at his omlette and finds onions and he hates onions
d= what is this Angry i hate onions. Vennna!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
v= sorry i will tell the chef to make a new one
d= i don't have time to waste like u do Angry and then he slaps her
s= what are u doing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
d= don't u interfere. has your mom taught u anything
dilip punches her on the face and throws her against the wall and she bleeds
s= mom!
a= mom!
p= mom!
d= that is what she deserve. women don't get anything. they r so dumb and emotional
a= mind your language Mr. kandelwal
d= shut up! Don't u kniow how to speak to your father!
a= pa..............
dilip leaves
s= are u ok
v= i am fine
a= fine you are bleeding
v= it will stop
p= we have to take her to the hospital
s= prem go to college and angad get to work. i will take mom
a= call me if there is any trouble
s=ok
scene ends



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Posted: 15 May 2006 at 7:26pm | IP Logged
good part dear.. Clap
please continue... Big smile
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Posted: 15 May 2006 at 10:50pm | IP Logged
good start
i am sure evryone will luv yur ff
i already luv it
please continue soon.....
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Posted: 16 May 2006 at 8:40pm | IP Logged
part 3
k=kashish s= sujal v=veena d= doctor sharma n=nurse
in the previous scene veena gets injured so now sujal had brought veena to life car hospital in mumbai. kashish works part time in the hospital.
Sujal parks his car and is taking venna to the hospital
s= mom is it hurting a lot
v= no. u just made a big deal out of it
s= Big Deal! look now much blood is coming out
v= tume bhi na...
Sujal and veena enter the hospital. Veena sit down and sujal goes to the nurse.
s= nurse plz get a doc my mom is injuried
n= ok it will take a minute
s= minute?! i want a doc right now
n= But sir there is not a doc avavlibel
s= then arrange a doc
n= ok
After ten minutes the nurse returns
s= is this a hospital? where the patient dies before the doc comes
n= sorry sir
s= don't sorry. Sorry is not a solution
n= doc Sharma is ready
s= ok
n= sorry sir
Veena and Sujal go to doc cabin
d= what is the matter Mrs. Kandelwal
Veena hestate for a sceond and the says
v= nothing i just of the stair
d= it doesn't look like it. u have a lot of injuries on your face
v= i actually fell on my face
sujal is staring hard at his mom
d= ok, u need to take care
v= yes
d= well i have an emergency case. So my assistant Kashish will babdage u.
v= ok
d= kashish!!!!!!!!!!
Then we see a kashish. Sujal turns atound and looks at her. He is not able to take his eyes off of her
k=yes
d= plz babdage Mrs. kandelwal
k=yes sir
Sujal is still staring at her
scene end

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Posted: 16 May 2006 at 8:41pm | IP Logged
i accidetal posted on my sister's user id
sorry
kashish805
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Posted: 16 May 2006 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
hey ur story is going very nice...it is getting intresting day by day.... Clap
plz continue soon.......... Big smile
kashish805 Senior Member
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Posted: 17 May 2006 at 8:11pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by sun_423

hey ur story is going very nice...it is getting intresting day by day.... Clap
plz continue soon.......... Big smile

Thanks for ur encourgig comments and I may cont. today or tommrow

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Posted: 17 May 2006 at 8:19pm | IP Logged
thank u for the encoraging comments
kashish805

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