Humko Tumse Pyra Hai - Page 4

Posted: 17 years ago
part 10
so it is night time now and kashish is in her bedroom looking up into the sky at the stars. She is thinking to herself.
k= does he really love me?????????? Or is it just an attraction. Kashish are u stupid it is nothing but attraction, luv takes a lot of understanding not just one 30 minute meeting.
Kashish is worried
Just then mukti enters the room
m= what r u thinking about
k= oh nothing
m= you are thinking about that guy.... What is his name............. oh sujal right
k= right
m= so u were thinking about him
kashish is speechless
m= didi is in love!
k= shut up
m= i won't
k= i don't luv him
m= yeah right
k= no
m= yes
k= he is just attracted to me
m= he luvs u
k= how do u know
m= he injured himself for u
K= he is crazy
m= carziness is a part of friens hip
just then prena enters
p= now stop talking and go to sllep
k= mukti is not letting me
m= she is lying
p= ok. now go to sleep
m= good night
k= good night
p= good night
they both lay down
k= i am thristy i will go get some water
m= ok
kashish leaves the room. As she si going to the kitchen she sees sujal
k= sujal what are u doing her
sujal doesn't answer
k= go away
kashish goes to the door and pushes him and realizes there is no sujal
k= what is happeing to me. i think i need to go to the doctor
kashish goes to the kitchen and she sees the light on in her mom room
She goes to the room and ses Prena holding a picture of a baby girl
k= this is not a pic of me or mukti that who is this............
scene ends
Posted: 17 years ago
kiran ur story is really very nice..👏 har part ke baad it is getting more & more intresting... 👏hmm..tho ab sujal kashish ke khayalo mein aane laga hain...bohatttttt achcheeeeeeee.........😳
ab yeh prerna kiss ki pic dekh rahi hain.. sochna padega... shayad kashish aur mukti ki ek aur   behen joh bachpan mein unse bichad gayi ho & may be she is kripa.. what do u think is my guess right ??😆
anyway please continue soon.....😃 Edited by sun_423 - 17 years ago
Posted: 17 years ago
part 11
same scene
k= mom what are u doing
prena is shocked
p= nothing
k= who was the firl in the pic
perna staressssssss
p= mmmm my friends daughter
k= mom are u ok. u hand is shaking
p= don't worry. Why aren't u in bed
k= i came to the kitchen to get water
p= it is late i think u should go to sleep now
k= ok
kashish leaves
p= thank god. Kashish didn't find outanyting. but i need to be careful becuz if they find out it will ruin them forever.
next scene is in Mukti's college, Greenfield college. we see mukti in a hurry. She is waring her white sari
m= i am late agian. Today sir will be very upset. It is my mock trial and i am late. I am so stupid
Just then mukti enter he class
sir= u are late again
m= sorry
s= sorry my foot. next time u are late i will tell the dean
m= ok
s= r u ready
m= yes sir
s= ok, we will begin in two minutes
m= right
just then prem enters. Zhe is wearng a ehite shirt and a black suit
s= prem u are late also
p= sory
s= ok. get ready. u are fighting the case against Mukti
p = ok
sir leaves and mukti and prem are alone in the courtroom. They don't notice each other. just then mukti sees prem
m= u
prem turns around
p= u
m= what are u doing here
this is a funny scene
p= i am here to shop
mukti get mad
m= shut up
p= i am here to fight the case.. wait a minute u are mukti right
m= right
p= well we r competing today
m= what
p= i am the lawyer against
m= now i havr to win
p= prem never loses
m= mukti doesn't let anyone win
p= oh really
m= really
p we will se
m= we will see
scene end


Posted: 17 years ago
gud job.....gr8 goin...keep it up
Posted: 17 years ago
hey kiran very good..i liked reading the part.. but plz write the next part about sujal & kashish me want to read about them... & ya plz continue soon........
Posted: 17 years ago
👏 ..aww this is cool yaar..just read the whole story....great going .....keep it up and continue soooonn 😃 😃
Posted: 17 years ago
part 11
same scene
the mock trial has begin amd mukti and prem are ready to present their. the other students are presenting their case. Prem and Mukti and prem are giving each other an evil look
funny scene
m= i won't let him him way. no way. i will take revenge today what does he think of himself. i will not let him vow. God plz help me
p= she thinks she is so smart. i will show her who is really smart. Prem never loses,
judge= ms. mukti plz care your withness to the stand
m= ok
mukti and her witness( played by sneha) come to the stand. the withness name is kiran
m= what is your name
k= Kiran Verma
m= ok, how old are u
k= i am 19
m= where wwere on movember 1, 2005
k= i was at the mall, shopping
m= and what happened on that day
k= i saw a murder happen
m= who was murdered
k= ms. kasak sinha
m= did u see who murdered her
k= see mr. Ajay saxena
m= did u see anything else
k= then i saw ajay running
m= what did u do afterward
k= i ran away
m= no more question
j= mr. Prem plz proceed
p= so ms. kiran u said u ran away form the scene, coorect
k= yes
p= why did u ran
m= oh my god. he is ripping her a part. i have to do someting. objection
j= why
m= relevance
j= what is your argument
p= i am showing the withness character
m= no, u are just confusing her
p= no i am not
m= yes u are
j= shut up u two
j= mr. prem it is right. mukti is right
mukti gives prem an evil smile
prem conitmues with the examination. and the verdict comes againts ajay sinha
prem and mukti meet in the college garden
m= so what did u say. Prem never loses right.
p= uuuuuuuuuuuuu
m= i won and u lost. how sad
p= this is not the end. this is your only victory in this war
m= i will keep winning like this and you are going to lose like this.
p we will se
m= no we won't i already know, i will win
p= i will get
m= i wish u all the best
p= save your wishes you will need later
prem leaves and mukti smiles
scen end


Posted: 17 years ago
I just caught up with the last few parts! You're doing and awesome job and I love the way Sujal didn't take at least a billion years to purpose 😛
Posted: 17 years ago
😃 👏 👏 ..nice part..continue soon
Posted: 17 years ago
thank for all your great comments I wil cont. some time today or tommrow.
Kashish 😃

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