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Posted: 17 years ago
part 3
k=kashish s= sujal v=veena d= doctor sharma n=nurse
in the previous scene veena gets injured so now sujal had brought veena to life car hospital in mumbai. kashish works part time in the hospital.
Sujal parks his car and is taking venna to the hospital
s= mom is it hurting a lot
v= no. u just made a big deal out of it
s= Big Deal! look now much blood is coming out
v= tume bhi na...
Sujal and veena enter the hospital. Veena sit down and sujal goes to the nurse.
s= nurse plz get a doc my mom is injuried
n= ok it will take a minute
s= minute?! i want a doc right now
n= But sir there is not a doc avavlibel
s= then arrange a doc
n= ok
After ten minutes the nurse returns
s= is this a hospital? where the patient dies before the doc comes
n= sorry sir
s= don't sorry. Sorry is not a solution
n= doc Sharma is ready
s= ok
n= sorry sir
Veena and Sujal go to doc cabin
d= what is the matter Mrs. Kandelwal
Veena hestate for a sceond and the says
v= nothing i just of the stair
d= it doesn't look like it. u have a lot of injuries on your face
v= i actually fell on my face
sujal is staring hard at his mom
d= ok, u need to take care
v= yes
d= well i have an emergency case. So my assistant Kashish will babdage u.
v= ok
d= kashish!!!!!!!!!!
Then we see a kashish. Sujal turns atound and looks at her. He is not able to take his eyes off of her
k=yes
d= plz babdage Mrs. kandelwal
k=yes sir
Sujal is still staring at her
scene end

cute_angle92 thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
i accidetal posted on my sister's user id
sorry
kashish805
Surya.Ravi thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
hey ur story is going very nice...it is getting intresting day by day.... 👏
plz continue soon.......... 😃
kashish805 thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sun_423

hey ur story is going very nice...it is getting intresting day by day.... 👏
plz continue soon.......... 😃

Thanks for ur encourgig comments and I may cont. today or tommrow

kashish805 thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
thank u for the encoraging comments
kashish805
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Posted: 17 years ago
part 4
The last scene was about sujal looking at kashish. the setting is still the same
k= how did this happen, madame
v= oh i fell off the stairs.
k= well it looks like you have been hit
veena sort of gets nervous
v= no no nothing like that. iur name is kashish right
k= yes
s= very nice name
he gives one of his dashing smiles
k= thanks
kashish looks as hime weirdly
v= u go 2 college
k= yes, it is my final year
v= u work here
k= yes
v= oh
k=mrs. kandelwal your bandage is done
v= don't call m mrs. kandelwal call me veena aunty
k= ok
v= oh this is my son sujal
kashish gives him a look
k= hi sujal
s= hi
v= thank u. God bless u
k= thank u
v= sujal lets go
sujal is staring at kashish
v= sujal
s= yes mom
v= lets go
sujal and veena leave the hospital and come to the parking lot they sit in the car.
v= kashish was a very nice girl
s= and very pretty
v= what
s= nothng
v= don't hide anythng from me. i know u very well
s= mom
v= u liked her
sujal is blushing at this point 😳
s= how r u feeling
v= don't try to change the subject
s= mom!!!!
veena laughs 😆


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Posted: 17 years ago
finally caught up!!!! wonderful story..and it is progressing really well...keep up the good work 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesum job with the last few parts! Awe...it's really cute 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
dear wah wah wah sujal staring at kashish , kashish giving sujal a wierd look..shooooo sweet......... 😳
ab jaldi se kashish aur sujal ko dubara milwaoo aur unki mulakhaten karwathe raho... 😆
& plz post the next part soon.......... 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
part 5
ok now this scene i only about sujal. It is night time and sujal is in his bedroom. He is sitting on his bed and thinking to himself. he is miling
s= Wow what a girl! Men she is probably the most beautiful girl i have ever seen in my life and will never be able to see again.... Is this love....
Right then Angad enters the room
a= bhaiya pls sign these papers
sujal doesn't reply
a= bhaiya...
sujal still doesn't reply
a= bhaiya!
s= yes
a= are u ok
s= yes
a= ok plz sign these papers
Just then veena enters
a= mom i don't bahiyaa is feeling good
v= i know he is sick
a= what is the illness
v= love 😆
a= bhaiya your in luv
s= where do u want me to sign
v= don't try to change the subject
s= mom i think u should rest or else u will get sick
v= don't worry if i get sivk we will call Kashish okay
sujal just blushes
a= in smell luv in the air
v= me to
sujal blushes
s= mom
and then he leaves his room
a= mom i think he is in luv
v= i know he is i just hope he gets his luv
scene end