@ bidzie :
i'm feeling like saying a ' thank you ' to you too for continuing this OS🤗, i just feel like reading the updates again and again😊..you have written it so well 👏 !! do continue the story, we wont mind if you make a FF out of an OS.. just a small suggestion, keep the plot realistic. what i mean is, take examples from real-life incidents you read in newspapers or see on news channels, ..the way victims and witnesses are harassed and threatened specially if the culprit is an influencial person in the society..i'm sure that would give you enough scope to plan your story as well as to put in a plot where Deenanath tries to harm Mrs. vyas and mohan goes out of his way to help her and both realise that somehow, somewhere they have developed feelings for each other... not an overtly head-over-heels love but a mature treatement to the entire thing. i bet you can do this .👍🏼
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