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LoLo

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Posted: 26 February 2012 at 6:24pm | IP Logged
Very nice.  I read all three chapters in one go.  Can't wait for more.

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Jasleen

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Posted: 26 February 2012 at 6:47pm | IP Logged
Awesome job! I like how Arnav is slowly realizing Khushi is innocent. Can't wait to read more!!!!

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NyamatS

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Posted: 26 February 2012 at 7:31pm | IP Logged
Oh my goodness... you are truely a gifted writer. This material is publishing worthy! Its been sooo long since I've been sucked into a story involuntarily. I would love to read more of your work and any further updates to this one pleeeaaassseee and thanks. Smile

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ddee1001

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Posted: 26 February 2012 at 9:15pm | IP Logged
plzz update soon n pm me!!!!!!

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queenie11

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Posted: 26 February 2012 at 9:20pm | IP Logged
what the?

 where you have been all this time i've been searching for a perfect post-marriage story??

this is perfect

so well written

i can't believe i haven't read more of your work 

look forward to reading more of this!

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queenie11

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Posted: 26 February 2012 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
i just read all three parts now - 

please write a fourth!

you are so talented at writing asr's point of view. really one of the best takes on his realization i've read or come across. 

you're so talented! i really hope you continue writing more of this, his realization, his conversation with khushi, the little details that render this story so precious. 

i love how arnav knew those little things about khushi and couldnt figure out why shyam didn't know them. i love how you explained the recliner/bed situation. i loved how you showed asr realizing in his dream and putting the pieces together. i loved how you showed how arnav and khushi fought without actually writing one of them. 

i really hope you take this one step further and write khushi and his confrontation, and show khushi trusting him enough to tell him the truth. 

i love the angsty tone of this story 

in case you haven't realized, i've become a die hard fan of your writing with this one story - i'm off to read the rest of your work

thank you for sharing this piece with us and i hope there's more to come!

<3 queenie

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Nikita99

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Posted: 26 February 2012 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
Hey Asma, I think all three parts for awsome. Thank you for taking us back down to the memory lane. As I always say you truly know Arnav. You know his each thought, his pain, his jealousy and also that immense love he has for Khushi. And today when I was reading your OS I noticed you have talent of a script writer.
My favourite scene was the anklet sceneSmile. It brought back so many good memories of their love Day Dreaming.
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san2346

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Posted: 26 February 2012 at 10:00pm | IP Logged
loved ur writing skill...its beautiful...keep writing...and continue...

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