i just read all three parts now -
please write a fourth!
you are so talented at writing asr's point of view. really one of the best takes on his realization i've read or come across.
you're so talented! i really hope you continue writing more of this, his realization, his conversation with khushi, the little details that render this story so precious.
i love how arnav knew those little things about khushi and couldnt figure out why shyam didn't know them. i love how you explained the recliner/bed situation. i loved how you showed asr realizing in his dream and putting the pieces together. i loved how you showed how arnav and khushi fought without actually writing one of them.
i really hope you take this one step further and write khushi and his confrontation, and show khushi trusting him enough to tell him the truth.
i love the angsty tone of this story
in case you haven't realized, i've become a die hard fan of your writing with this one story - i'm off to read the rest of your work
thank you for sharing this piece with us and i hope there's more to come!