ArShi FF- Epilogue: The Farewell...updt pg12 & VM - Page 5

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AAAh ... gut wrenching .. I want this to happen .. I want her to walk away from him / them .. I want them to suffer as she has / will :'(  .. Loved it .. do you plan to continue ?? 

OMG !! this is full of pain and perfectly her cfondition now. I really request you to write more but please don't make Khushi to stop for him. Let her go, make her strong for next phrase of her life. Let him suffer for at least for a month before he finds her.

I hope same concept falls in real story, after their divorce and  separation, I want to see strong Khushi with nothing to look back and just moving on with life.

Arnav should see  Khushi with no more love in her eyes for him, not willing to accept his apologies, not ready to tolerate any more humiliation or nonsense from anyone and most important not ready to accept him in her life. She wants to leave her alone whatever conditions she has now. She has learned how to be live in dark, how to handle agony, how to suffer alone, how to be herself. 

nicely written

Pls continue. That was so touching . pls add me to ur pm list 

u made me cry...i really felt her pain..beautiful writing.👏

I cant see anythng .. i just read the first one and it was awesomee .. bt cnt read the oders .. do help me plzzz!! 

That was sad...but continue and make it happy ending:-))

Cnt see nythng .. plzz help !! 

brilliantly done Noorie...and it should be like that...why expect khushi to forgive and forget...she is a human after all. You potrayed everyones guilt and emotions very beautifully. Well done!!!