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Posted: 20 February 2012 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
Writers, writers, writers!

Why is is that for every dozen things you do superbly...you murder some basics? One of the hall marks of your writing, that I have enjoyed, has been how you build your characters and the relationships between them...of course I will ignore the aberration called "Pig-headed Aditya" and his never-ending "Mara Dads Bhagwans Se" rant! Ermm

Can you please stop showing Uttara comparing what Brahma did to Devyani with her own sense of betrayal...there is absolutely no comparison at all. Stern Smile D'oh Thumbs Down Unhappy Disapprove Ermm Brahma psychologically and verbally abused Devyani for decades. In contrast, he merely cheated Uttara in an affair she went in to eyes wide open! Stern Smile Do not destroy what has been, for most part, engaging and compelling writing by ignoring this.

Yours,

A loyal viewer who also happens to Heart your creation SJ!  Embarrassed LOL

PS: I would not mind a side character called Basanti in Maryaada to add some tadka to the Shubu - Devyani prem kahaani! Blushing


Edited by BheegiBasanti - 20 February 2012 at 2:26pm

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Posted: 20 February 2012 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
Jaya ...  Shocked  besharam, and i thought it was Rits who had no shame  LOL

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Posted: 20 February 2012 at 4:16pm | IP Logged
Jaya...Big smile  Amen to having a Basanti character in Maryada...Thumbs Up... I for one would like to see how someone like SJ is attracted to Devyani...Nothing against Devyani per say...I know he is impressed with her transformation into being a strong person to stand upto Brahma...but still they need to show what makes his eyes lit up and sparks fly when he thinks about Dev when he self admittedly questioned himself today... 

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Posted: 21 February 2012 at 6:48am | IP Logged
Even I wentWackoConfusedShocked 'when she said I can't believe the man who made our life hell just gone away from our life'. Then I thought probably she was missing himLOLLOL but didn't have the guts to say so hence the cover up lineLOLLOL
 
 

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Posted: 21 February 2012 at 8:03am | IP Logged

This show is definetely getting a little dull now...Whats happening with priya and aditya's characters... there seems no progress at all... when will they patch up... vidya seems to be just clinging to the family with no purpose... everything seems sooo confused...

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Posted: 21 February 2012 at 8:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by FIZK6

Jaya ...  Shocked  besharam, and i thought it was Rits who had no shame  LOL


Jab pyaar kiya to darna kya! Blushing

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Posted: 21 February 2012 at 8:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by my_view

Jaya...Big smile  Amen to having a Basanti character in Maryada...Thumbs Up... I for one would like to see how someone like SJ is attracted to Devyani...Nothing against Devyani per say...I know he is impressed with her transformation into being a strong person to stand upto Brahma...but still they need to show what makes his eyes lit up and sparks fly when he thinks about Dev when he self admittedly questioned himself today... 


Thank you ji Ravina! LOL SJ seems like the kind of person who is attracted to women with strong core...he admires that about her. He sees what others do not see about her...the fun woman who has ignored herself for decades for the sake of her family.

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