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Posted: 22 February 2012 at 5:53am | IP Logged
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Kiran Hug...kya suspense hai yaar ...so kesar is the prince charming who lived some thousand years ago Embarrassed...n yeh Ashu sir koun hai Confused...n aisa kya hua ki kesar ki dad n kesar n his sis r missing from the day they left n they never returned back...ab yeh necklace ki story kya hai...koi ladki nahi chushakthi...now me biting my nails...so mere nails pe tharas khaao n jaldi se jaldi se jaldi se next chapter update kar Day Dreaming

 
Ramya Hug thank u so much dear for liking the SS, yeh ashu sir museum k curator hen bas LOL woh sab toh mystery hai dear, it vl be revealed soon Big smile hehe ramya nails mat bite kar yaar, vl update soon n sab mystery vl slowly be revealed Wink


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 My pyari si garmiyon ki muskuruti,sardiyon mein mundi ankhiyon par padti,barish mein badlon se athkheliyan karti aur basant mein phoolon par khilkhilati, sharad mein os ki boondon par padti..In short apni satrangi rangon se dilon ko gudgudati sunehri Kiran. Oye bada interesting chappi hai yara..Day Dreaming.Hmmm to gullu pahunch gayi apne pyaar k paas aur ye ashu sir kaun hai aur unka betaConfusedOye lubbed the history...Awwwieee to humra kesu hazaron saal purana kesriya prince haiEmbarrassedAwwwieee and wo haar yeay Gullu wo haar tera hi hai ja le leBlushing

Kiruuu jaldi updatewa la muahhhHug

 
meri Piyu mhaari o piyaari Hug thanku so much dear for liking the chapter, gullu apne pyar k paas kahan puhanchi abhi LOL ashu sir is museum's curator n un ka beta is un ka beta hahahaha LOL haan kesu is kesariya prince *dreamy* Day Dreaming hehehe gullu ne chua toh kya hoga Shocked LOL vl soon update Big smile

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Originally posted by kalika.j

@Kiran,


 
 
 
Awww this is so sweet Kalika, thank u so so much Hug thank u from gulaal's side too Wink Big smile loved these necklaces Big smile

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kiranwaaa...Hug keithwaaa Hug
yaar...superb ss re...Embarrassed thanku so much dear Big smile
likhti ja likhti ja...i lubb it...
suspense pe suspense...yay...muaahhh... muahhh muahhh keithu Big smile

but ye ashutosh ka puttar kaun hoing...Ouch
me loved the history...Smile thanku dear n ashu ka putar us ka putar hoing LOL
kesar prince nikla... yeayyy n i love this emoticon yaar its sho cute Big smile
yaar..saare mysteries jaldi khol...next chappi laa...Big smile
me waiting...
take care dearwa...luv u...Embarrassed u too take care dear love u muah n vl update soon Big smile

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(Poster By Meri pyari... Piyu Mhaari Hug)
 

 

 

(Poster By Me... Kiran Smile)

 

 

 

Chapter 3

 

 

In a huge mansion far away from the busy life of the city, a person was standing in front of a huge photo frame placed on the wall, his piercing eyes were continuously staring at the picture. Slowly he went closer to it n placed his hand gently on the picture n closed his eyes.

 

 

*Flashback*

 
 

"Pandit ji kya baat hai? Aisa kya dekh rahay hen aap mere bhavishye men?"Pandit : "Raj kumaar, hum aap k bhavishye men woh dekh rahay hen jo aap ko kabhi kisi ne bataya nahi hoga"

 

"Per kya pandit ji? Aisi bhi kya baat hai?"

 

Pandit: "Yeh haar raaj kumaar, yeh haar, is haar ko hum aaj se hazaaron saal baad bhi dekh saktay hen, hazaron saal baad bhi ap k raaj ka yeh haar aisa hi surakshit rahega, aur….."

 

"Aur kya pandit ji batayiye na, ap jaisa vidwaan agar koi baat keh raha hai toh us men kuch sachai hi hogi, hum yeh sun k bohot khush hen, ap ki jotish vidya ne toh aaj se hazaron saal baad bhi dekh liya, lekin….. yeh haar? Hamara matlab hai yeh haar ap wahan kahan dekh sak rahay hen?"

 

Pandit: "Raaj kumaar hamen keval yeh haar nahi dikh raha, hamen who larki bhi dikhayi de rahi hai jo is haar ki maalik hogi"

 

"PANDIT JI !!! Aap jantay hen yeh haar hamari maa ka hai aur hamen pasand nahi k isay koi aur chuay aur itne saalon baad koi larki? Nahi, hum jaantay hen us waqt hum nahi honge lekin tab bhi hum yeh bardasht nahi karenge k yeh haar koi istemal kare !!! Bas ab ap ja saktay hen"

 

*Flashback ends*

 

 

The person opened his eyes n stared again at the picture:

 

"Kab aogi tum? Hazaaron saal maine tumhara intezaar kiya hai aur aaj bhi yeh intezaar baaqi hai…. Shayad…. Per jaane kyun aisa lagta hai jesay mera intezaar jald hi khatam hoga….."

 

There was a knock at the door n he quickly went outside that small room n stepped into his large room to open the door of his room.

 

"Kya baat hai?"

 

"Aap ko bahar bulaya gaya hai, durgesh ji ap ko bula rahay hen"

 

"Theek hai, main aata hoon"

 

After some time, in a large dining room, it seemed like a meeting of some sort was going on.

 

"Aao Kesar aao" durgesh smiled while staring at him with his deep black eyes, his face a bit dark as his chair was placed far from light as he didn't like to be under the sun or light. He was the head of the clan.

 

Kesar: "aap ne mujhay kyun…"

 

Durgesh: "Hum jaantay thay tum yehi sawaal pucho ge hum se" then he continued with a stern face, "Phir waheen thay na tum, usi tasveer k agay apna qeemti waqt barbaad kartay huay kharay thay !!"

 

"Maine pehle bhi kaha hai, us k baray men main aik shabd nahi sunoon ga !!"

 

Durgesh: "Bas !!! hum tum se behas nahi karna chahte !! tumhe samjha samjha k hum thak chukay hen, is pagal pan ka kya anjaam hoga kya tum jaantay nahi !! tum bhool chukay ho k tum akhir ho kya? Aik insaan k peechay bhaagna aur paglon ki tarah us ka intezaar karna !!! Kya yeh hamen shobha deta hai !!!"

 

"Mujhay yeh sab nahi pata, aur na main yeh sab kuch sunna chahta hoon, ap mujhay hazaar baar samjha chukay lekin main bhi ap ko samjha chuka hoon, woh mera pyaar hai, hamare pushtaini haar ki maalkin hai woh, hazaaron saal us ka intezaar kiya hai main ne aur agay bhi karoon ga, woh aik din zaroor ayegi"

 

Durgesh: "Tum bhool gaye ho kesar k woh insaan hogi lekin tum….. kya ho tum? Hum kya hen? Insaano k bhesh men khoon peenay walay darinday !!"

 

There was silence in the room, kesar was also silent now.

 

Durgesh: "Raaj kumaar kesar….. aik khooni darinda hai, yeh sachai batao ge tum usay? Kya karay gi woh yeh jaan kar? Tumhe galay laga k apni maut ko galay laga legi? Nahi !!! woh apne hi jese insaanon ko hamari sachai bata degi aur phir hum sab khatam ho jayen ge !!! Itne saalon humne kya kuch nahi seekha in insaanon k saath guzara karne k liye…. Insaanon ki is dunya men hum apni pehchaan chupa k ghoomte hen, woh tumhen qubool karlegi is sab k saath? Kabhi nahi !!! aur aik jotish ki baat sun k tumhen lagta hai k koi aisi larki ayegi, hahahaha bakwaas hai yeh sab !!! hum nahi maantay is sab ko !!!"

 

"Aap k mannay ya na mannay se sachai nahi badlegi !!!"

 

Durgesh: "Aur na tumharay mannay ya mannay se yeh sachai badlegi k hum insaan nahi, vampires hen !!! Jinhe Pishaaj bhi kaha jata hai, jo insaano k khoon pe zinda rehtay hen !! Hum jaanwaron k khoon se apni taakat letay hen lekin sachai toh yeh hai k agar kisi ne hamari dunya men anay ya isay barbaad karne ki koshish ki toh hum usay maarne se bhi peechay nahi haten ge !!! Kisi ko bhi nahi !!!"

 

There was fear n anger in kesar's eyes. He angrily turned n left the room.

 

A girl stood up being all worried n was about to follow kesar when durgesh's voice echoed in the room.

 

"Talli !!!"

 

Talli was very scared n stood right then n there.

 

Durgesh: "Hamari meeting khatam nahi hui hai jo tum uth k us k peechay jao !!! beth jao !!!"

 

Talli quietly sat again on her seat while being very worried for kesar inside her heart.

 

In Kesar's Room:

 

"Talli jao yahan se, main ne kitni baar kaha hai mujhay kuch samjhanay ki zaroorat nahi hai"

 

Talli: "Kesar akhir tum kyun nahi samajhna chahtay, hum un jese nahi kesar, hum is baray men kuch nahi kar saktay, hamen koi haq nahi k hum insaanon ki zindagi barbaad karein"

 

"Koi haq nahi? Haan hamen zindagi barbaad karne ka haq nahi lekin pyar karne ka haq toh hai, kya hum kisi se pyar bhi nahi kar saktay !!"

 

Talli: "Nahi kar saktay !!!"

 

Kesar looked at him shocked.

 

Talli: "Tum jantay nahi ho kya k is sab ka result kya hoga? Maar dalen ge sab us ko, tum chahte ho k woh mar jaaye? Kesar woh apni dunya men khush hogi, tum kyun us ki zindagi men aa kar usay maut ka tohfa dena chahtay ho, kyun kesar kyun? Hum un jese nahi hen kesar, un ki aur hamari dunya men farq hai, bohot farq !!! apne bharam ko tor do kesar, apne khayalon ki dunya se bahar ao !!! apni asliyat dekho kesar k tum kya ho !!! us insaan ko maut k hawalay mat karo kesar, usay zindagi k bajaye maut mat do !!!"

 

With this talli left his room while kesar stood there feeling his urge to be able to cry but he was not able to do it. His heart was filled with pain n anguish n he felt like being burnt on a pyre. He quietly stepped inside his small room n looked at the portrait one final time for a very long time. Then finally stepped outside the room n locked it n kept the key inside a box n put it in his almirah n locked it.

 

"Shayad sab sahi kehtay hen, meri aur tumhari dunya itni alag hai, mujhay koi haq nahi puhanchta k tumhari khushiyan jala k un pe maut ka saaya lehra doon, nahi main aisa nahi kar sakta, tumharay liye poori dunya se lar sakta hoon main toh kya tumhari zindagi k liye khud se nahi lar sakta?" He closed his golden eyes (golden as his need for blood was fulfilled) "Maar dunga apne pyaar ko, khatam kar doonga, khud ko hi….. tumhe bachanay k liye mujhay hamesha k liye khatam hona hoga……. Hona hoga…. Warna mera yeh dil mujhay phir tumhari aor kheenchay ga aur ab main yeh nahi hone doon ga" n he finally opened his eyes n there was a very determined look in them.

 

 

Hey guys so here is the third chapter of the SS, hope u guys like it Smile

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KiranHugCry main res karke bhaag gayi na.I honestly thought I had updated my comment yaar.main confusiya gayi thi.

First of all awesome posters.Piu,that one was lovely with Kesar looking like a Prince,a rakish Prince if I may say so(my fav kind)Embarrassed

Kiran,your poster was so menacing yaar.How did you get that effect.that was brilliantClap

now coming on to the chapter Duggu is the head of the clan.oh ya he can be quite menacing when he wants to be na and Kesar is slowly starting to revolt hmmm I am loving it.arre yaar yeh Talli billi Vampini banke yahaan bhi ghus gayi.matlab marne ke baad bhi Kesar ko nahi chodaLOL
seriously I did not mind her here. she looks to be a positive character to me,let's see if I change my opinion in the coming chapters.oh so a prediction was already made by the Pandit about the necklace and it's ownerEmbarrassedThis is getting very interesting.ab bas jaldi se mila de in dono ko.awww Kesar don't be so sad and don't lose hope so soon. love will overcome all obstacles, haven't you read Breaking DawnLOL
The dialogues were brilliant as usual but that is your trademark naClap
I am really curious to know how the love story between a human and a vampire will progress in your story so please update soonSmile


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Kiran Hug...yeh le ek bhadaa sa jhappi for the prince kesar official entry...

Flashback...kesar never want that his mom's necklace to be wore by any one though it is after some thousand years...he can't even listen those words...but what happened after this incident that he started accepting that the necklace is hers n started loving her n from that day he is waiting for her...n what's there in that photo he is looking Confused...does it have the picture of that lady for whom he is waiting for these many years...how n why did he become this vampire n what abt his sis...ithne saare questions...u need to update it soon dear...
Coming to duggu n kesar convo...duggu is correct that what ever kesar is doing is a threat for their existence...but for kesar its always abt the lady he is waiting...bhaad mein jhaayein saari duniya...talli aur vampire LOL...ha ha...just imagine that bandariya with her bhattisi as a vampire...
Talli is correct when she talk to kesar abt the complexity n the problems that he will create for her...n ofcourse the truth that how can she accept him after knowing his truth...
Kesar...me feeling bad for him now...he can't make her life a mess but how can he can't love her...love of thousand years..how can he stop himself...so for her he wants to kill himself...me loving this vampire kesar...

Kiran...wonderful chapter...so looks like talli will be the only support for him when all vampires will be against them...looks like he will pretend that he hates that girl when he realizes that she is the one for whom he is waiting these many years...update the next one soonnn...



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N eee guys heres one more poster for u all made by me mummyyy me posting this n bhaaging from here for the time being because i know mojris n chappals n shoes n tomatoes r coming after me, bachaooo oh but first here the poster LOL
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
now i should run from here, helppp helppp bachaooo Shocked
 
 

I love this poster Embarrassed

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