Mr & Mrs Raizada first night conversation...out.VM - Page 2

Originally posted by: Leah1

Good job, Priya!! and I so want a confrontation like this between Arnav and Khushi!!!

 

My advice: Keep writing, the novice writer will soon be one of the best OS writers of the IF!!!

 

 

Originally posted by: sripriyan

good one dear...but honestly..i dont want their conversation to b like this...

Originally posted by: himabindu05

😊😊😊Love you🤗

I so want a conversation like this...u  really know what I want Priya!thanx for this gift!

Believe me I really want Khushi to say this U.saw what u wanted to see U heard what u wanted to hear..that's wat happened...the cynic in him got the better of him..he always wanted that cynic to win...he had a relationship with that bitterness for so long that he turned the blind eye to his love!

u have caught the pain in khushis heart soo aptly...loved the way u have put it...why don't the cvs start showing some  such meaningful talk between them?😕 

Loved the part where u have said about the twinkling stars..and how they should bless them...Khushi believes so much in those stars!i really hope they show that scene😳

Keep doing more of OS...u have the right imagination and emotion to do it!

 

Originally posted by: shwetachauhan

beautifully written dearie!!! a very likely conversation!! sooner or later!! tempered with those awesome expressions and stances!!! 😃 the loveliest part was the twinkling stars!! oh yesss!! they are there, looking over their beloved children and smiling at them, blessing them!! knowing this was meant to be!!! and also knowing the love in their hearts will overshadow and overcome all else!! its just a matter of time!! 😍

a beautiful, touching VM once again you novice writer and VM maker!!! loved the dil bebasi mein chupke se rota hai part!! 😭
novice! ha! you know very well how good you are!!! 🤗