OS: Breakeven - Page 4

loved it dear amazing OS 

arnav's emotions beautifully potrayed😃

now havent i said this before that im the cute lil innocent sadist..
if only i had not being sufferin from another jet lag...i could've placed my timin right..
so basically she left him...ohkay.....thus once again she left him...n now he's in gloom coz she left him...
WOW!!!!...i hope she had right him first...leaving the guy *ahem* is not exceptable in our pure virginal beyhooda culture...

sorry...i did mention a jet lag.....alas!!! i hardly remember where i was...but its night where i am...

it was elemental...edgy...quite to the fact that Arnav had let his weakness of mistrust be the murderer of his happiness...
his impotency of givin Khushi a chance...
not holdin a pregnant pause to hear her out...
thus losing alll for ever n beyond...
well done...

n im happy u r not continuing it...or else wat all ive written wud go to Hades...
Edited by 18shabbo - 12 years ago

very well written. Enjoyed reading.

This content was originally posted by: 18shabbo

now havent i said this before that im the cute lil innocent sadist..
if only i had not being sufferin from another jet lag...i could've placed my timin right..
so basically she left him...ohkay.....thus once again she left him...n now he's in gloom coz she left him...
WOW!!!!...i hope she had right him first...leaving the guy *ahem* is not exceptable in our pure virginal beyhooda culture...[

sorry...i did mention a jet lag..[...alas!!! i hardly remember where i was...but its night where i am...[

it was elemental...edgy...quite to the fact that Arnav had let his weakness of mistrust be the murderer of his happiness...[
his impotency of givin Khushi a chance...[
not holdin a pregnant pause to hear her out...[
thus losing alll for ever n beyond...[
well done...

n im happy u r not continuing it...or else wat all ive written wud go to hades...[

I was metally replying to your comment as I was reading it but my mind just went blank when I saw your siggy. I LOVE it woman! Did you make it ?? It's BEAUTIFUL!! :D

ok i loved this

This content was originally posted by: reyabear

I was metally replying to your comment as I was reading it but my mind just went blank when I saw your siggy. I LOVE it woman! Did you make it ?? It's BEAUTIFUL!! :D

ahuum ahummm...YES Ma'am that is but alas!!! my conjured up futile imagination...im humbled..

That was sooo awsme.
So heartpaining nd emotional.
Want arnav to feel 4 his action like ths.

Shrey!! You are again back to form??? 😡
But I loved it!! Though hurting, glad I didn't cry!!

I'm not asking for continuation, this will be best remembered if this has this ending!! 😉
If you write it, I'll not say a NO to read it! I'll be happy as always as I love happy endings😃

Thanks for the PM dear!

love angst and this hit the right spot. brilliant