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Fan Fiction Anyone? (Page 4)

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Posted: 08 November 2004 at 6:49am | IP Logged
Clapwell done Kk....a good extention I'd say.....Clap

I have a question about the clinic part......r u by any chance using it in the story for ADVERTISMENT purposesLOLLOLLOL

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Posted: 08 November 2004 at 8:22am | IP Logged
Thanks ides.Big smile I really had thought 4 2 hrs before writing the continuation. And 4 the clinic part, I think the hospital is much famous and there is no need for advertisement on its part. Billu's entry in the hospital was a surprise to ALL! And Such surprises can be expected in my updates on " Jaasii Jaissi Kick boxer Nahin" !!.Wink
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Posted: 08 November 2004 at 9:36am | IP Logged

            ' Yeh mujhe kya hota jaa raha hai? Mere upar Jassi itni hawi kaise hoti jaa rahi hai?Kyonnnnnn????? Damn!! I hate Jassi.Usne mera phone kata kaise?'Armaan is stunned and still holding the phone,grumbling to himself. Yet he can't think of anything else other than Jassi.

          Then he flashbacks to the Purab-Meenakshi scene.All of a sudden,a sadness grips him.No matter how much he tries,he can't shake off Jassi's fallen face from his mind."Nahi,mujhe Jassi par aise gussa nahi hona chahiye.'

         'Yeh to saaf hai ki Purab ne Jassi ko Meenakshi ke baare mei kuch nahi bataaya.Akhir kyon??? Koi to baat hai.'

         He picks up the phone and dials Raj.

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       At Billu's place,Bebe and Amrit are hovering over Billu.Billu says'Ab zara tabiyat theek lag rahi hai.Ab Jassi ko jaldi se training deni padegiMeri queen Victoria kisi se haarni nahi chahiye.'

        'Nahi haaregi Billu.Tere hote hue Jassi kabhi nahi haaregi.' says Bebe.

         'Waise Bebe,aaj hum jis doctor ke paas gaye the,kitni sundar thi.Soch raha tha agar aap jaake meri aur uski shadi ki baat karte.......'

         'Oye chup kar!Meri Jassi mushkil me hai aur tu apni shadi ke sapne dekh raha hai'

         'Uncleji mai to bas.....'

        "Chuppppppp. Ek baat aage bola to kaan kinch ke tujhe lamba kar dunga!!'

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        Raj is shown standing with Armaan.

       "Mujhe to vishwas nahi ho raha tu kisi ek ladki ke peeche itna soch sakta hai.Wo bhi Jassi?Armaan,tu theek to hai???"

      "Bakwaas mat kar Raj.Main Jassi ke baare mei nahi,Gulmohar ke baare me soch raha hun.Agar Jassi pareshaan rahi to Gulmohar ka kaam bhugtega."

       "Baat to tu sahi kah raha hai.Par Armaan tu sabko bewakuf banaa sakta hai.Khud ko bhi.Par mujhe nahi.TU is wakt sirf Jassi ke baare mei soch raha hai.Aur phir is baat ko maan lene me harz hi kya hai.Kahin tujhe Jassi madam se ishq vishq to nahi ho gaya.Humn...to tujhe Jassi se ishq hone laga hai...."

      ( Pari is shown to be listening behind the door with her stupid shocked expression.She hears a sound and leaves.) 

      Armaan turns away from Raj and gives a forced laugh. "Tu paagal ho gaya hai?Main aur pyar,woh bhi Jassi se?"But his voice lacks conviction and his face looks bleak."Nahi,aisa kabhi nahi ho sakta.Main to sirf Jassi ko kush dekna chahta hun aur saath mei Gulmohar ka faayeda bhi.Kick boxing ka idea waise bura nahi tha.."

      Jassi enters at this point.

      "Armaan sir,kal ki baat ke liye main sharminda hun.Purab ne mujhe andhere mein rakkha.Aur main use apna dost maanti thi.Mere saath hi aisa kyon hota hai?Mai jispe vishwas karti hun wo mujhe dhoka deta hai.Mera faida uhane ki koshish karta hai."

       " Han Jassi,shayad maine bhi bohot baar tumhara di dukhaya hai.Par tum chinta nahi karo.Hum Meenakshi ka koi na koi hal to zaroor nikalenge."

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       Pari rushes to Mallika.

       "Mallika,gazab ho gaya.Tum ab Armaan ko sachmuch kho dogi."

       "Kya bakwaas kar rahi ho?Saaf saaf kaho"

       "Maine Raj ko Armaan se kehte suna ki use us Chashmish chuhiya se ishq ho gaya hai."

       "Kise,Raj ko?'

      "Naaaahi,Armaan ko"

      "Kya?"

      Mallika starts pacing."Main us Jassi ko barbaad kar dungi".She storms out of the room,followed by a dumbstuck Pari.

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     Meanwhile,Purab is sitting in the car with Meenakshi.

       "Meenakshi,tum kabhi kabhi zaroorat se jyada bolti ho."

       "Tum bhool rahe ho Purab.iski shuruwat tumne ki hai.Jassi ko tum phasana chahte ho,mai nahi.Gulmohar mujhe nahi,tumhe haasil karna hai."

       " Philhaal main sirf itna chahta hun ki Jassi mujhse pyaar karne lage aur Armaan ka bhoot uske sar se uttar jaye.Warna Gulmohar kabhi mere haath nahi aayega.Wo aur uske Armaan sir ne mere poore mansoobe par paani pher diya.Kohinoor ki sacchayi ka bhi nahi pataa chal rahi.Khabar to galat nahi ho sakti.Par agar Jassi Armaan ko bhulegi nahi to na Gulmohar aur na hi Kohinoor mere hisse mei aayegi!"

      Meenakshi looks at him and says," Purab,kabhi buisness ke alaawa insaano ke baare mei soch liya karo."

      "Tumhare muh se aisi baaten achchi nahi lagti Meenakshi.Tumhe paise chahiye,tumhe mil jayenge.Apni nasihat kisi aur ke liye sambhal ke rakho.Ab utro."

       Meenakshi gets down.Purab drives away.

      The camera pans on Meenakshi's face."Mujhe paisa nahi,Tum chahiye Purab.Aur jis khel ki shuruwat tumne ki,usko anjam to mai hi dungi.Tumhe to mera hona hi parega,Purab Mehra."

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       Jassi comes out of Armaan's office and comes face to face with Mallika.

       "Main tumhari chalon ko samajhne lagi hun Jassi.Tum sidhi sadi nahi ho,ye to main jaanti thi.Par tumhari nazar mere Armaan par hogi ye maine nahi socha tha" Mallika'voice spews venom.

      "Mallika,ye in raiiszado ko phasati kaise hai,pucho to?"Pari butts in maliciously. "Shayad isne koi training li hai Mallika.Phele Purab Mehra,ab Armaan."

      Jassi looks at them bewildered."ye aap  kasi baanten kar rahi hain?"

       "Bano mat Jassi.Tumhara khel to main khatam koroongi.Phir Armaan to kya,Gulmohar ka koi bhi tumhare naam se katrayega."

       "Main nahi jaanti aapke deemag me kaun sa fitur chal raha hai.Par ek baat yaad rakhiyega.Ab jo koi bhi mujhe kamzor samajh kar mujhe takleef pohuchane ki koshish karega,use main nahi choringi. Chahe phir wo aap hi kyon na ho."

        "Main tumhe Armaan ke paas phatakne bhi nahi doongi."

         Comprehension draws on Jassi.

         "Aap Armaan sir ko zanjeero mei baandh ke rakhengi?Pyar zabardasti se nahi haasil hota.Aap ko jo karna ho kariye.Mujhe koi farak nahi parta.Han,in sabme agar kisi ka nuksaan ho sakta hai,to wo sirf aap hai Mallika."

        She leaves.Mallika and Pari stare on after her,stunned.   

    

                         



Edited by Minnie - 08 November 2004 at 9:53am
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Posted: 08 November 2004 at 10:15am | IP Logged

Jassi is shocked at seeing  Mallika and Pari's odd talks!! She thinks to herself tht " Lagta hai agli mallika , armaan sir ki sagaai ke pehle, Mallika maam ko " KA Hospital mein le jana padega!!!, Un hone  Papaji ka achcchca illaz, nandu ne kya socha hoga, nandu hi jane!!"

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There she finds the - Kafikafu kungfu classes! Curious Jassi Goes in to see if there cud be any help! The doors were closed. As jassi aproaches.., The doors flung open with a chinese cum Japanese man coming out with a  thinny man and throws him in the near garden. Tht tingy man  runs away saying "Thank GOd, Thank God" Jassi is surpriseed. Now tht weird man asks something " Chuchi jassi kaernasm armaan jduufguiegfiwgfu Purab vguifgi;ugiu Nandu hfoihfoh hfowhfh !!!!!!!!!!" Jassi Tries to remember her 9 th std chp on chinese language. But she cant!! She is worried as to wht he said!! Jassi nods her head assuming, the question to be" R u Jassi?" . seeing this.. Tht weird man, calls 4 some ladies.  Jassi is nervous as to wht she said!

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Next cut to Purab, Remembering  Meenakshi's words -"," Purab,kabhi buisness ke alaawa insaano ke baare mei soch liya karo."-. He is deep thinking. He really finds JAssi jealous of meenalshi. He laughs. He then realises tht Jassi is the only thing he has been thinking since meenakshi left!!!! He is surprised at himself!! He realises tht he is really in love with JASSI. He then gets a phone call from -------------( stranger not known to u ) !! The expressions onhis face are suddenly changed to worry!! He say " KYA!!!"

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Armaan is confused as to wht raj said. HE is wondering if he really loves Jassi. He is not sure. He thinks Raj has gone nuts.  He is wondering if he cud get  a better deal! Mallika enters. She says" Fiannaally armaan, kya mein tumhare cabin ke phone se phone kar sakti hoon, Kya tumhara phone ke saath akele baatein khatam ho gayi hai?" . Armaan is suddenly out of his thoughts. He replies " Jassi"! Mallika is stunned. She too thinks Pari was right!!

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Atlast nandan verma goes to the hospital to meet the two gracious, beautiful, talented , lovely, intelligent , matured, DOCS!  He goes in, But the  gaurd shoos him away. He decides to go throughthe pipeline, nut he falls. HE atlast gets in. But unfortunatelly ( Fortunatre for DOCS ) he lands in the operation theater. There he is given medicine - " COME TO REALITY " ! NAndan verma realises tht he is a big person and promises never to go to the hospital to meet the docs again. He realises tht he is a lover boy, and.. now he has back his memory. He decides to help jassi first, then get pari in the house o f his.

 



Edited by KK_lassi - 08 November 2004 at 10:26am
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Posted: 08 November 2004 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Nice twists and turns KK and Minnie.LOL
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Posted: 08 November 2004 at 10:49am | IP Logged
ClapClapClapvery nice Minnie......ur addition sure gives a great picture of Gulmohar that was missing from the earlier posts.......hmmmm....I can see sare armaan baahar aarahe hain......LOLLOL....too bad u cant get T&D to follow through with ur story....

Kk....once again great stuffClapClap......luv how u turned the story back againLOL....also with the amount of mention of the hospital in ur narration, I think the title of the thread will soon shift to "IS HOSPITAL JAISA KOI AUR NAHEEN"WinkWink
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Posted: 08 November 2004 at 11:40am | IP Logged

 NAndan verma realises tht he is a big person and promises never to go to the hospital to meet the docs again. He realises tht he is a lover boy, and.. now he has back his memory. He decides to help jassi first, then get pari in the house o f his.

         KK,the docs are having a nightmare at the prospect of having Nandu as a potential suitor!!!!!!!!!!!LOLLOL

 

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Posted: 08 November 2004 at 8:37pm | IP Logged

It WAS a night mare minnie, we r docs of Purab and everything of his. We have no idea of Nandu and his virus. To be on the safer side. Now nandu will never think of the docs again.If he does i have something more........Wink

Thx ides, MinnieBig smile

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