wow powerful stuff Navin... very very moving... i mean to describe a mans innermost feelings which he himself is unconscious off and to do it so well.. really a great piece of writing... i love the way you described the way he was having trouble functioning normally like he could not read etc .. this is one poignant way of saying without really saying it... the images are still resonating in my mind.
my favorite chapter so far.. i will prob eat my words as you continue coz i really love your writing
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