The Search Is Over-kriyaansh (ss)-discontinued

Posted: 12 years ago




hey frnds thought of writing an ff ...am new to indiaforums...hope u lik my ff
 INTRODUCTION:
 Reeyansh singhania:he is a cool dude..the casinova...all gals r lattu ova him..he is a rich kid..bt vry good at heart..he gives imp to his frnds n family..in one word he is a "GOOD BOY"πŸ˜†πŸ˜†..he lik hanging out with frnds alot!!!he is an awsum dancer!!

Kriya ghai:
.Kria is sweet small town girl who is defined by her love for dance..she is a very nice girls ...she always wants everyone surronding her shuld be happy..she has two dreams one is dance n the other her love of her life..she wnted to fullfill them at any cost.
NOTE:Ther r many characters ...each n every one will be introduced during the situation

INDEX:
The whole story revolves around kriyaansh how they meet n hw they fall in love with each other...is reeyansh the one who kriya dreamed abt??will dance bring them close??
To knw all ans fr these que stay tuned😊😊😊...

hey frnds this is my first ff plz let me knw whether i shud conti or not...
If wnt PM then lik the post n add me to ur buddy list😊


CHAPTER :1:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2782938?pn=2
CHAPTER:2:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2782938?pn=4
CHAPTER:3:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2782938?pn=7
chapter:4:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2782938?pn=13
chap 5:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2782938?pn=15
chap 6:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2782938?pn=18
chap 7:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2782938?pn=22
chap 8:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2782938?pn=26
chap 9:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2782938?pn=32
chap 10:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2782938?pn=35
Edited by kriyaansh_07 - 10 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
ofcourse u shld continue...n plzzz pm me wen u update i sent u a buddy request...
Posted: 12 years ago
hey continue its good. pm me when u update
Posted: 12 years ago
of course continue loves your concept plz pm me when u update i have sent u buddy request
Posted: 12 years ago
u should continue it and pm me when u update
Posted: 12 years ago
it's really good...do continue
and plzz pm me πŸ˜Š
Posted: 12 years ago
continue plz and don't forget to pm me
Posted: 12 years ago
nice intro...pm me plz when u update!
Posted: 12 years ago
Guys am a bit poor in hindi n writting a ff fr de first time so plz dnt throw chappals or shoes...



In this episode i wnted to introduce 3 charecters

Sharon rai Prakash:she is mutual friend of reeyansh n kria.she is helping natured n cares evryone
alot.bt uske sath ya uske frnds ke sath kisine panga liya tho she wnt leav them at all..she had a
crush on a boy named "Swayam Shikawat" he is a frnd of reeyansh,she jus talks to swayam as a friend
its just a silent crush nobody knws abt it except kria.

Swayam Shikawat:he is frnd of reeyansh..very nice person .always agrees with everyone n does nt
dissapoint anyone ..he too had a silent crush on sharon bt he doesnt say it out as he dnt lik any
one teasing him.

Sapna singhania:She is rey's mother ...rey's parents marrige was a love marrige ..so sapna be's
very friendly with rey..she will be more as a frnd than a mother.

CHAPTER :1

Morning at reeyansh house...

sapna:rey uto!how long will u sleep !get up rite nw!
rey:maaa plz let me sleep fr 10 mins.
sapna:no just get up its already 8:30
rey:mom its just 8:30 ..ur sayin as if it is 10:30(he covered the blanket all over him)
sapna:i cnt wake u up beri bass ki bath nahi hai..!waise i feel very pity fr ur wife hw she
      wil wake u up..
(rey just ignores his mom n tries to sleep)
(sapna is tired so she went away frm de room...n next min rey gets a call on his mobile,it was
 none other than swayam)
(rey gets irritated n cuts the call without cing it .bt swayam did nt give up he kept on calling
 thn rey was totally frustrated n takes de fone into his hands n says)
rey:hey god! kyun sab muje utane me lag gaye.!(he see's de fone it was ringing ringing n ringing)
rey shouts to himself :haan haan..!uta raha hoon .dnt die!!
(he lifts the call)
rey:Arey dude kyun call kiya vo bhi itni subah subah??
swayam:itni subah?! time dheko rey its already 8:30!!
rey:dude i knw .wats the matter?!?!
swayam:dude today which day?!
rey:(in a frustrated tone) thumne ye poochne ke liye phone kiya muje??
swayam:nahi dude!!aaj ka dhin kya hai??
rey:aaj SUNDAY hai!!!agar doubt hai toh calender check kar lo!!
swayam:sunday ki alawa bhi kuch hai..just rewind once ..yaad aya??
rey:no yaar kuch bhi yaad nahi aaraha hai..waise aaj kuch imp kaam hai kya?
swayam:ur INSANE! hw cn u frgt today is SHARON'S bday!!!!
rey:oh FREAK!!i totally frgt !!ab mai kya karoon !!sharon tho bahut gussa hogi!!
swayam:gussa tho woh zarur hogi..kyunki wen i wished her i asked whether u had wished her bt she
       said "no!" in angry tone..dude tuh tho gaya!!
rey:arey yar kuch idea bathana plz!!!!
swayam:jakar usse manalo achese pyari si gift karidh kar dhedho.!
rey:thanks dude!ok bye gtg.!
swayam :hey wait ! atleast party ka time yaad haina?
rey:sharon ne party bhi rakha hai?(in an inocent confused tone)
swayam:yar tum gajini part 2 ho!tumhe kuch bhi yaad nahi rehtha.!waise bhi party ka time 5pm.
       atleast remember dis n be on time,bye!
rey:ya,sure bye!
(rey however motivates himself n calls sharon .he was callin her bt getting her phone busy.he
 tries tries n tries)
(Sharon's phone is busy as she was talkin with kriya.who was sayin so many sorry's to sharon as she
also frgt sharon's bday lik rey:D)
kriya:sharon happy  bday!:)
sharon:i dnt need ur wishes(in an angry tone)
kriya:sharon sorry yar was busy in home relatives came they wer literally eating my brain so..(kriya
 was interupted by sharon)
sharon:u dnt knw hw mch i was waiting fr..i jus dnt wnt to talk to u!!
kriya:sharon am sorry
(in meantime rey was frustrated calling repeatedly so he msgs sharon to lift the call.thn sharon c's
 msg n keep's kria's call at hold n lifts rey's call )
(rey also go on begging same lik kriya:D)
rey:sharon am sorry sorry sorry...plz manjao na
sharon :no am nt gonna talk to u !
(then sharon keep's a conference in the mobile ..the conference is only three mem's rey ,kriya n sharon:D)
sharon:u two don't understand hw much i waited fr u ppl's wishes last ight i thought u wer the first one's
       to wish me..bt u ppl..
(rey n kria dint knw that sharon had kept conference ..they jus wonder y is she sayin "u two ppl"
 as sharon undrstood that they two wer confused she says that she kept conference n introduce each other)
sharon:guys i kept conference ..REY AND KRIYA!u two wer my bff's bt u ppl dint wish me!(she says in an angry tone)
(kriya jus knws that rey is sharon's frnd.bt rey dnt knw)
rey:kria?who is she?waise nice name:)
(jus then rey hears a sweet voice which wen heard he felt lik he was melting.he dint knw why was he feelin lik that)
kriya:haan..mai kriya hun ..am sharon's frnd.
rey:ohokk
kriya:sharon plz plz plz manjao na plz ...am soo sorry sharon agli bar nahi hoga pakka wala promise.!(she speaks lik a small child)
sharon:ok this is the last time ..if it is repeated means it wnt be nice.n she smiles
rey was jus melting listening to kriya's childish voice n he smiles n says "how CUTE!!"
Sharon &kriya:wat??????
(rey came into his sense )
rey:haan haan kuch nahi..i mean sharon tum kitni cute lagthi ho jab tum smile karthi ho toh.wahi bol raha hun.
sharon:ab bas bhi karo.k dis is the last time fr u ppl.c dat it doesnt repeat.
kriya:pakka i wnt frgt.universe ji pe promise
sharon:sachi!
rey:muchi!
sharon&kriya:smiles
(meanwhile rey is lost in kriya's wordn after smetime cmes to his sense n asks kriya)
rey:hey miss kriya.why dint u call sharon ?
kriya:actually my relatives came so ..
rey(just to tease kriya he smiles n says):jhooti!
kriya:mei aur jhooti?!hw dare u ?
(she goes n scolding him she doent give even a min fr him to talk)
rey:wooOah!!miss.baatcutter am sorry !!
kriya:baatcutter??
rey:am sorry miss kriya plz muje maaf kardho plzz
kriya :hmm kk...
(in the mean time sharon was enjoyin the fight)
kriya:hey sharon ok bye gtg will meet in part bye...(pause)bye rey
rey(he feels very happy bt he dnt knw why ):bye kriya
sharon:ok bye kriya..tc
kriya cuts the calls  rey says to sharon that he will meet at the party n he will cut the call n
rey talks to himself by smiling:such a baatcutter!!hmmm miss.baatcutter interestin milna hi padega .
he smiles to himself n goes to freshen up...

hey frnds plz do comment n plz dnt scold if it is nt nice ...this is my first ff so ...:)





Posted: 12 years ago
aww..that was too cute...!!😊
plz update soon
thnx for the pm 

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