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FF: Truth Revealed [Discontinued] (Page 2)

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Posted: 11 February 2012 at 5:18pm | IP Logged
nice
oS..continu soon n pm me plz

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Posted: 11 February 2012 at 6:06pm | IP Logged

Looks like u guyz are enjoying my first OS ever!!! thank u for your kind responses!!!

ENJOY PART 3!!!!

OS: Truth Revealed Part 3

CLASH!!! Khushi hears a glass breaking sound as she is leaving the poolside and turns around……….

The sight before her eyes was horrifying…………. There she saw……….. Arnav had pinned shyam to the wall almost strangling his neck……….

K: Aa…!!

A: aapko kya laga jijaji! Aap aise hum sabke pith peeche……..

S: haa saale sahib…….. hum aapke pith peeche……..

A: aapne aise soch bhi kaise liya ki aap humare di ko dhoka deke chhutt jayenge!

S: hahaha……… saale saheb( says with a sneer) itna bhi mushkil nahi tha…………  par eein moke par aapne………. Humara aur khushiji ka itna acha chal raha tha………..

A: look mister there is nothing between u and khushi!!! And the sooner u realize that the better it will be for u!!! (pins him harder against the wall)

(khushi is scared of seeing the sight in front of her…….. she had never ever seen this side and ever wanted to see this side of arnav…….)

S: saale saheb, ab aap kuch nahi kar sakte………. Ranisahiba bhi pregnant hai aur agar apne unhe bata diya………toh phir aap apni akhri jineki khwaish be kho denge……….(says with a smirk)

A: is shocked and is hurt from what his jijaji said…………… hum apne di…di ko nahi kho sakte……….. unki koi galti nahi hai toh phir who kyu iski sazaa bhukte!! Aur phir di ka chota aa raha hai……….. di toh bilkul tut jayegi!!

(khushi from a  distance seemed to feel what arnav was going through……… she knew how he felt at the thought of losing his sister….) devi maiyya…….. aisa kabhibhi hone mat dena!!!

A: suddenly leaves shyam's collar and walk away from the scene……….

Khushi also leaves and climbs the stairs wiping a tear off her face…….

Shyam sees khushi leave and follows her………….. khushiji aap itni aasani se humara chuttkara nahi paa sakti………. Hum aapse pyaar karte hai aur humesha karte rahenge!

Khushi is in the kitchen making badam ka halwa for anjali as she loves and she has to eat stuff she likes now……….. she was thinking about how her life had changed in minutes and what arnav wud do now? when suddenly she burns her hand as her hand accidentally touches the hot vessel.

K: Ahh!

(someone comes in and takes her hand lovingly…………)

In next part……… find out who it is!!! 

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Posted: 11 February 2012 at 6:20pm | IP Logged
 I really like your all 3 parts
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Posted: 11 February 2012 at 6:51pm | IP Logged
this is not fair.u have left us in a cliff hangerSmile.plz update soonSmile
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Posted: 11 February 2012 at 8:11pm | IP Logged
Awesome OS.ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStar
Enjoyed it. Loved all 3 parts.
So hate the snake. Continue soon. Thanks.Big smile
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Posted: 11 February 2012 at 8:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by zafi

Awesome OS.Star
Enjoyed it. Loved all 3 parts.
So hate the snake. Continue soon. Thanks.Big smile

IM GLAD U GUYZ ALL LIKED IT!!!!
I FEEL SO ENCOURAGED TO CONTINUE!!
ITS URE GUYZES SUPPORT THAT MAKES ME WRITE GOOD OS'S
THANK U!!!

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Posted: 11 February 2012 at 9:14pm | IP Logged

OS: Truth Revealed Part 4

ENJOY!!!

(Arnav goes to check on his sister……… she is sitting in her bed calling the panditji for any other work that might be left for the pheres…….)

A: di, aap kaisi hai? Aapko kaisa lag raha hai?

Anjali: chote hum thik hai! Bar bar puchke tum thak nahi jaate ho kya?? J

A: di, aap ka khayal rakhna mera farz hai

Anjali: smiles and nods her head……… yeh chote bhi na!! J  

Toh chote aap aaj kya karne wale hai?

A: (turns around and looks at anjali with a puzzled face)

Anjali: chote tum bhul gaye aaj kya hai??? Aaj VALENTINE'S DAY HAI!!!

A: ohh ya di, I forgot………

Anjali: hume paata hai……. Inhone toh  humare liye ek bada surprise rakha hoga J

A: (is very disappointed at the thought of how much her sis loves shyam but that ***hole)

Anjali: chote hume lagta ki aapko ab apke kaam mein age badhna chahiye………(she said with a big smile on her face)

A: huhh di! Aap kya kehrahi hai? (even though he acted puzzled in front anjali……inside he knew exactly what he was talking about) di hume aapse ek baat puchni thi……… who humare ek client hai…..

Anjali: hmmm…….

A: who kal hume pata chala ki Aman secretly humare company ke sabse bade rival ke liye kam kar raha hai……… aapkp pata hai na Aman mere kitna accha dost hai…… par usne toh

Anjali: chote mein samaj sakti hoon……… kabhi kabhi jo hume dikhta hai woh ek galat faimi hoti hai aur uss insane ki bhi ek kahani hoti hai……….. tumhe Aman ko ek aur mouka dena chahiye aur uski side ki kahhani sunni chahiye………….. main tumhare bhashe mein batati hoon….. never jump to conclusions J

A: thanx di…… (and leaves thinking about what his di just said) shud I listen to khushi? Kya pata uski galti hai ya nahi………. ( he remembered what he said to khushi once…….  Khushi tumhe aadhe vakt pata bhi nahi hota ki tumhare saath kya hota hai……… )  ( he remembers when khushi told him his fianc had deceived her family and when she had broken down in front of him) ohhh no yeh maine kya kar diya……

…………. Main Arnav Singh Raizada hoon…….. y am I so confused? Uggh…… I need a drink of water)

(he enters the kitchen and sees…….)

Hahahaa next part will be updated soon…………  srry if this part was a little uninteresting……. I have build up the story J

                

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Posted: 12 February 2012 at 1:38am | IP Logged
You are so evil, leaving us hanging like that. How mean. Anyways loved the fact that Arnav went and took Advice from his Di and she put him on the right path.
Fantastic update.ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStar
Thanks.Big smile

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