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Posted: 08 February 2012 at 6:05pm | IP Logged
well guyz this is my first FF ever
i hope u guyz enjoy
plz comment i will only continue if u guyz like it :)
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FF: Truth Revealed

 

Arnav realizes his love for khushi and decided to confess'''

A: aaj mein khushi ko bata doonga ki mukhe pharak kyu padta hai ;)

(scene going on between Khushi and Shyam)

S: khushiji, aap hamari baat na sunke chod ke nahi jaa sakti warna hum'..

K: (haha watch me!) toh kya shyamji! Ab kehne ke liye bacha hi kya hai! Itna bada dhoka diya aapne hume, ab aur kuch karna baki hai kya!

S: khushiji hum sirf yeh kehna chahte hai ki hum aapse pyaar karte hai, ranisahiba se nahi! Hume toh sirf aapka pyaar chahiye''.starts walking towards khushi pins her to the wall

K: yeh aap kya kar rahe hai'''. AGAR AAPKO ANJALI JI SE PYAAR NAHI HAI TOH CHOD KYU NAHI DETE UNHE!!!

Arnav walk in right at that moment! He is very shocked at what khushi said. There are thousands of questions running in his head.

K: pehle aap hamare ghar mein PG banke rahe, phir hamare parivaar ko bata bhi nahi ki aap shadi shuddah ho aur shaadi shudah hokar bhi humse rishta jodah aapne! Aapke iraadien ke bare mein sochkar ghin ati hai hume!!!

S: KHUSHIJI!! Agar aapne humare saath shadi nahi ki, toh yeh soch lijiye ki aapki jiji ki bhi shaadi nahi hogi. Aur phir rani sahiba bhi nahi rahegi. Agar aapne humse shaadi nahi kit oh mein sabko yeh bhi bataunga ki aapne hume aapke jaal mein phasaya hai''.smirk on his face

K:(speechless) aap itne gir sakte ho yeh humen kabhi socha bhi nahi tha! Aur yeh anjaliji kya'''. KYA KIYA HAI AAPNE ANJALIJI KEH SAATH!!!

S: yeh toh aapko kuch hi dair mein pata chalega khushiji ;)

K:  she leave from there and stops'''.thinking'''..  hume sabko saach batana padega'''devi maiyaa hi jane ki inhone anjaliji keh saath kya kiya''. Hai devi maiyya agar anjaliji ko kuch hua toh' toh''.

A: khushi?

She turns around''.

K: tears in her eyes'''. Aap'' aap yahan? K'.k''kya hua??

A: tum thik toh ho? Tum aise ruk ruk ke baat kyu kar rahi ho?

K: who kuch nahi''. Hum chalte hai, niche sab intazaar kar rahe honge''.

Feels as if someone held her hand'''turns around looks at arnav'''.

A: khushi jhut mat bolo mujhse, maine tumhari sab baate sun li

K: KYA?? K'k..konsi baate?

A: tumare aur jijaji ki baate''''.. tumne mujhse sach kyu chipaya?? Kyu chipaya bolo??

K: arnavji''. Woh hum'..

A: ya phir tumhe yeh laga ki kisi koh yeh pata nahi chalega ki jijaji hi tumhare mangetaar the?? BOLO!!!

K:gathers up confidence as she was used to being hurt''.. just a few minutes ago she got hurt from shyam''.. but this she wasn't gonna let herself get hurt, and definitely not from the man she loved. Khushi bahut kuch sehliya tune''' aur kya kuch nahi sahongi?? Sach bahar aa chukka hai''.. ab tum kuch nahi kar sakti!

K: ha woh humare mangetaar the!!! Puchiye ab? Kya kya poochna chate hai ab?? Sach bahar aa chukka hai na, toh puchiye aur saath saath humari aukad bhi dikha dijiye.

A: khushi''''

K: aap yeh jana chahte hai na ki shyamji humare ghar mein kya kar rahe the?? Toh liiye!!! woh humare ghar  mein PG banke rehte the. Itna bada ghar, itni acchi patni, itna accha parivar ho kar bhi woh humare saath rehte the'' aur kya jaana chahte the aap? Haa humari sagai''.. shaadi shudaah hokar bhi humse rishtaah joda unhone!!! Humse sagai kar li!! Acha hua ki uss havan ke din hume sab sach pata chal gaya'''..

A: remembers the day when she cried on his shoulder''..

K: aura ab unhone humse shaadi karne ki dhamki di hai! Aur agar nahi ki toh jiji ki shaadi''.starts crying heavily and falls to the ground crying with her face in her hands''' jiji ki shaadi ek baar pehle bhi tut chuki hai arnavji''' pichli baar humari vajese aur iss baar bhi hamari vajese''.. starts sobbing more'''

A: khushi'' in his mind he was cussing at his jijaji'.. first of all for betraying his sister and for hurting his soulmate''' he looked at khushi with concerned eyes and wished he could just snap his fingers and all her pain would go away''

K: aur anjali ji'''. ANJALI JI!! Arnav ji anjaliji keh saath kuch, who shyamji neh kaha tha ki anjali ji keh saath'''. stands up gets her phone out and calls anjali''' yeh phone kyu nahi utha rahi!!! Anjaliji plz phone uthaiye!!!

(door bell rings)

Arnav and Khushi both hurry towards the door'''.



Well this is it guyz

I will only continue of u like it J

plz comment Big smile

 

 

 



Edited by arnavluvkhushi - 19 June 2012 at 1:47pm

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do continue...congrats on starting your writing journeyClap

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Great beginning! plz continue and Plz PM me the link when u continue...thanks
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Nice one! Please continue.
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This is eactly what I wanted - for Khushi to tell Arnav everything and for Shyam-Khushi convo to be heard by Aranv.
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Great work dear. Pls do continue. I am eager to read the next one.ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
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nice.plz continueSmile
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nyc os..conti soon

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