Woh Pehli Baar

WOH  PEHLI  BAAR...............
arjun:doctor, main thek to hu na
nisha:ofcourse , u r all right, yeh davaiya main lekh rahi hoon yeh le li jaga
arjun:thanks doctor
nisha: ur welcome
AFTER FEW MINUTES
arjun:(knocked at the door)doctor main apna mobile yahan par bhool geya tha
doctor:yeh raha aap ka mobile
arjun:aap,leken main to kisi aur doctor se mila tha
doctor:par yahan to sirf main he hoti hoon
arjun:par.........
nisha:are didi ab aa bhi jao na
arjun:hai ,yehi to yahan par thi jinhon ne mera check up kiya tha
nisha:are baap re
doctor:yeh to meri sister hai
nisha:didi inko ghalti lagi hoge, bhala main kaise koi check up kar sakti hoon
arjun:yeh sahi keh rahi hai, mujhe he ghalti lagi hai(nisha ki tarf dekhte hua)
nisha:(arjun ki tarf dekhte hua)didi chalo na
NEXT DAY AT SHOP
nisha:(sunglasses pehente hua)hai sonal ,kaise lag rahi hoon
sonal:WOW, bilkul malika arora ki tarha hot
nisha:thanks for the compliment
sonal:ab bus bhi karna, pura adha ghenta hogeya hai tumhari tareef karte karte
IN LIFT
nisha:thanks god usne didi se kuch kaha nahin, agar mil jaye to use thanks keh doon
sona:waise tumne davaiya to sahin lekhi the na
nisha:are sonal kuch bhe nahin tha, bus yeh high class log zara sa kuch ho jaye to doctor ke paas a jate hai
arjun:bilkul sahi keh rahi hai aap
nisha:(shocked)aap
arjun:waise app kahi se bhi doctor nahin lagti
nisha:actually, i am really very sorry
arjun:(muskarate hua)oh thats ok!
SHAADI PAR
nisha:(wearing shining pink lehenga, and hair open)aa rahi hoon na baba
(get slipped)OOOOoooooooopps
arjun:(pakarte ha)r u ok
nisha:(arjun ki tarf dikhte hua)
arjun:(nisha ki tarf dikhte hua)
sonal:are nisha lagi to nahin
nisha:(khamosh,arjun ki tarf dekhi ja rahi hai)
sonal:nisha, sun rahi ho na
nisha:(suddenly)ha, main sahi hoon
arjun:aap yahan
nisha:meri dost ki shaadi hai
arjun:u r looking beautiful
nisha:thanks,woh....
sonal:ab chal bhi
arjun:(nisha ki tarf dekhte hua)
LIGHTS OFF
arjun:(singing song)main hu chand aur tu hai chandani zara nazarein to mila
nisha:( sharmate hua)
arjun:eik he bar dekh le tu
nisha:(singing)HHhhhhmmm.........hhmmmmmmm....
                                      TO BE CONTINUED.............

i have written this new fan fic, hope u will like it

Edited by RIVER - 09 May 2006 at 12:09am

WOH PEHLI BAAR........
AFTER TWO MONTHS
arjun:(on phone)aunty nisha se bat karni hai
aunty:bilkul nahin, aaj nisha ki mehndi hai aur shaadi se pehle na to koi baat kar sakte ho aur na he mil sakte ho
arjun:aunty main to apko buhat modern samajhta tha, ap kahan in purani rasmoon ko manane lage
aunty:sorry beta, abhi tumhe kuch din intezaar karna pare ga
sonal:kitni khoobsorat mehndi lagai hai
nisha:arjun ka phone aya
sonal:ha ha taqreebun teen baar to phone kar chuka hai leken tumhari mom ne eik baar bhi us par tars nahin khaya
nisha:mom bhi na, mobile bhi leliya
sonal:pareshan mat ho, mera mobile to hai na
nisha:oh yes!
sonal:yeh lo mobile, main dekhti hoon ka kahin aunty ka koi jasoos to yahan nahin phir raha
nisha:(mobile par)hello!suna hai janab teen bar phone kar chuke hai par unke hone wali saas ne unhe apki hone wali patni se baat nahin karne de
arjun:to aakhir yaad a hi gaye
nisha:dulhe to apni dulhan se milne ke liye uske ghar ki dewaar bhi tap lete hai leken aap jaise sust dulhe bus mobile par number he dial karte rehte hai
arjun:to aise baat hai, to dekho main adhe ghante main tumhare paas puhancta hoon
nisha:really
arjun:yeh(phone disconnect)
nisha:hai sonal, tere jija ji deewar tapne wale hai
sonal:kya, yeh kya keh rahi hai tu
nisha:(haste hua)apni shaadi ko yaadgar banane wali hoon
AFTER HALF HOUR
arjun:are arjun kya zaroorat pari thi tumhe yeh kehne ki ke tum deewar tap lo ge
nisha:(window se)are sonal tere jija je deewar tap rehe hai
arjun:shukur hai deewar ka eik hisa to paar hua,(girte hua)OOOooooooohhhhh
nisha:oh my god
sonal:kya hua
nisha:wohi jo kaha tha, gir geya hai
aunty:are damaad ji deewar tapne ki kya zaroorat thi,yeh ghar aphi ka to hai ,gate se a jate
arjun:(tang par pati bundhe hua)woh aunty...
nisha:mumy papa bula rahe hai
aunty:main aati hoon
nisha:agar dewaar tapni nahin ati thi, to pehle batate na
arjun:eik tarf tumhari mom jo ab mujhe keh rahi hai ke gate se a jana tha aur eik tarf tum jo mujhe dewaar tapne ka keh rahi thi
sonal:jija je zada chot to nahin aye na
arjun:zaada nahin leken waise apki dost ne zada kasar nahin chori thi
nisha:aap haldi doodh piye, jald sehetyaab ho jaye ge
arjun:r u all right
aunty:beta bus kaam buht hai ghar main ,kuch chaiye ho to bata dena(jate hua)
arjun:(huste hua)acha to HALDI DOODH kyun kaha ja raha tha
nisha:BYE! ab kal mile ge(jate hua)
arjun:are nisha........
sonal:jija je zaada betabi achi nahin hoti, dekh liya na pehle kya hua
arjun:of course, u r right
                                                         TO BE CONTINUED..........

cool... keep writin..im enjoyin every bit of it..

very very nice river
write more soon...

thanks

WOH PEHLI BAAR..............
ON THE DAY OF SHAADI
sonal:auntie nisha kaha hai
nishas mom:beta woh to tumhare saat beauty parlour gaye thi na
sonal:auntie, par nisha ne to kaha tha ke woh driver keh saat ajaye ge
nishas mom:nisha kaha hai
driver:begum sahiba nisha ji ko kisi ne kidnap kar liya hai
nishas mom:kya
sonal:jeja ji nisha ko kisi ne kidnap kar liya hai
arjun:yeh kya keh rahi ho
                                    THE SHAADI GOT POSTPONED
THE NEXT DAY
nishas mom:nisha ab ghar ajao(rote hua)
arjuns mom:behen ji, tasale rakhe humne commisioner sahab se baat ki hai
arjun:(sitting in nishas room,nisha ki tasweer dekh kar )nisha tum kaha chali gaye, tumhare begher yeh eik eik pal mere liya jeene mushkil ho geya hai

nisha:kon ho tum
(someone singing song){its from raju chacha}
tu ne mujhe pehchana nahin
jana mein koi anjana nahin
ashiq hu mein tere pyar ka
deewana hu main dewana....
                                                                             TO BE CONTINUED...............

good yaaar !!!!!!
but y such small part?? rit more.. n i'll read..
n yaar plzz.. next fan-fic on suraj    u write only on arjun-bhav.. suraj to missing hi ho gaya

pls continue soon. i m getting addicted to your fan-fic