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Posted: 19 February 2012 at 11:28pm | IP Logged
hai dear, liked this update, great.
well written , the emotions are high at this point of time and it is reflecting.
Ashu: difficult to hold back, but don't want to proceed further.
Nidhi:confused and more on hurted.
would like to see how u want to proceed further and narrate the fic.
waiting for the next update.
I know it is easy to write, that we r waiting here for the next update but dil se majboor hain.
thanks

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Posted: 21 February 2012 at 3:11am | IP Logged
Hi Shari. The post was definitely worth the wait. As a writer, you are cut from the same cloth as Sharmishtha. As a storyteller, I can see you working on two levels - surface and sub text. Love the way the story is evolving on the surface but I would say that the true narrative of this chapter is in the sub text. The dialogues are few 6 or 7 perhaps, but the underlying subtext is so beautiful, engaging and rich. You have superbly worded the conflicting emotions and real motivations of all the three characters. Good going. I am really looking forward to the next chapter.

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Posted: 21 February 2012 at 3:53am | IP Logged
Ditto to Mimoha about your story telling Sharifa. At the end of it, I feel soo emotional. And no! It isn't only because of you writing it for me. But more so because of the actual story...

Waiting eagerly for the kash-ma-kash (can't find a perfect English substitute for this word Tongue) to come.

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Posted: 21 February 2012 at 10:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by apurvafan

good going.. Will read slowly and update my comment


Thanks so much Smilelooking forward for your comments

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Posted: 21 February 2012 at 10:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sharmishtha02

Ditto to Mimoha about your story telling Sharifa. At the end of it, I feel soo emotional. And no! It isn't only because of you writing it for me. But more so because of the actual story...

Waiting eagerly for the kash-ma-kash (can't find a perfect English substitute for this word Tongue) to come.


Thank you Mentorji...you are a Star

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Posted: 21 February 2012 at 10:08am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by Mimoha

Hi Shari. The post was definitely worth the wait. As a writer, you are cut from the same cloth as Sharmishtha. As a storyteller, I can see you working on two levels - surface and sub text. Love the way the story is evolving on the surface but I would say that the true narrative of this chapter is in the sub text. The dialogues are few 6 or 7 perhaps, but the underlying subtext is so beautiful, engaging and rich. You have superbly worded the conflicting emotions and real motivations of all the three characters. Good going. I am really looking forward to the next chapter.




awww Mimoha if you were infront of me i wouldHug you thanks for putting me at par with my mentor that's the highest praise i could get.  you have it  right I love trying to go through the minds of the characters for me Ashu is a flawed character and that's what makes his charm and Rangnath is sooo underused.

hope to raise up to  your expectation in the next partSmile
shari

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Posted: 21 February 2012 at 10:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kritash

hai dear, liked this update, great.
well written , the emotions are high at this point of time and it is reflecting.
Ashu: difficult to hold back, but don't want to proceed further.
Nidhi:confused and more on hurted.
would like to see how u want to proceed further and narrate the fic.
waiting for the next update.
I know it is easy to write, that we r waiting here for the next update but dil se majboor hain.
thanks




awww bless you for being such a supportive reader 

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Posted: 21 February 2012 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vasanthi16

Good...progressing logically...pls update soon...


Thanks dear

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