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hi guyz
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it's beautiful...
gosh Surya is being so much concerned and protective about Janvi & Shivlali...
really want to see him like that in the show...
also loved the cute mother-son moment...
.. waiting to see how Ammaji reacts seeing them at the gate...

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Deep down his little bramachari man, is a true gentleman.
His passion and honour for both his mother and Jhanvi is truly fab. Would love to see this in tomorrow's episode
That would make my day...plz do continue more in the future
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it's beautiful...
gosh Surya is being so much concerned and protective about Janvi & Shivlali...
really want to see him like that in the show...
also loved the cute mother-son moment...
.. waiting to see how Ammaji reacts seeing them at the gate...


Deep down his little bramachari man, is a true gentleman.
His passion and honour for both his mother and Jhanvi is truly fab. Would love to see this in tomorrow's episode
That would make my day...plz do continue more in the future

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Ammaji opens the mandir door to find Surya waiting there with shivlali and jhanvi.
Ammaji: aade ke kar rahe ho tum
Jhanvi: ammaji woh'surya aur maa aur mein haveli chod kar yahan aagaye
Ammaji: bithar aa jao
Surya: aammaji sse phele hum log aandar aaye mujhe app se kuch kehna hai
surya folds his hand in front of ammaji'.ammajji woh'main ap se maafi mangna chata hoon'aaj tak meine bauji ka saath diya unke hare ek faisle mein chahe who sahi ho ya nahi'..i ruined ur family's life, ur granddaughter's life, I never treated u with respect 'I m sorry'I hope you can forgive me'.i was never able to become a good son, husband and more than that a good human being'..sorry'.a tear rolls down Surya's face
Ammaji: kaise bawalo wali baat kar raha hai tu'.agar tu ek aacha beta nahi hota toh aaj apni maa ke saath nahi khada hota, aur ek pati hone ka dharam toh tune bahut aacha se nibhaya hai meri beti ki raksha kari hai tune apni patni ki'phir tu aise kaise keha sakta hai kit u ek aacha pati nahi hai'aur baat rahi meri toh bhai chahe tu maine ya na maine lehki phele bhi aura b bhi tera dil mein mera liye izzat toht hi''.abb sari baat aade hi karega ke'chal aandar chal
Surya, Jhanvi and Shivlali come inside and sense that something is wrong.
Jhanvi: ammaji kya baat hai sab log itne pareshan kyun nazar aare hai
Ammaji: kuch na'karan wapas aagaya hai'.
Jhanvi: sach! Karan bhaiya wapis aagaye '.lehkin sab itne happy kyun nahi lag rahe/
Ammaji: beti phele abpna saman toh aandar kamre meinr akh le'phir dono behat ke khub sari baatein karenge'
Karan then walks down the stairs angrily and stops seeing jhanvi and company there
Jhanvi runs to Karan and hugs him.
Jhanvi: kya baat hai mera lovely shovely se angry young man, ina kusha kyun hai naak pe.
Karan looks at jhanvi and smiles: kuch nahi'bas kuch biti yaadon ne gusha dila diya' rula diya'yeh aisas dila diya ki main is ghar ka khoon nahi hoon''
Jhanvi places her hand on karan mouth and shakes her head: saare rishta khoon ke nahi hota'kuch rishta dil ke hote hai, viswass ke hota hai'..aur rishta khoon se nahi bante lehkin responsibilities se bhi bante hai'aur apne toh is ghar ke liye ek beta, bhai, aur pot aka dharam nibhaya hai 'phir app aisa kaise soch sakte hai..
Karan: jhanvi blood is thicker than water'trust me blood matters'..
Karan leaves'storming out of the gate. Tanisha runs into the room and starts crying.
Jhnavi: ammaji yeh sab kuch''
Ammaji xplains to jhanvi about chautala and how he for the first time met his son Karan. Jhanvi is shocked knowing this while Surya seems confused not knowing exactly about whats happening, shivalai seems to understand what is happening.
Shivalali: ammaji main santosh se milke aati hoon'.
Jhanvi and surya leave to put things in the room they will be staying in. when they are alone in the room surya asks jhanvi about the truth about karan and jhanvi tells him everything. Later in the evening, Karan comes back and Tanisha and jhanvi help him understand about that blood relations aren't everything and that he should forgive his biological dad. Karan seems to get his mind clearer and understands the situation. Later Ammaji comesto talk to Karan.
Ammaji: chora tujhse ek baat kahni thi
Karan: ji amamji'boliye
Ammaji: dehk beta tu jogi ka beta nahi hai aur na iss ghar ka khoon'lehkin tu satosh sangewan ka beta jarror hai aur mera pota bhi'ammaji puts a hand on Karan head'tera bina yeh paarivaar kabhi poora nahi ho sakta, tu is paarivaar ka beta hai, jab tu paida hua that oh humse yeh yeh kaha gaya that kit u iss paarivaar ki zidagi wapis laaega, is paarivaar ki roshini hai se tu'.aur ek baat aur tu jaane tu bahut jaga mera raghav jaisa hai'.aur yeh toh tu janta hi hai ki mera raghav era ladla that hamesha..phir toh tub hi toh emra ladla hua na'
Karan hugs ammaji and starts crying
Ammaji: bas beta bas'chal abb jaldi se surya ko bula la kahan ka waqt ho gaya hai'
Everyone is eating and chatting and just enjoying the food. Surya sees this and thinks how never before at dinner time had the atmosphere been so light and happy'how his mother had never smiled and laughed and now she was laughing enjoying time with people who see had only known for 3 months. It made him feel happy but sad at the same time because he wondered why his dad had never made his mother laugh like these people were. Jhanvi snaps Surya out of his thoughts.
Jhanvi: surya'kahan kho gaya'.anyways aur roti chaiya
Surya: no thanx
Karan smile mischievously: kya baath jahnvi'saara kahana apne pati parmeshvar ko hi kilhaogi kya?
Jhanvi starts blushing.
Karan: haaye haaye main marjawa.. tu kab se sharmane lagi'.
Jhanvi death stares at karan : bhaiya I m going to kill you'
Karan starts running with jhanvi after him, enjoying and laughing. Dia very badly wanted to go join in the fun but knew she couldn't..not when she was dressed as a man. While a smile creeped on surya's face seeing jhanvi like this'.he had never seen her so carefree. Just looking ta Karan and Jhanvi he wondered what it would be like if he had a little sister.
~sorry for any grammar mistakes
~i know this part does not have much of surya but i just wanted surya to feel the bonding between ammaji's family...nd i also needed to but karan in somewhere
but technically this FF will mostly consist of happy moments and in future i am planning on
a cute jeeja sali relationship between surya and dia...and romantic scenes between jaya and also surya bonding with ammaji's family.
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beautifully defined Surya's scenario and feelings...
also loved the playful element of Karan-Janvi...
and Surya admiring that and wanting a sister...
.also the way Surya was happy seeing Shivlali smiling...
and Diya's feelings were beautifully defined that she wanted to join them but couldn't because she was in disguise...
awww loved the way you ended...
waiting to see Surya-Diya relationship...
continue soon...
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