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*Dastaras*..A Poem

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Posted: 30 January 2012 at 11:01am | IP Logged

i just have written a poem after many days so thought to share with you all..i hope you will like it..

       
                                                  *Dastaras*
 
Hamesha yaad rakhta hoon main tumko
kabhi khawaboon ki surat main
jo dekhe the kabhi main ne
haseen jo pal the woh sare
Mere Hamraaz,Mere Hamdam
yaqeen hota agar mujhko
kabhi ye hoon ge na pore
samete leta unko pehle
bikharne se
magar phir sochta hoon
kahan tha waqt mujh pe mehrbaan
aur
kab tha tu meri dastaras main
Main kal bhi Be Amman tha
aur aj bhi!!


Edited by Maria. - 30 January 2012 at 11:11am

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Posted: 30 January 2012 at 11:24am | IP Logged
wao maria beautiful

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Posted: 30 January 2012 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Awesome Poem API...Hug
B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L...Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
i m glad u posted it...
as i used to love wenevr u add something in ur FFs...
hopefully now u will write dis type of poems regularly...
n han...U R MY ALL ROUNDER SIS...Cool
LOVE U LODSSS...HugHugHug

Ps: Tasnim... :P


Edited by 18anila1 - 30 January 2012 at 11:41am

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Posted: 30 January 2012 at 11:37am | IP Logged
wow veryyy nice poem maria
lovelyyy

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Posted: 30 January 2012 at 11:46am | IP Logged
nice...though i felt a little difficulty with a few words...
thanks for the PM

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Posted: 30 January 2012 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
Nice Poem maria  Smile

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Posted: 30 January 2012 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
wonderful poem
amazing

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amazing good job...

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