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                                                     SS: Tu Jaane Naa

As u have seen in the show Beeji reads the letter that preeto has written and came to know abt Rajbeer loving Preeto..

I jus want to end all the EA in my SS atleast so didn't drag much like Cvs'I jus hope u all will like it and find it guddd'and sorry that u will find somewhat EA in this SS also but can tell u that no place for NA in SS..hehe'LOL...and I have added some lines frm songs..was listening to latest songs yest night after yest NA EA eps LOLso jus added them here..Big smile 

SS starts with Rajbeer waiting to know Preeto' s dil ki baat..

Part1

Day1:

Rajbeer in his room:

Rajbeer looking at the painting of Preeto that he has made..smiles and thinks that mujhe intezaar hai preeto tumhari dil ki baat sune ke liye

Kyun aisa hota hai main khud se hi baatein karoon

Dil ye bekaraar kyun hai

Iss pe dhun saawar kyun hai

Kyun hai yeh khumaar kyun hai tu baata

Tera intezaar kyun hai tujhpe aitbaar kyun hai tu baata

Morning 9:00 Dhillion' s Home:

Preeto in her room : kaise batao Rajbeer ki main aap se pyaar nahi kar sakti aapko har khushi nahi de sakti mujhe maaf kardo Rajbeer..

She decides to give the letter today to Rajbeer hoping he will understand her

Morning 10:30 at Boutique:

Simi and Rajbeer having breakfast(sandwitches)

Rajbeer asks simi yeh preeto kyun abhi tak nahi ayi'

Simi: ajayegi shayad traffic mein phassi hai

Preeto comes to boutique..

Simi: gudmorning Preeto

Rajbeer looks at preeto and smiles..

Simi gets a call from client..She then leaves saying  that I have to meet a client who asked for some designs will be back in half n hour.

Preeto thinks this is the right moment I should give the letter to Rajbeer

Rajbeer: Preeto kya baat hai kuch khoyi huyi si lag rahe ho

Preeto: without speaking a word gives the letter to Rajbeer

Rajbeer opens and reads hez all shocked as he didn't expect this and asks her Preeto yeh sab kya hai yeh tumne kya likha hai..he places his both hands on her shoulders and says Preeto bolo ki yeh sach nahi hai..mujhe pata hai tum mujhse pyaar karte ho aur tum yeh bhi jante ho ki mein tumhe kitna chahta hoon kitna pyaar karta hoon phir hum dono ek hone mein kya problem hain..tears floating in her eyes..why preeto why...

Preeto: Rajbeer mujhe plz samjhne ki koshish karo

Rajbeer: Preeto mujhe kuch nahi suna hai tumse tum kabhi mujhse alag nahi hosakte..I can never even think of being apart from u..u can never stop me frm loving u

Meanwhile Simi forgot some papers so she comes back to boutique she standing near the door'notices Rajpreet together..shez shocked to see them both...

Preeto: Rajbeer mujhe ghar jana hai and leaves frm there

Simi hides seeing Preeto leaving

As Preeto left Simi comes in and asks him..Rajbeer tum aur Preeto..he doesn't answer her and leaves saying  Simi mai baad mai baat karti hun

Rajbeer left the letter in the table..

Simi tears floating in her eyes she unable to come out of the shock thinking to herself it cant be true..She goes and sits in a chair crying and then notices a paper in the table..it's the letter..reading it her heartbreaks after knowing the truth that Rajbeer loves Preeto and not her..She leaves the boutique goes back to home..

Preeto in her room:

Preeto reaches home goes to her room and starts crying..Im sorry Rajbeer..sorry for hurting u..

Tumko maine chaha bhi hai
Tumhi ko maine gum bhi diye
Sharminda hoon
Sach kehti hoon dil hi dil mein
Sharminda hoon

Beeji sees Preeto crying she comes and asks Preeto what happened why are you crying..Preeto wipes her tears and says beeji kuch nahi..Beeji realizes that Preeto must have given the letter to Rajbeer..Beeji locks the door..then asks Preeto tell me the truth..do u love Rajbeer..Preeto shocked thinking how beeji came to know about it and before she could say anything beeji stops her and says Preeto I have read the letter and tu bas mujhe yeh baata ki tu Rajbeer se Pyaar karti hai na..

Preeto unable to speak a word tears in her eyes shez crying

Beeji: Preeto abh main jangayi hun ki tu Rajbeer se Pyaar karti hai then why are you saying no to him  for the sake of  responsibilites..Chunni ko oodhle preeto Rajbeer bahut acha ladka hai woh tumhe humesha khush rakhega..Beeji convinces Preeto and Preeto finally agrees..Beeji feels very happy and Preeto also very happy( I feel this scene was shown very well in the show so I didn't change much plz don't mind all..)

Now Beeji and Preeto start talking about Pankeeta Roka..Preeto says not to worry about it and asks Beeji to make a list of the things that are needed for Roka

Rajbeer in his Room:

Preeto tum mujhse kabhi dur nahi hosakte aur main aisa kuch hone nahi dunga..i can never loose u Preeto..ur the one who filled my life with happiness'i know u love me..I will wait for u

Tu jo chahe kehle
Par tujhko milne se pehle
Khudse bhi na mil saka tha main..
Khoya sa tha main uljha sa tha
tujh bin meri na thi koi raahien
Meri zindagi tujh bin thi jaise
Oas ki boond Patti se ab giri

Simran at Home in her room:

Simi breaks down after knowing about Rajpreet..totally heartbroken cryinggg hard  cant stay without u Rajbeer I thought u also loved me y u did this to me maine kyun kiya mohabbat tumse kyun kiya..

Kisi ko mohabbat agar hai
toh kyun hai
Koi ye bata de ki kya hai mohabbat 

Kaise bhulaaon yeh gum

Tumko maine chaha hai

You just left me all alone..in the Dark

I'm shattered now
Feeling so bad now


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Edited by snehapatro - 14 May 2013 at 7:14am

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Part2 :

Day 2:

Rajbeer gets a call from Beeji..Beeji asked him to come home to discuss about Pankeeta' s Roka

Rajbeer comes to Preeto' s house..Preeto opens the door he looks at her she smiles standing there..hez surprised and confused at the same time as to how Preeto looking so happy...she asks him to come in.. Preeto then says mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai Rajbeer'with a smile on her face apni dil ki baat'he feels very happy hearing that..

Rajbeer: dil ki baat kaho na Preeto

Preeto: before she could say anything Pankaj at the door hey Rajbeer..he comes to Preeto and Rajbeer with smile in his face..Preeto asks kya baat hai Pankaj aaj tum kuch jyada hi khush lagrahe ho

Pankaj: ha Preeto bahut khush hun kyunki Sunny ane wala hai

Rajbeer asks Sunny kaun hai..Pankaj says Sunny mera bhai hai woh ayega toh mera saara kam kardega..Meanwhile Meeta di calls Pankaj then he goes

Beeji sees Rajbeer and with a smile Rajbeer beta tum agaye

Beeji then asks Preeto: Preeto tumne Simran ko call ki..Beeji mein abhi call karti hun

Preeto calls Simi...She says Simran is not lifting..Rajbeer says wait I will try
Rajbeer calls Simi she doesn't lift his call also..he says to Beeji and Preeto I  will go to her home now and ask her come.

NA Home:

Rajbeer at NA house goes to simi' s  room he notices simi crying he in shock..simi kya hua tum ro rahe ho aur mera phone bhi nahi uthaya yeh kaisi haalat bana rakhi ho tum'Simi plz kuch bolo

Simi: she doesn't want to hide anything so she says Rajbeer maine tumse pyaar kiya hai mujhe laga tum bhi mujhse pyaar karte ho lekin nahi all my dreams shattered Rajbeer she holding his shirt..Rajbeer shocked simi tum mujhe lekin tum mere dost ho mere sabse achi dost my best friend..she still crying even more..

Rajbeer: he keeps his hands on her shoulder and says Simi plz don't cryyy u know that I cant see u crying im sorry simi really sorry that I have hurt u'anjanee mein tumhe bahut dukh pahunchaye

Simi: Rajbeer kya tum mujhe wada karoge ki tum meri best friend humesha rahoge main apna best friend khona nahi chahti

Rajbeer: Simi yeh tum kaise baate kar rahe ho ofcourse u know that I will be there for u always'tumhara yeh best friend wada karta hai'

Simi: she smiles and says Rajbeer iss waqt mujhe khush honi chahiye ki u have got love of ur life u have got Preeto in ur life'lekin dekho main yaha apni dukh share kar rahi ho abh yeh sab chodo aur plz Preeto ko iske bare bilkul mat bolna

Rajbeer says sorry giving her a hug

Simi: Rajbeer main kuch der akela rehna chahti hun I will meet u again

Rajbeer : okkk.and Simi plz don't cry promise me

Simi: Smiles and agrees saying im ok rajbeer

Rajbeer: he leaves saying mein phir milti hun tumse

Rajbeer in car(driving): he feels bad that he has hurt simi unknowingly..he wanted to tell everything to Preeto but as simi refused to he decides to hide for now and talk abt it later after Pankeeta' s Marriage

Preeto Home:

Rajbeer comes back to Preeto' s home..Preeto asks simran nahi ayi..woh thodi busy hai keh rahi thi kuch friends ki party mein jana hai

beeji papaji and everyone start talking about arrangements of Roka and each one decide what work they will be doing..decorations ka saara kaam Rajbeer ko diya jata hai

Beeji : Rajbeer beta tum yaha humare ghar kyun nahi rehjate meri matlab Roka tak bahut sare kaam honge na

Papaji: Ha Rajbeer tumhe ane jane mein takleef hoga isliye Meeta ki Roka tak yehi rukjao

Rajbeer: agrees and looking at Preeto he smiles..Preeto also smiles...

Rajbeer leaves to bring his luggage bag

Night Preeto at terrace :

Preeto thinking of Rajbeer and all the happy moments that she has spent with him

Rajbeer is back to preeto' s home with his luggage bag 'Beeji shows him his room

Rajbeer then searches for Preeto and as meeta di was passing he asked about where preeto is Meeta di says shayad chath pe hogi Preeto

Rajbeer then goes to terrace he finds Preeto there...

He sees her smiling and says mere bare mein soch rahe ho

Preeto: as she hears his voice feels happy..Rajbeer aap yaha with wide smile

Rajbeer: maine kuch pucha

Preeto: nahi woh bas Roka arahi hai na uske bare mein

Rajbeer: acha toh phir itna smile kyun kar rahi thi'he comes near to her

Preeto: kyun smile karna koi paap hai

Rajbeer: acha woh chodo aur yeh batao ki tum mujhe subah kuch bolne wali thi

Preeto: mai kuch nahi toh

Rajbeer: he comes more close to her and whispers in her ears apni dil ki baat

Preeto blushes and tries to go frm there but he holds her hand stoping her frm going

Preeto: Rajbeer haat chodoBlushing

Rajbeer: nahi chodunga

Preeto: Rajbeer bahut raat hochuki hai mujhe abh sona hai

Rajbeer: he grabs her close to him..both his hands on her waist...Blushing

Pyaar hai humko..

Yeh chupana kyun..

Mausam salona hai

Jaage hain armaan

Main hoon dil hai tu hai

Preeto: Rajbeer kya kar rahe ho koi dekhlega

Rajbeer: dekhne do..abh bolne tak main nahi chodunga tumhe

Preeto: smiles and then says acha mai meeta di ki roka din bolungi..abh chodo mujhe

Rajbeer: asks pakka

Preeto: ha pakka

Both smile and say goodnight to eachother.Big smile



Edited by snehapatro - 28 May 2012 at 5:13am

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Part3

Day 3:

Rajbeer sees that all are busy down in the hall mauka ka fayda uthata hai he goes to Preeto' s room...Wink

Preeto' s room:

Preeto looking into mirror getting ready wearing pink color bangles matching to her pink saree...Smile

Rajbeer : ache lag rahe ho ( he standing near the door)

Phoolon jaisi hai yeh ladki
Hai yeh ladki pariyon jaisi hai 
Bholi bholi khoyi khoyi
Hirani si hai yeh ladki
Komal komal yeh ladki
Sundar ladki


Preeto : smiles..Rajbeer aap yaha

Rajbeer: bas kuch meetha khane ka mann kar raha tha so puchne agaya

Preeto: toh phir jake kitchen mein beeji ko pucho

Rajbeer : acha mujhe kuch aur bhi chahiye tha he comes bit near to her saying it( standing side of the bed)

Preeto: kya..?

Rajbeer: puchlun

Preeto: ha puchiye

Rajbeer: winking he says kiss

Preeto sharmake tries to go away frm there as she wore saree she was abt to fall..Rajbeer holds her his hands on her waist both lost in the moment looking into each other eyes

Aankhien yeh aankhien
Sagar se gehri yeh aankhien hai
Jhookti hai
Uthati hai
Sharmeeli se aankhien
Yeh aankhien sapno ki rajdhani

Saare..jugnoo..taare
Inse hi jagmagana seekhe

 

Rajbeer says Saree pehna hai sambhalke chalni chahiye she smiles and abt to stand but looses her balance falling on the bed by making him fall on her.'both upon each other very close for a moment'

Mera dil..sang sang leheraye
Dhadka hi jaye
Tere zulf se mehki hui jo chahon hai
Woh hai meri manzil
teri saare gum saari khushiyan
Ab dono ki hai, hai kehta dil

Dilon jaisi hai yeh ladki


Hai yeh ladki pariyon jaisi hai 

She then pushes him smiles..gets up frm there as she was abt to leave frm the place he again stops her holding her hand says ruko na preeto and grabs her towards him..

Chand pe tu, main dharti pe
Thodi toh paas aaja
Dhadkan mein tu samahja
Main tere..geet gaon
Yeh armaan yeh tamanna
Hai aur dil mein tu hai tu hai tu hai

Preeto: mujhe neeche jana hai Rajbeer and leaves blushingggBlushing



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Originally posted by snehapatro

                                                     SS: Tu Jaane Naa

As u have seen in the show Beeji reads the letter that preeto has written and came to know abt Rajbeer loving Preeto..

I jus want to end all the EA in my SS atleast so didn't drag much like Cvs'I jus hope u all will like it and find it guddd'and sorry that u will find somewhat EA in this SS also but can tell u that no place for NA in SS..hehe'LOL...and I have added some lines frm songs..was listening to latest songs yest night after yest NA EA eps LOLso jus added them here..Big smile 

SS starts with Rajbeer waiting to know Preeto' s dil ki baat..

Day1:

Rajbeer in his room:

Rajbeer looking at the painting of Preeto that he has made..smiles and thinks that mujhe intezaar hai preeto tumhari dil ki baat sune ke liye

Kyun aisa hota hai main khud se hi baatein karoon

Dil ye bekaraar kyun hai

Iss pe dhun saawar kyun hai

Kyun hai yeh khumaar kyun hai tu baata

Tera intezaar kyun hai tujhpe aitbaar kyun hai tu baata

Morning 9:00 Dhillion' s Home:

Preeto in her room : kaise batao Rajbeer ki main aap se pyaar nahi kar sakti aapko har khushi nahi de sakti mujhe maaf kardo Rajbeer..

She decides to give the letter today to Rajbeer hoping he will understand her

Morning 10:30 at Boutique:

Simi and Rajbeer having breakfast(sandwitches)

Rajbeer asks simi yeh preeto kyun abhi tak nahi ayi'

Simi: ajayegi shayad traffic mein phassi hai

Preeto comes to boutique..

Simi: gudmorning Preeto

Rajbeer looks at preeto and smiles..

Simi gets a call from client..She then leaves saying  that I have to meet a client who asked for some designs will be back in half n hour.

Preeto thinks this is the right moment I should give the letter to Rajbeer

Rajbeer: Preeto kya baat hai kuch khoyi huyi si lag rahe ho

Preeto: without speaking a word gives the letter to Rajbeer

Rajbeer opens and reads hez all shocked as he didn't expect this and asks her Preeto yeh sab kya hai yeh tumne kya likha hai..he places his both hands on her shoulders and says Preeto bolo ki yeh sach nahi hai..mujhe pata hai tum mujhse pyaar karte ho aur tum yeh bhi jante ho ki mein tumhe kitna chahta hoon kitna pyaar karta hoon phir hum dono ek hone mein kya problem hain..tears floating in her eyes..why preeto why...

Preeto: Rajbeer mujhe plz samjhne ki koshish karo

Rajbeer: Preeto mujhe kuch nahi suna hai tumse tum kabhi mujhse alag nahi hosakte..I can never even think of being apart from u..u can never stop me frm loving u

Meanwhile Simi forgot some papers so she comes back to boutique she standing near the door'notices Rajpreet together..shez shocked to see them both...

Preeto: Rajbeer mujhe ghar jana hai and leaves frm there

Simi hides seeing Preeto leaving

As Preeto left Simi comes in and asks him..Rajbeer tum aur Preeto..he doesn't answer her and leaves saying  Simi mai baad mai baat karti hun

Rajbeer left the letter in the table..

Simi tears floating in her eyes she unable to come out of the shock thinking to herself it cant be true..She goes and sits in a chair crying and then notices a paper in the table..it's the letter..reading it her heartbreaks after knowing the truth that Rajbeer loves Preeto and not her..She leaves the boutique goes back to home..

Preeto in her room:

Preeto reaches home goes to her room and starts crying..Im sorry Rajbeer..sorry for hurting u..

Tumko maine chaha bhi hai
Tumhi ko maine gum bhi diye
Sharminda hoon
Sach kehti hoon dil hi dil mein
Sharminda hoon

Beeji sees Preeto crying she comes and asks Preeto what happened why are you crying..Preeto wipes her tears and says beeji kuch nahi..Beeji realizes that Preeto must have given the letter to Rajbeer..Beeji locks the door..then asks Preeto tell me the truth..do u love Rajbeer..Preeto shocked thinking how beeji came to know about it and before she could say anything beeji stops her and says Preeto I have read the letter and tu bas mujhe yeh baata ki tu Rajbeer se Pyaar karti hai na..

Preeto unable to speak a word tears in her eyes shez crying

Beeji: Preeto abh main jangayi hun ki tu Rajbeer se Pyaar karti hai then why are you saying no to him  for the sake of  responsibilites..Chunni ko oodhle preeto Rajbeer bahut acha ladka hai woh tumhe humesha khush rakhega..Beeji convinces Preeto and Preeto finally agrees..Beeji feels very happy and Preeto also very happy( I feel this scene was shown very well in the show so I didn't change much plz don't mind all..)

Now Beeji and Preeto start talking about Pankeeta Roka..Preeto says not to worry about it and asks Beeji to make a list of the things that are needed for Roka

Rajbeer in his Room:

Preeto tum mujhse kabhi dur nahi hosakte aur main aisa kuch hone nahi dunga..i can never loose u Preeto..ur the one who filled my life with happiness'i know u love me..I will wait for u

Tu jo chahe kehle
Par tujhko milne se pehle
Khudse bhi na mil saka tha main..
Khoya sa tha main uljha sa tha
tujh bin meri na thi koi raahien
Meri zindagi tujh bin thi jaise
Oas ki boond Patti se ab giri

Simran at Home in her room:

Simi breaks down after knowing about Rajpreet..totally heartbroken cryinggg hard  cant stay without u Rajbeer I thought u also loved me y u did this to me maine kyun kiya mohabbat tumse kyun kiya..

Kisi ko mohabbat agar hai
toh kyun hai
Koi ye bata de ki kya hai mohabbat 

Kaise bhulaaon yeh gum

Tumko maine chaha hai

You just left me all alone..in the Dark

I'm shattered now
Feeling so bad now


PS: For Day 2 and Day 3 do check my next posts below...Big smile and will wait for ur comments..Wink


Tu jo chahe kehle
Par tujhko milne se pehle
Khudse bhi na mil saka tha main..
Khoya sa tha main uljha sa tha
tujh bin meri na thi koi raahien
Meri zindagi tujh bin thi jaise
Oas ki boond Patti se ab giri


Kisi ko mohabbat agar hai
toh kyun hai
Koi ye bata de ki kya hai mohabbat 

Kaise bhulaaon yeh gum

Tumko maine chaha hai

You just left me all alone..in the Dark

I'm shattered now
Feeling so bad now


Love dese lines sneha...r dey from a song...plz add d link for d songs 2 if possible...d lyrics r lovely...

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Originally posted by snehapatro

Day 2:

Rajbeer gets a call from Beeji..Beeji asked him to come home to discuss about Pankeeta' s Roka

Rajbeer comes to Preeto' s house..Preeto opens the door he looks at her she smiles standing there..hez surprised and confused at the same time as to how Preeto looking so happy...she asks him to come in.. Preeto then says mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai Rajbeer'with a smile on her face apni dil ki baat'he feels very happy hearing that..

Rajbeer: dil ki baat kaho na Preeto

Preeto: before she could say anything Pankaj at the door hey Rajbeer..he comes to Preeto and Rajbeer with smile in his face..Preeto asks kya baat hai Pankaj aaj tum kuch jyada hi khush lagrahe ho

Pankaj: ha Preeto bahut khush hun kyunki Sunny ane wala hai

Rajbeer asks Sunny kaun hai..Pankaj says Sunny mera bhai hai woh ayega toh mera saara kam kardega..Meanwhile Meeta di calls Pankaj then he goes

Beeji sees Rajbeer and with a smile Rajbeer beta tum agaye

Beeji then asks Preeto: Preeto tumne Simran ko call ki..Beeji mein abhi call karti hun

Preeto calls Simi...She says Simran is not lifting..Rajbeer says wait I will try
Rajbeer calls Simi she doesn't lift his call also..he says to Beeji and Preeto I  will go to her home now and ask her come.

NA Home:

Rajbeer at NA house goes to simi' s  room he notices simi crying he in shock..simi kya hua tum ro rahe ho aur mera phone bhi nahi uthaya yeh kaisi haalat bana rakhi ho tum'Simi plz kuch bolo

Simi: she doesn't want to hide anything so she says Rajbeer maine tumse pyaar kiya hai mujhe laga tum bhi mujhse pyaar karte ho lekin nahi all my dreams shattered Rajbeer she holding his shirt..Rajbeer shocked simi tum mujhe lekin tum mere dost ho mere sabse achi dost my best friend..she still crying even more..

Rajbeer: he keeps his hands on her shoulder and says Simi plz don't cryyy u know that I cant see u crying im sorry simi really sorry that I have hurt u'anjanee mein tumhe bahut dukh pahunchaye

Simi: Rajbeer kya tum mujhe wada karoge ki tum meri best friend humesha rahoge main apna best friend khona nahi chahti

Rajbeer: Simi yeh tum kaise baate kar rahe ho ofcourse u know that I will be there for u always'tumhara yeh best friend wada karta hai'

Simi: she smiles and says Rajbeer iss waqt mujhe khush honi chahiye ki u have got love of ur life u have got Preeto in ur life'lekin dekho main yaha apni dukh share kar rahi ho abh yeh sab chodo aur plz Preeto ko iske bare bilkul mat bolna

Rajbeer says sorry giving her a hug

Simi: Rajbeer main kuch der akela rehna chahti hun I will meet u again

Rajbeer : okkk.and Simi plz don't cry promise me

Simi: Smiles and agrees saying im ok rajbeer

Rajbeer: he leaves saying mein phir milti hun tumse

Rajbeer in car(driving): he feels bad that he has hurt simi unknowingly..he wanted to tell everything to Preeto but as simi refused to he decides to hide for now and talk abt it later after Pankeeta' s Marriage

Preeto Home:

Rajbeer comes back to Preeto' s home..Preeto asks simran nahi ayi..woh thodi busy hai keh rahi thi kuch friends ki party mein jana hai

beeji papaji and everyone start talking about arrangements of Roka and each one decide what work they will be doing..decorations ka saara kaam Rajbeer ko diya jata hai

Beeji : Rajbeer beta tum yaha humare ghar kyun nahi rehjate meri matlab Roka tak bahut sare kaam honge na

Papaji: Ha Rajbeer tumhe ane jane mein takleef hoga isliye Meeta ki Roka tak yehi rukjao

Rajbeer: agrees and looking at Preeto he smiles..Preeto also smiles...

Rajbeer leaves to bring his luggage bag

Night Preeto at terrace :

Preeto thinking of Rajbeer and all the happy moments that she has spent with him

Rajbeer is back to preeto' s home with his luggage bag 'Beeji shows him his room

Rajbeer then searches for Preeto and as meeta di was passing he asked about where preeto is Meeta di says shayad chath pe hogi Preeto

Rajbeer then goes to terrace he finds Preeto there...

He sees her smiling and says mere bare mein soch rahe ho

Preeto: as she hears his voice feels happy..Rajbeer aap yaha with wide smile

Rajbeer: maine kuch pucha

Preeto: nahi woh bas Roka arahi hai na uske bare mein

Rajbeer: acha toh phir itna smile kyun kar rahi thi'he comes near to her

Preeto: kyun smile karna koi paap hai

Rajbeer: acha woh chodo aur yeh batao ki tum mujhe subah kuch bolne wali thi

Preeto: mai kuch nahi toh

Rajbeer: he comes more close to her and whispers in her ears apni dil ki baat

Preeto blushes and tries to go frm there but he holds her hand stoping her frm going

Preeto: Rajbeer haat chodoBlushing

Rajbeer: nahi chodunga

Preeto: Rajbeer bahut raat hochuki hai mujhe abh sona hai

Rajbeer: he grabs her close to him..both his hands on her waist...Blushing

Pyaar hai humko..

Yeh chupana kyun..

Mausam salona hai

Jaage hain armaan

Main hoon dil hai tu hai

Preeto: Rajbeer kya kar rahe ho koi dekhlega

Rajbeer: dekhne do..abh bolne tak main nahi chodunga tumhe

Preeto: smiles and then says acha mai meeta di ki roka din bolungi..abh chodo mujhe

Rajbeer: asks pakka

Preeto: ha pakka

Both smile and say goodnight to eachother.Big smile



thank god...at least u made simmi tell rb d truth...

very realistic part...cvs can follow ur track...& we all will b delighted...

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Posted: 27 January 2012 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by snehapatro

Day 3:

Rajbeer sees that all are busy down in the hall mauka ka fayda uthata hai he goes to Preeto' s room...Wink

Preeto' s room:

Preeto looking into mirror getting ready wearing pink color bangles matching to her pink saree...Smile

Rajbeer : ache lag rahe ho ( he standing near the door)

Phoolon jaisi hai yeh ladki
Hai yeh ladki pariyon jaisi hai 
Bholi bholi khoyi khoyi
Hirani si hai yeh ladki
Komal komal yeh ladki
Sundar ladki


Preeto : smiles..Rajbeer aap yaha

Rajbeer: bas kuch meetha khane ka mann kar raha tha so puchne agaya

Preeto: toh phir jake kitchen mein beeji ko pucho

Rajbeer : acha mujhe kuch aur bhi chahiye tha he comes bit near to her saying it( standing side of the bed)

Preeto: kya..?

Rajbeer: puchlun

Preeto: ha puchiye

Rajbeer: winking he says kiss

Preeto sharmake tries to go away frm there as she wore saree she was abt to fall..Rajbeer holds her his hands on her waist both lost in the moment looking into each other eyes

Aankhien yeh aankhien
Sagar se gehri yeh aankhien hai
Jhookti hai
Uthati hai
Sharmeeli se aankhien
Yeh aankhien sapno ki rajdhani

Saare..jugnoo..taare
Inse hi jagmagana seekhe

 

Rajbeer says Saree pehna hai sambhalke chalni chahiye she smiles and abt to stand but looses her balance falling on the bed by making him fall on her.'both upon each other very close for a moment'

Mera dil..sang sang leheraye
Dhadka hi jaye
Tere zulf se mehki hui jo chahon hai
Woh hai meri manzil
teri saare gum saari khushiyan
Ab dono ki hai, hai kehta dil

Dilon jaisi hai yeh ladki


Hai yeh ladki pariyon jaisi hai 

She then pushes him smiles..gets up frm there as she was abt to leave frm the place he again stops her holding her hand says ruko na preeto and grabs her towards him..

Chand pe tu, main dharti pe
Thodi toh paas aaja
Dhadkan mein tu samahja
Main tere..geet gaon
Yeh armaan yeh tamanna
Hai aur dil mein tu hai tu hai tu hai

Preeto: mujhe neeche jana hai Rajbeer and leaves blushingggBlushing



wow...sooo cute romance...beautifully complemented by ur song choices...

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Posted: 27 January 2012 at 2:00pm | IP Logged
Nice and cute romance  EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed Embarrassed  and good way of ending Simran's mis-understanding 

When are your next parts coming ?? Sach mein aaj kal hawa mein sirf Rajpreet hi Rajpreet hai and am liking it ...

Awesome job Sneha Thumbs Up and keep them coming dear ...

Nice songs and post the movie names also if possible Smile

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