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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 9:09am | IP Logged
Lovely poems,  shona, anupa , haffie,  archu  ,  Clap

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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kavyasam

Lovely poems,  shona, anupa , haffie,  archu  ,  Clap

aawww thanksHeart
btw, im haffie

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Posted: 29 January 2012 at 12:33pm | IP Logged

Unspoken Feelings

The feelings I have for you

I wish I could tell

From the day I saw you

I captured you in my heart

There were time of rain and storm

And there were time when it was sunny

We faced it together

I found solace in your embrace

The beautiful face that makes me forget the world

Your smile is cure to my every pain

The journey of my life was beautiful

Because I had you as my companion

I never imagined our ways will parted someday

The separation became unbearable for me

I craved for you every moment of my life

I hoped you will come back to me

Days, months, years passed, I couldn't see a glimpse of yours

Perhaps you were gone forever

Yet my stubborn heart didn't accept your departure

Time heals every pain, then why my heart still aches for you

I tried to erase every memory we shared

But, little I knew it will only fill me with more agony

You are unforgettable, irreplaceable

To forget you my heart needs stop beating

Because with every beat it takes your name

Eventually memory became my companion

I realized no matter what I do

You will remain the ruler of my heart.



Edited by Angel.KMH.AK - 29 January 2012 at 12:37pm

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Posted: 29 January 2012 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
hey shona !!!!!
how are you?? missed you !
wow... just an beautiful poem...
its not the one which u were talking about right??
nevertheless, i love it !!!!!!

its sad and beautiful... love the tittle, totally fits the poem!
it really sounds sad, because the guy or girl never told about her/his feelings to the one he/she loves !!!
aaaww the ending is really sad... its just an memory now...
i have this weird feeling in me now...

you truly are talented my shona !!!!
you captured the emotions perfectly...

another masterpiece from you!! and i totally adore it ! Heart

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Posted: 29 January 2012 at 12:50pm | IP Logged

Aaw Shona! This poem is absolutely beautiful!! <3
So much emotion nd description.. amazing!
U seriously hav natural talent Shona..
Do write more.. cnt wait to read more of ur poetry :)

x

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Posted: 29 January 2012 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by DarkDove

hey shona !!!!!
how are you?? missed you !
wow... just an beautiful poem...
its not the one which u were talking about right??
nevertheless, i love it !!!!!!

its sad and beautiful... love the tittle, totally fits the poem!
it really sounds sad, because the guy or girl never told about her/his feelings to the one he/she loves !!!
aaaww the ending is really sad... its just an memory now...
i have this weird feeling in me now...

you truly are talented my shona !!!!
you captured the emotions perfectly...

another masterpiece from you!! and i totally adore it ! Heart

thank u dear ... I'm good preparing for another exam ~~ wht abt u n I missed u too my barbie btw yeah it's not da one I told u ~~ well I'm done with da oother one just need to edit it ~~ well I don't know though when I'm going to post itWink

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Posted: 29 January 2012 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MsSweetheart96


Aaw Shona! This poem is absolutely beautiful!! <3
So much emotion nd description.. amazing!
U seriously hav natural talent Shona..
Do write more.. cnt wait to read more of ur poetry :)

x

hey sweetu sanju how r u ~~thnx a lot.. aww long time missed u n did u miss me ~~nah I don't think so right...ok wht shud I say u want more.. good news I've ideas for two more poems and I've written one alreday ~~ but don't no when I'm going to post itLOL
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Posted: 29 January 2012 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
Haffie@ hey by da way I'm going to write your poem after my exam is over n do tell me if want anything specific in da poem ~~ I mean anything abt da themeSmile

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