Kitani Mohabbat Hai - 2
Kitani Mohabbat Hai - 2

India-Forums

   

>|POETRY|<~ARJUHI LAND~ :) UPD P 54 JAN 10 (Page 8)

mysticlover IF-Dazzler
mysticlover
mysticlover

Joined: 05 July 2011
Posts: 4163

Posted: 26 January 2012 at 3:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..anshita..

aww achu it was too nice...:)
write more yar..


tnk u!Embarrassed


The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

..anshita..Angel4KMH.BI

DarkDove Goldie
DarkDove
DarkDove

Joined: 13 November 2011
Posts: 2054

Posted: 26 January 2012 at 3:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mysticlover

hello friends! i have written something and i would never call it a poem but felt like sharing! it is nothing compared to talented poets here but i just wrote it!


             Can't Love You

My heart keeps pounding hard. don't know why?

   It keeps on banging remembering something,

Is it remembering you my love? Or am i just dreaming!

   Your one missed call and am dreaming again?

Why do you come back to me? I can't bear the loss again!

  Go to where you came! I can't be where you are!

Go back and never come back to me! I can't have you now!
 
  Your one message and i am broken again, into pieces!

Your one smile and i am falling deep into the abyss, losing me!

  Go away to never return! Can't wait for you, Can't love you...
  

hey now dont talk like that !!!! dont say ur nothing compared to the others poets dear...
everyone has talent !!!!
and as for the poem... its soo deep... its amazing...wow... im sorry.. i really have no words this time...
i will post this now and then read the poem a million times more before i will tell you what i feel about it Embarrassed

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

mysticloverAngel4KMH.BI

mysticlover IF-Dazzler
mysticlover
mysticlover

Joined: 05 July 2011
Posts: 4163

Posted: 26 January 2012 at 3:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DarkDove

Originally posted by mysticlover

hello friends! i have written something and i would never call it a poem but felt like sharing! it is nothing compared to talented poets here but i just wrote it!


             Can't Love You

My heart keeps pounding hard. don't know why?

   It keeps on banging remembering something,

Is it remembering you my love? Or am i just dreaming!

   Your one missed call and am dreaming again?

Why do you come back to me? I can't bear the loss again!

  Go to where you came! I can't be where you are!

Go back and never come back to me! I can't have you now!
 
  Your one message and i am broken again, into pieces!

Your one smile and i am falling deep into the abyss, losing me!

  Go away to never return! Can't wait for you, Can't love you...
  

hey now dont talk like that !!!! dont say ur nothing compared to the others poets dear...
everyone has talent !!!!
and as for the poem... its soo deep... its amazing...wow... im sorry.. i really have no words this time...
i will post this now and then read the poem a million times more before i will tell you what i feel about it Embarrassed

dear i knw evry1 have a talent! itz dat i used 2 feel dat i am quiet gud @ writing poems bt aftr reading the poems in here i knew i was wrong! so it's a confession!Smile

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

DarkDoveAngel4KMH.BI

DarkDove Goldie
DarkDove
DarkDove

Joined: 13 November 2011
Posts: 2054

Posted: 26 January 2012 at 4:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mysticlover

Originally posted by DarkDove

Originally posted by mysticlover

hello friends! i have written something and i would never call it a poem but felt like sharing! it is nothing compared to talented poets here but i just wrote it!


             Can't Love You

My heart keeps pounding hard. don't know why?

   It keeps on banging remembering something,

Is it remembering you my love? Or am i just dreaming!

   Your one missed call and am dreaming again?

Why do you come back to me? I can't bear the loss again!

  Go to where you came! I can't be where you are!

Go back and never come back to me! I can't have you now!
 
  Your one message and i am broken again, into pieces!

Your one smile and i am falling deep into the abyss, losing me!

  Go away to never return! Can't wait for you, Can't love you...
  

hey now dont talk like that !!!! dont say ur nothing compared to the others poets dear...
everyone has talent !!!!
and as for the poem... its soo deep... its amazing...wow... im sorry.. i really have no words this time...
i will post this now and then read the poem a million times more before i will tell you what i feel about it Embarrassed

dear i knw evry1 have a talent! itz dat i used 2 feel dat i am quiet gud @ writing poems bt aftr reading the poems in here i knew i was wrong! so it's a confession!Smile

omg... i cant believ you just said that!!!!! wat do you mean by after reading the poems?? huh??

now dont talk like that... ur not gud at writing poems... but ur amazing and rocking at writing poems !!!!!
i have never written a poem before and just posted my first one here becos shona requested from  me a poem.. im not good at writing poems ...
and u are !!! and also i love all your stories!!!! ur an amazing writer !!!!

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

mysticloverAngel4KMH.BI

mysticlover IF-Dazzler
mysticlover
mysticlover

Joined: 05 July 2011
Posts: 4163

Posted: 26 January 2012 at 4:37am | IP Logged
sorry baba i am not saying it again! happy?

now smile :-)

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

DarkDoveAngel4KMH.BI

DarkDove Goldie
DarkDove
DarkDove

Joined: 13 November 2011
Posts: 2054

Posted: 26 January 2012 at 4:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mysticlover

sorry baba i am not saying it again! happy?

now smile :-)


okay  I will smile Big smile
yes im happy !!!

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

mysticloverAngel4KMH.BI

Angel4KMH.BI IF-Rockerz
Angel4KMH.BI
Angel4KMH.BI

Joined: 17 January 2012
Posts: 5877

Posted: 26 January 2012 at 8:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mysticlover

hello friends! i have written something and i would never call it a poem but felt like sharing! it is nothing compared to talented poets here but i just wrote it!


             Can't Love You

My heart keeps pounding hard. don't know why?

   It keeps on banging remembering something,

Is it remembering you my love? Or am i just dreaming!

   Your one missed call and am dreaming again?

Why do you come back to me? I can't bear the loss again!

  Go to where you came! I can't be where you are!

Go back and never come back to me! I can't have you now!
 
  Your one message and i am broken again, into pieces!

Your one smile and i am falling deep into the abyss, losing me!

  Go away to never return! Can't wait for you, Can't love you...
  


dear don't say tht ever u write beautifully now it's writing ffs or poems I love both ~~ this poem u wrote is very beautiful ~~ look I was supposed to comment after I come back cauz now I come for a short while n only resv. my places but after reading ur poem I cudn't stop myself n I didn't like wht u said abt ur poetic self ~~ u r as much talented as evryone else is ~~ thank u dear for considering this thread n posting ur wonderful work ~~ Smile n cough cough talented n me probably u didn't check my other comments ~~ ur talented word only goes for Haffie n Anu di ~~ I don't think I'm tht good at poetry but somewhere I love writing it n so opened da thread ~~ btw don't mind wht I'm going to say now but tht's my command LOL don't say anyhting like tht again n flourish this thred n give us privelage to read more of ur poemsEmbarrassed


Edited by Angel.KMH.AK - 29 January 2012 at 12:51pm

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

DarkDovemysticlover

Angel4KMH.BI IF-Rockerz
Angel4KMH.BI
Angel4KMH.BI

Joined: 17 January 2012
Posts: 5877

Posted: 26 January 2012 at 8:12am | IP Logged
btw let me no if u want ur name as archana or achu in da index ~~ right now I'm writing Archana if u want me to change later I'll do thtSmile

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

DarkDovemysticlover

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
||...ArjuHi Scenes Corner...||

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 28 29

Author: Anjalii...xXx   Replies: 227   Views: 21692

Anjalii...xXx 227 21692 28 September 2013 at 9:56am by shibz
arjuhi ff -war and love- part 5 is finally up

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 25 26

Author: angili   Replies: 204   Views: 14861

angili 204 14861 09 June 2013 at 9:55am by ..Ice-Cube..
FF:ARJUHI:Benaam Ek Rishta- CH6 Pg.51..05-11-11

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 58 59

Author: mIsHeZ.x   Replies: 469   Views: 17156

mIsHeZ.x 469 17156 05 January 2013 at 12:01pm by ...deepz...
Dil Ki Awaz ~ The Poetry Thread

2 3 4 5 6

Author: AmnaIsh   Replies: 40   Views: 1626

AmnaIsh 40 1626 13 July 2011 at 4:55pm by zach
Poetry for the 100th epi: Simply Arjuhi

2 3

Author: DUGGUlicious   Replies: 17   Views: 770

DUGGUlicious 17 770 15 March 2011 at 10:04pm by ..anshita..

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Kitani Mohabbat Hai - 2 Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index