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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
Hey guys I've a big exam coming up, so will be going away for abt a week ~~ but plz keep posting ur wonderful works here ~~ I'll read n comment after I come back n same thing goes for da ff, ss, os writers ~~ if possible will try to come for a short while sometime n visit IF, but can't say anything for sure ~~ Right Now I'm going to update another poem n there wud be no update from me until next week ~~ will miss everyone

wit love ~~ ShonaEmbarrassed

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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
 
 The Delicate Rose

Rose is a delicate creature

With refined petals

Only a single touch is enough

To give the smooth feeling

A sight to watch for the eyes

Beautified with its color

Breathed in its fragrance

Sends in a world of serenity

Indeed, the most innocent creature

Yet, the most vulnerable

Just a tiny scratch to hurt

And the pure heart will be broken into pieces

Perhaps, it's hard to escape wickedness

The rose has its own weapon

The thorns to protect against odds

Makes a shell around itself

Lives in a world of imagination

A world that is of its own

We, the grown-ups just need to nurture it.

 




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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
wow...
this poem has left me speechless and breathless my shona...
they way you combined innocence, a fragile heart, beauty and of course the rose together... The poem is gorgeous...

i see the comparison between a beautiful red rose and a fragile heart...

you really have talent my shona...
wow.. your like the first poet i have the pleasure to meet and get to know...

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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
oooww forgot to mention this...
like all your poems.. this one is flawless as well...

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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by DarkDove

wow...
this poem has left me speechless and breathless my shona...
they way you combined innocence, a fragile heart, beauty and of course the rose together... The poem is gorgeous...

i see the comparison between a beautiful red rose and a fragile heart...

you really have talent my shona...
wow.. your like the first poet i have the pleasure to meet and get to know...

aww u r too cutee ~~ it's a big compliment for me ~~ I'm really happy tht  I got da plaesure to meet a wonderful person like uSmile Wink



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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Angel.KMH.AK

Originally posted by DarkDove

wow...
this poem has left me speechless and breathless my shona...
they way you combined innocence, a fragile heart, beauty and of course the rose together... The poem is gorgeous...

i see the comparison between a beautiful red rose and a fragile heart...

you really have talent my shona...
wow.. your like the first poet i have the pleasure to meet and get to know...

aww u r too cutee ~~ it's a big compliment for me ~~ I'm really happy tht  I got da plaesure to meet a wonderful person like uSmile Wink

aaawww sissy... ur also too cute Embarrassed
aaww u think im a wonderful person,,,, thats too sweet shona...
and you r such a sweet,nice, amazing and rocking talented person !!!

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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 7:50pm | IP Logged
Beautiful lines :) Liked the simplicity and deep, true feelings embedded within.
keep it up.

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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 8:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by zach

Beautiful lines :) Liked the simplicity and deep, true feelings embedded within.
keep it up.

thnx a lot

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