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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 9:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DarkDove

Meeting my love...

Only the tittle seems enough to attract someone... Make someone wonder and ponder about... How did your meeting with your love went? How will it go? It makes one curious to find out...

The poem was mesmerizing. My shona has great talent !

It from a guy/ arjun pov right?

I love how you described one moment through lines of words ... You described it perfectly... I also felt like the time stopped, came to a halt...

Aaww she left him? Thats sad.. Omg.. I get it.. .He is seeing his love again.. And describes her.. She is still as beautiful as ever... He cant be with her, but he can feel her...His eyes are becoming teary.. unspoken emotions will flow out today and he will allow it...

The only woman he has ever loved...i can find enough words to describe it...

p.s: im gonna post my little poem for you on another commentBig smile

love you

xxhaffie

Thnx dear I just love to read ur comments...

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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 9:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DarkDove

<font color="#660000">Dedicated to my Shona!</font>
<font color="#660000">From: Haffie...</font>
The poem is kind of dark, but I hope you will like itHeart

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<p>Your innocence is what I want...


I love you, but do you love me?


I want you, do you want me?


The moment got stuck with the time.


My Love, what we share is not a crime.



Surrender to me, you can't keep running away.


Come, come dance with me, we will slowly sway.


To the soft music, that is to be play.


Your skin, as soft as velvet.


Your eyes, as beautiful as an ocean of innocence.


They way you shiver when I touch you, it shows me that you are untouched, filled with pureness.


Let me give your chaste lips a soft kiss.


Don't struggle or else I will miss.


I took you, have you in my grasp.


My Love, your strength is compared to a little fragile maiden, it wasn't a tough task.


You are the dove that I will never let out of its cage, never will let fly.


Come closer Love, don't be shy.


You see my Love, it was only a matter of time.


Before I possessed you, own you.


Only a matter of time, before you became mine...


 

Omg I'm in awe wht a poem u wrote Haffie maan Gaye guru apko ~~ words r not enough to describe ur thoughts...dear now u tell me where do u get ur inspiration from ~~ I didn't like ur poem but just loved it...superbClapClap



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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 9:23am | IP Logged
uuhhhmmm truth to be told... i was just sitting on the sofa with my laptop on my lap...
i was thinking about my FF: a vampire's obsession... and thats how i came up with the idea for the poem !!!!!
i get my inspiration from the most weird places and weirdest thoughtsTongue

cool.. you love it! thats awesome !!!


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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 9:29am | IP Logged
wow guys 
keep it up 
nice poems
update more

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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 9:56am | IP Logged
Wow! Love this thread..

@Shona - awesome poetry!!

@Haffie - i didnt knw u did poetry as well..

Love them guys.. keep them coming.. i cnt give u a full analysis of the poems.. will do wen im free though.. buh they r amazing!! keep them coming..

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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 9:57am | IP Logged
very nice poems..Smile

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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 10:28am | IP Logged
what  a lovely thread..thanks a lot for the poem you wrote on my FF..I havent written romantic poems for a long time..I have once written this for Amna..have a read

PETALS OF LOVE

 

The gleam of twilight blossomed my desire

The feather soft touch of memory,

He was my only solitaire,

With a daydream to marry.

 

There I walked with him, many a thousand mile,

But the journey seemed endless,

In my mind lingered his smile,

Oh! ever have I been so helpless.

 

He walked with me for a while, holding my precious dream

Walked in to give in to my loneliness only for some time.

A touch of grace for a while,

A sprinkle of love on the dying rhyme

 

It soothed my aching mind

And lifted my spirit from the grind.

Hope has its power

Love has its flavour

Life has its moments

But time?????

 

With time he rejuvenated my only hope, my love, my life

A glorified smile spread across as I walked down the aisle as his wife…..

 


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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Great thread shona
 
guys, luved reading ur poems - glad to know that we have great poets in our forum

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