Originally posted by: myviewprem
very good poems u are exceptionally talented
Originally posted by: -pranjal-
WOW
Amazing Shona :) U are awesome yaar :) thank u n u r also
I loved the First Two lines ...WOW what a Start 👏 hehhe I also loved them😊
"Tum Gulab Ki Phool Ho Ya Koi Khilti KaliMehekti Khushboon Ho Tum Mere Zindagi Ki Gali"
Awesome thanx for u lovely comment❤️
WOW...BEAUTIFUL ^_^ ^_^ thanx bhai
Bahut hi umda kavita hai, shona sis. Dil garden garden ho gaya 😃 ye kya tha😆 lagta hai bhabhi ne aapko aab majnu bhi bana diya hai 😆 but truly loved the lines... heard it after a long time from some one...thanx a lot bro😃
Originally posted by: KaranKittu4eva
Beautiful!!! Meri Shona you write so well and deep! Mashallah. Even though my hindi sucks I read it a few time and got it so sweet ❤️
Originally posted by: DarkDove
Shonapeare!!!!! Hi! Hello Barbie ji
Omg!!! I read the poem!!! Woman, your hindi is getting better than mine:( hahhaha chill but liked what u said😆
Heheh good going!!! The poem is beautiful and dedicated to Doll! yup it is😊
The poem really left me breathless! Such a beautiful use of words! Flawless! awww missed ur comments a lot
Shona shona shona!!! I am missing you badly!!!!! How r u??? And how are your exams going! Are they finished or not?? missed u too n still missing u...scrapped u check😃
Btw, thank you for the sweet testimonial! I love it!! hey no thanx...happy to hear that...
Love love love you!!!!! luv u loads🤗
Originally posted by: MsSweetheart96
Wow! Shona I am speechless.. dnt knw wat to say bouh ur amazing work bcos wateva I say is not gonna b enuf to describe this.. oh u r so sweet yaar...finally u commented 😃
Thank you for dedicating it to me.. u better not mention again😆 but u r wc
Its so sweet nd absolutely adorable <3 The meaning is beautiful as well and it sounds amazing.. thank you! :) thanx for ur lovely words n glad liked it... 🤗
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