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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 4:21am | IP Logged
Hey guys as some of u know I'm new in IF...I was thinking about this after posting two poems on Anu Di n Mahi's ffs ~~ poetry is a way of expressing feelings and it brings out emotions that u r may not be able to share...so basically feel free to post any poem here dedicating to our arjuhi and give ur thoughts & feelings words!!! I don't know if it is a good idea but will wait for u guys to response...hope u_kitni mohabbatians like  dis ~~ btw I'm ShonaSmile


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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 4:26am | IP Logged
So let me start wit da poem session first I'm posting three poems...as I mentioned earlier I posted two poems on Anu Di n Mahi's ffs...I'm re posting dem here~~~I'm not a poet or neither my poems r good but it just caught my interest..hehehheLOL positive or negative plz give feedback, it will help me improve my writing n if u like plz hit the like button...okay enough of my vashan ~~ let's beginSmile
n plz ignore da mistakes ~~

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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 4:38am | IP Logged
cool shona... do post them here.. so i can give more easily my feedback to you!!!

CONGRATS ON UR FIRST TOPIC !!!!Heart



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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 4:42am | IP Logged
Haffie@ sure dear ~~ ur feedback means a lot to me...the puppy is really cute ~~ is dis puppy u..dear haffieeLOL


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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 4:50am | IP Logged

Index

Meeting My Love ~~ (pg 1 ~~ Shona)
Miss The Rain ~~ (pg 1 ~~ Shona)
I Remember ~~ (pg 1 ~~ Shona)
Your Innocence Is What I want ~~ (pg 3 ~~ Haffie)
Petals Of Love~~ (pg 4 ~~ Anupa)
The Delicate Rose ~~ (pg 6 ~~ Shona)
Can't Love You ~~ (pg 7 ~~ Archana)
Unspoken Feelings ~~ (pg 9 ~~ Shona)
Pyaar Ka Ehsaas ~~ (pg 13 ~~ Shona)
Pehla Pyar ~~ (pg 13 ~~ Jaya)
I Wish To Live ~~ (pg 14 ~~ Shona)
The Rose ~~ (pg 17 ~~ Haffie)
Embracing The Death ~~ (pg 19 ~~ Shona)
Mohabaabt Hi Mohabaat ~~ (pg 21 ~~ Jai)
Opposite Attracts_Meant To Be ~~ (pg 24 ~~ Shona)
Mohabbat Ki Haad Se Zaydaa ~~ (pg 25 ~~ Shona)
Khwaishe ~~ (pg 26 ~~ Shona)
Kitni Mohabbat Hai 3 ~~ (pg 26 ~~ Shona)
Dil Ki Baate ~~ (pg 29 ~~ Shona)
Broken Heart ~~ (pg 35 ~~ Shona)
Haale Dil ~~ (pg 39 ~~ Shona)
The Shining Star ~~ (pg 42 ~~ Shona)
Down The Aisle ~~ (pg 45 ~~ Shona)
Ankahee ~~ (pg 45 ~~ Shona)
My Friend ~~ (pg 45 ~~ Shona)
Dil Se Dua ~~ (pg 50 ~~ Shona)
You Shine ~~ (pg 50 ~~ Shona)
Hoga Kahi ~~ (pg 50 ~~ Shona)
Mera Dil ~~ (pg 52 ~~ Shona)
Magical Spell ~~ (pg 52 ~~ Shona)
Zindagi Jeena Hai Mujhe ~~ (pg 54 ~~ Shona)
Tum Sang Zindaagi ~~ (pg 54 ~~ Shona)
Dil Se Hai Duniya ~~ (pg 54 ~~ Shona)

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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 4:56am | IP Logged

Meeting My Love

I can't believe my eyes

I see my angel

she has the same charm

beautiful as ever, inside and out,

everything stopped around me

It's only us; nothing else is visible to me

my thoughts came to halt and

my words are stuck in my throat

my racing heart will flutter anytime

several emotions are erupting within me,

I can't be with her, but I can feel her

the same warmth of love

the feeling of being close to her again

sending tingling sensation inside me,

my eyes are becoming teary

all unspoken emotions will come out today

I missed her, I felt lonely

perhaps I was angry with her for leaving me

but can't stop loving her, stay a single moment without her

She resides in my soul, in my heart

The only woman that I ever have loved

She is my angel, she is my Arohi !!!


~~ Arjun's POV ~~

 

 

 



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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 4:59am | IP Logged

Miss The Rain

The first ray of sun is gleaming through the window,

lightening up the room with its brightness.

Hours passed, the warmth of the day increased,

making her restless, elevating the volcano inside her.

She's sweating with no cool air, going to constrict like a flower anytime,

standing near the window, her eyes are shining like pearl.

She's waiting eagerly with hope in her eyes,

to see a single drop of rain, feel the wet kiss of rain,

time flew, to her hope there is no sign of rain.

It's seemed her prayer will not be answered anytime soon,

The moon is about to come out, indicating wait of another long day

leaving her with hope in her eyes!!!


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Posted: 24 January 2012 at 5:05am | IP Logged

I Remember

I remember the day I met you

I remember when we first talked

I never thought we would ever become mates

You were an outsider for me

Whenever we sat together we argued the most

Neither of us felt friendly toward each other.

I remember the difference we had

I remember the disliking we shared

I don't know the moment you came so close to my heart

One day we were separate then we came together

You made a special place in my heart

I saw our relationship finding a new meaning

It was difficult to explain.

Now I can't remember any bitterness that we had

I don't remember any outsider

All I remember someone special

Without you I can't even imagine my life

When I think of you I smile

Every moment I spend with you becomes a memory

You are the one who makes me feel special

You are the one who can handle me at my worst

Without you every moment is difficult to pass

If someone is close to my heart

Then, it's only you my love. 

 

 

 

 

 



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