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Posted: 23 January 2012 at 11:48am | IP Logged

Heyya frnds! I am writing OS for the first time. Sorry if its not good! But do leave comments so that i can improve myself and my OSLOL!


*For hindi readers only!


Comments/criticism/suggestions..all are heartly welcomed :)



Edited by --nIdHi-- - 23 January 2012 at 11:48am

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Posted: 23 January 2012 at 11:51am | IP Logged

Start of a new day(examination day). Rocky and Ginny getting ready for school.

Sweety: Chalo baccho nashta lag gaya hai.

Rocky: Aaya maa!

Sweety: Oye Rocky teri taiyyari to puri hai na.

Rocky(a bit nervous): Haan maa lagbhag puri taiyyari hai.

Sweety(angry): Lagbhag ka kya matlab hai.

Rocky(chilling): Chill maa!

Sweety: Chup kar chill ke bacche! Agar 80% se ek bhi percent kam aaya na to phir tu dekhna main kya karti hu tere saath.

Rocky: Maa…

Ginny: Maa jaldi se naashta do!

Sweety: Tujhe kis baat ki itni jaldi hai.

Ginny: School  nahi jaana hai kya maa.

Sweety: Acha jane se pehle babaji ka ashirvaad lena mat bhulna.

Rocky and Ginny :Theek hai maa.

Rocky and Ginny takes blessings of babaji and sweety as takes there bags and goes to board there bus suddenly Sweety stops rocky and ginny says

Rocky apne haath ka khayal rakhna aur koi taklif hoto teacher ko batana.

Aur ginny tu ache se paper likhna.

 

She kisses rocky and ginny's forehead and tell them to board the bus.

Sweety turns then suddenly rocky and ginny stops sweety and says "We Love u Maa".


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Posted: 23 January 2012 at 11:53am | IP Logged
Not that much good! no thoughts were coming in mind so i took of examination as its exam time and most of the time kids like me give answers like rocky lagbhag taiyyari ho gayi hai and mom scolds hamesha ka yahi natak hai! kabhi bhi puri taiyyari nahi hoti hai tumhari!LOL

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Posted: 29 January 2012 at 7:38am | IP Logged
Fab OS Nidhi! I just read it! it is really nice. Keep it up! Keep writing more
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Posted: 29 January 2012 at 8:50am | IP Logged
too good OS Nidhi! loved it. keep writing... Smile
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Posted: 29 January 2012 at 9:11am | IP Logged
Thanx for reading it guys...I m getting good topic to write over...I can write a love story but cant write on mother's love and this show is basically on mothers  love so... if i get any topic will definitely write...
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Posted: 29 January 2012 at 8:15pm | IP Logged
thats cute.. reminds me of when i was in high school. now that i'm in uni, i live on campus so mom asks me about exams AFTER i come home... by then there is no point in saying anything because exams are long over..lol   

 another topic u can write on is saas-bahu.. maybe how they become friends or  i havent seen recently but i guess sweety hurt her mil... maybe write an apology scene...  just some ideas if u have time 

btw enjoyed reading and can't wait for more =D
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Posted: 30 January 2012 at 9:09am | IP Logged
very nice os 

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