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Posted: 21 January 2012 at 11:10am | IP Logged

You guessed right, another weekend One Shot for all you ArHi fans, I have emailed this update to everyone in my email update list, if you want to be included for updates to all my work, please email me at [email protected], whether you are an IF member or not. I am not PMing anyone on I-F anymore, so do sign up with me for email updates if you want to be notified of updates x

 

Here is a link to my index, do check out my other works!

 

I am going to post updates for this OS through the weekend if you guys want me to continue.. Smile


Part 2

Part 3




OS : Poison


Part 1 

 

"You let me win" she stumbled as if in a trance, mind lost somewhere, before he could walk away, voice collapsing at her last word. She knew if she didn't speak the silence would engulf them both, drowning them in its emptiness.

 

He stood in front of her, shaking from the intense furrow of emotions running through him, his hand was burning, so he flinched away from where he held her around the waist, leaving a hollow sensation at the loss of touch.

 

She glanced down nervously looking where he had held her moments before. The lights around them were dim, their ears were still drumming from the blast of music that had just ended, the hum of the audience behind the curtains fell as a soft murmur against everything.

 

Anjali had announced the scores, Khushi had just bumped the Gupta's up by another 10 points, giving them 24 to counter the Raizada's 23. Why did he help her? She tried to ask that question out loud, but found that she couldn't move. Everytime she tried to order herself to speak, she would get a glimpse of Arnav burying his face into her neck, or running his hands across her waist, and her stomach would jump.


He looked at her struggling to compose herself, never had he felt a desire so strong before in his life. This girl had come into his life and turned it completely upside down. He hadn't intended to dance that way, not so close anyway. But the heat of the moment, the heat of her skin so close had sent his apprehensiveness flying away. All he had wanted was her, and now what? How do you react to something like that.

 

"Why..did you help me?" she finally managed, eyes glued to his.

 

Arnav tried to look away, but he couldn't. Her eyes looked a dark green in the darkness against her dress. It was such a beautiful colour he couldn't seem to make himself look away.

 

"I..." he didn't know what to say, freezing as she looked at him expectantly. Waiting for answers that she hoped would correct her world, everything was different, everything was so strange. How had they landed up here?

 

 

That's the first part for you, I will update if you guys want me to continue this along till the end.

Please comment and like, and remember, no more PM's, I only to email updates. Email me at [email protected] if you want to be added to my email notification lists for all my work xx

Hayley 

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Edited by ccuteaangel - 31 January 2012 at 1:59pm

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Posted: 21 January 2012 at 11:14am | IP Logged
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me First Dancing
fabulous work as usual ...
waiting for next part...


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Very nice
Pls continue

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Posted: 21 January 2012 at 11:49am | IP Logged
please do continue

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Posted: 21 January 2012 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Omggg the part about him burrying his face in her neck or his finger running accros her waist Blushing Loved ittt update qciklyyy Haley LOVING IT

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please do update soon. brilliant emotions and thoughts
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awesome loved it can't wait for the next part 

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pls continie soon it was great

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