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Posted: 09 May 2006 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
hmmmmmm jasmnine atlast kashish ko patah chal hi gaya ki sujal ko sachchayi ka patah nahi tha.. good..very good...ab saari problems aur tension durr bhaag jayegi aur sujal ,kashish phir se ek ho jayenge.... LOL   jasmine how can sujal be so mean woh kaise keh saktha hain ki usse uska bachche ko bachchana hain aur kashish ko nahi..... Cry par ab shayad sujal ko apni ghalthi ka ehsaas ho aur woh kashish ke pass lout aaye... Wink waise who is the person whom kashish has a kid with..hmm me thinking........... Smile Big smile
plz sujal , kashish ko hamesha ek saath rakhna.. aur bachche ko bhi theek rakhna.... Smile Tongue Big smile
& ya plz continue soon............ Embarrassed
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Posted: 10 May 2006 at 12:30am | IP Logged
hay jasmine gr8 gng... Clap gr8 parts... Clap
really good twist... Wink but i knw sujal will not take revenge.... Tongue he is too good to do that..Wink
and as it is he loves her so much..... Smile
plz cont soon.... Smile
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Posted: 10 May 2006 at 1:27am | IP Logged
jasmine dear plz continue na.. me eagerly waiting to know what will happen......... Big smile
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Posted: 10 May 2006 at 2:43am | IP Logged
sujal ,kashish phir se ek ho jayenge........yupiiiii LOL
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Posted: 10 May 2006 at 3:29am | IP Logged
PART-12

                             Kashish weeps:the person who came as a gud friend 2 my
                             life is Piyush.he was very sweet 2 me.i even wondered
                             whether a Us born boy can b like this.tho I liked him
                             very much,it never turned into luv.but piyush thought
                             differently about me.
                             Once K,P were under a tree. K:what do u want 2
                             tell me?
                             P:I want 2 tell u that…
                             Unexpectedly P hugs her tightly.K was
                             shocked:piyush,wha ts this?leave me plz
                             P looses his hand. K becomes angry & slaps him:how dare
                             u?
                             P :don't u luv me?
                             K:no,u r my friend.
                             P:I 'm sorry kashish.i thot u luv me.
                             P kneels down:plz kashish,don't b angry & break our
                             frienship.
                             K:ok

                             K goes 2 his house.she gets inside the open door &
                             enters P' room.she sees drugs in his room:piyush takes
                             drug?
P cums.his eyes were dim. K:u take drugs?
                             P :ya,so what?
                             K :I never thot that u r this sort of a guy.
                             K was angry & she begins 2 go out.P grabs her hand:u
                             can't go out wounding my heart.
                             K :leave my hand.
                             P :2 leave ur hand?   P laughs:I won't leave u.
                             K gets scared seeing P' eyes.K faints.

                             K weeps:I don't remember anything else sujal.i did'nt
                             see piyush when I opened my eyes.he did'nt cum 2
                             college also.later unexpectedly I realized that I'm
                             pregnant.i was shattered when I relised what happened
                             when I was unconscious.i wanted 2 die.but my parents'
                             tears made me not 2 do that crime.my parents searched 4
                             piyush.but later was known that he's in jail due 2 sum
                             drug case.i cud'nt think of an abortion,bcoz what did
                             that innocent baby do?I gave b'th 2 a baby.my parents
                             tried 2 giv it 2 an orphanage.but I did'nt want my baby
                             2 liv as an orphan while her mother is alive.but my
                             parents gave it 2 an orphanage.but I tolerated it when a
                             childless cuple Rishi-mouli in US adopted my baby.when ur
                             proposal came,I rejected it as I did'nt want 2 cheat
                             u.but my parents told that rishi is ur cusin,if I marry
                             u I 'l get a chance 2 see my daughter.but still I cud'nt
                             think of a marriage.but my parents lied 2 me that
                             they've told u the truth about me.that's how I agreed 2
                             marry u.but now my mama revealed that they'vent told u
                             anything.i was shocked 2 no that I was cheating on my
                             husband who loves me more than his life.but belive me
                             sujal,I did'nt cheat u knowingly.i'm willing 2 punish
                             myself.my mind tells that I won't liv after this
                             delivery.
                             S is shocked.he thinks about tashu's words & his reply 2
                             save only the baby.S's eyes get filled up with tears. S
                             think s:I misunderstood my loving kashish.god,plz 4giv me.
                             K :but I'm not sad even if I die as I don't deserve u.i'm
                             happy 2 die,bcoz I'm sure that u'l look after our baby
                             well.i wanted 2 tell u everything b4 I die.i cud.now I
                             can die.but tell me once that u've 4given me.
                             S bursts into tears & hugs kashish:u hav'nt cheated me
                             kashish.nothing wil happen 2 u.i won't allow anything bad
                             2 happen 2 u while I'm alive

Edited by jasminerahul - 10 May 2006 at 3:30am
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Posted: 10 May 2006 at 3:51am | IP Logged
jasmine yaar just tooo goodd... Clap sujal , kashish phir se ek ho gaye yipeeeeee... LOL hmm tho ab yeh piyush kahaan hain.. Angry mujhe tho lagtha hain ab sujal , piyush ko dhoondkar uski baand bajayega mazaa aa jayega..... Tongue sujal , kashish tho phir se saath ho gaye that's really very damn cooll.. sujal ,kashish hamesha saath mein achche lagtha hain judaa nahii... Embarrassed aur ab jab sujal ,kashish ke saath hain tho kashish ko kuch nahi hoga... LOL
plz continue soon... Smile Tongue
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Posted: 10 May 2006 at 4:47am | IP Logged
jasmine dear just superb.... Clap Clap
too good yaar...... Tongue lovely part.... Clap
cont soon dear..... Smile
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Posted: 10 May 2006 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Part-13....Kashish:after knowing everything also u luv
                          me.u r gr8 sujal
                          Sujal tells in his mind:if u cum 2 no how I planned 2
                          torture u,u'll never find me gr8.
                          S's tears flow down.
                          S goes 2 Tashu:Dr,plz save kashish.
                          Abhay-kusum r surprised 2 see S's change.
                          T:what about ur baby? S:plz save our baby too
                          T becomes upset:I'll try my level best.

                          After sumtime Tashu cums:there is a gud news.both kashish
                          & the baby r saved.
                          All r happy.   T:it's a girl.
                          S:I want 2 see my daughter.
                          Nurse cums:Dr,plz cum fast.the baby is….
                          T goes inside.All r tensed. T cums out.
                          S:whats with my child?
                          Kusum:what happened 2 my grandchild?
                          T:I'm sorry,I cud'nt save the baby
                          They r shocked.   Abhay shouts:now only u told that the
                          baby is saved.
                          T:I'm sorry,everything is in god's hands.nothing happens
                          as we think.
                          All cry.S thinks:God punished me by taking away my baby.

                          S cries taking the dead baby.

                          S goes 2 K.K opens her eyes.K smiles:sujal,did u see our
                          baby?
                          S keeps silent with eyes full of tears. K:I can't wait
                          anymore 2 see my baby.sujal,take me there.
                          S wipes his tears:yes.
                          S-K go 2 see the baby.Abhay-kusum,tashu go behind them.K
                          stares at it.K looks at others:whats this? Why my baby
                          is kept like this?what happened?
                          Kusum cries. K:what happened?tell.
                          S's tears r flowing. T:sorry kashish.ur baby cud'nt b
                          saved.
                          K screams:noooooo!sujal…our baby…
                          S's eyes r full of tears.he hugs her.K was silent.
                          All become upset about her abnormal condition.

                          Tashu calls S:I want 2 tell u an imp matter.Kashish is too
                          weak 2 hav a child
                          S:what do u mean?
                          T:kashish won't hav children anymore
                          S is shocked:what?
                          T:plz don't tell kashish the truth now.it might effect her
                          health.when she's perfectly alright u can tell
                          S is weeping.

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