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MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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jasmine plz continue soon.. i really can't wait to know what happens further... Big smile   

jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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KulBin Senior Member

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Hi jasmine dear... Smile
read ur story at a stretch.... Wink
really nice one.... Clap i enjoyed reading it... Tongue
so now s will cum to know the past of k... Confused
plz post the next part soon... Smile
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Part-10.....Tashu:bcoz of kashish's sudden pregnancy after
                          the 1st delivery,she's very weak.u've 2 take care of
                          Sujal is shattered. S goes 2 see abhay-kusum.
                          A:sujal,what a gr8 surprise!cum inside.
                          S:I did'nt cum here 2 enjoy ur welum.i want 2 no a
                          truth.Kashish's Dr.Tashu told me that kashish has delivered
                 it true?
                          A-kusum r shocked.they weep. S:that means its true.
                          S is lost.his tears flow down.   S:who is ur daughter
                          They keep silent.   S:I'm least bothered about
                          that.where is that child?
                          A:that baby is adopted by ur cusin Rishi who is at
                          states.that's 1 reason why kashish agreed 2 marry u.kashish
                          did'nt cheat u.we only compelled her 2 marry plz
                          don't …
                          S:enuf of supporting ur daughter.
                          K:all the parents do the same 4 they wish 4 their
                          children's gud future.
                          S:do u think ur daughter got a gud life?I cannot luv her
                          anymore like I used 2 luv her her future is not as
                          gud as u aim is 2 take revenge on her.
                          A-K r shocked. A:Sujal!
                          S:but my method is not 2 desert her or slap her 4
                          cheating on me.i'l not reveal that I came 2 no of her
                          future.i'l keep luving here.if I can I'l return her lost
                          baby.then she can't liv peacefully.bcoz each moment her
                          heart wil b paining due 2 the guilty feeling that she's
                          cheating on me by hiding her dirty past from her luving
                          trustworthy husband.
                          S was determint.he goes.A-K cry.

                          S's mind is full of his moments with sad
                          version of tere naam..
                          S returns home.K receives him with a smile:sujal,whats
                          the result?
                          S thinks about tashu telling that K is weak. S:u r
                          perfectly ok.
                          K smiles:what about our baby?
                          S:fine. K keeps her face on S's chest.S did'nt react.
                          K:this is a happy giv me a hug.
                          S hugs her.but there was no passion or luv in that hug.

                          The next day,while S is about 2 go out,K:can u buy a
                          green sari 4 me?
                          S thinks:black is the perfect color 4 u as it's the
                          color of sin.u cheated on me kashish.
                          S's eyes is full of anger.

                          IN the evening,Sujal cums with the sari.K opens the
                 was a black sari.K:this is black.i told u 2 buy
                          a green sari.
                          S:sorry,I did'nt get it
                          K:but I don't like black.
                          S:its ok,black suits u.u look nice on black.
                          K smiles:really?tho its black, it looks nice.ur
                          selection is can ur selection b bad?I'm ur
                          selection no?
                          S stares at K.K was shy.S thinks:my selection was not
                 I understand that.
                          S:kashish,drap this sari.i want 2 see u in this sari.
                          K:ok.   K takes that sari 2 put it. S begins 2 move off
                          the room.    K:where r u going?u don't hav 2 go just
                          bcoz I'm drapping this sari.oh!u r going bcoz that day
                          while I was about 2 put sari,I told u 2 go out.that
                          time,we were just married,we were not so close 2each
                          other.but now its not like that.i'm even pregnant with
                          ur its ok,u can stay here.
                          S:no,I'll sit outside.
                          K cums out in that black sari with a smile.S:u look
                          extremely beautiful.
                          K smiles.
                          Months passed.K is admitted in the hospital.S sits near
                          K & looks at her. K:r u tensed?no need.see how cool I'm
                          eventho I'm the one who's going 2 deliver.

                          Sujal,abhay,kusum go 2 Dr.Tashu.   K:whats the matter Dr?

                          T:kashish's condition is complicated.a critical stage. All
                          r shocked.

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samajh nahi a raha kya likhoon...........
MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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Posted: 09 May 2006 at 7:15am | IP Logged
hey jasmine.. such a tragic part.... Cry aur sujal.. woh aise kaise kar saktha hain.. sujal hamesha saamne se waar kartha hain na tho phir woh kashish se yeh sachchayi kyun chupa   raha hain ki woh sab kuch jaantha hain.. very bad........ Angry hey u know what i think   kashish has been raped by somebody & she has a chlid.......what do u think ??? LOL plz sujal , kashish ko ek karo aur uske bachche ko bhi theek rakhna.........plzzzzzzzzz... Smile Tongue
write the next part soon... Smile
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   Part-11....Kashish is in a serious condition.i don't think
                          I can save both kashish& the baby.sujal,listen carefully.u
                          can hav more children.but ur wife is sum1 who shud b
                          there till the end of ur choose whom do u want?

                          Sujal:save my baby.
                          Abhay-kusum r shocked. T:r u sure?   S:sure,no doubt.
                          A-K cry.S goes out.t becomes upset.

                          Kusum sits near kashish with sad eyes. K:mama,sujal is
                          loving & caring.
                          Kusum becomes sad.she thinks:poor kashish does'nt no whats
                          there in sujal's mind.
                          K:tho he knows about my past he loves me so much
                          Kusum bursts into tears. K:why r u crying mama?
                          Ku:I'm sorry kashish.i lied 2 u that v hav told sujal
                          everything about u. we did'nt tell him anything.
                          K is shocked:what?sujal does'nt no anything.he married me
                          without knowing my dark past?u cheated on me &
                          sujal.unknowingly I cheated on that nice person.
                          K cries:god wil never 4giv me.
                          Ku:its 4 ur gud future I lied 2 u.
                          K:what future mama?4 cheating that innocent person,do u
                          think god wil giv me a gud future?my life is finished.
                          Ku:kashish!   K turns back:mama,u plz go now.   Ku:kashish!
                            K:plz go..
                          Ku goes with tears.     

                          Sujal cums.K looks at him with tears. S:what happened?
                          K holds his hand & cries. S did'nt understand anything.
                          K:my parents cheated on me.
                          S is wondered:what?
                          K:sujal,I've a dark past.i want 2 tell u
                          everything .otherwise my heart wil break & I'll die.
                          S is stunned.

                          K:when we were in Us,I was alone.he came 2 comfort me
                          with a cheerful me he was also emotional.very
                          soft.he gave me valuable frienship.He supported me in
                          everything .he is….
                          S listens carefully 2 no his name.

                          WHO IS HE?

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