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MysticRiver

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Posted: 05 May 2006 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
jasmine bohat achche... Clap
ab sujal ko shayad chot lage kashish sujal ko dard   mein dekhkhar shayad woh bardhast na kar paye aur woh yeh bhi samaj jaye ki sujal uske dil mein ek special jagah bana chuka hain aur woh   dheere dheere sujal ke kareeb aane ki koshish kare.. Wink kyun dear ??
par haan ab tho mujhe kashish pe bohat ghussa aa raha hain agar uska koi ateet tha tho is mein sujal ki kya ghalthi kashish kyun sujal ko tadpa rahi hain , kyun woh sujal ke pyaar ko samaj nahi rahi hain... Cry
plz un dono ko jaldi milwana... Tongue
agla part jaldi likhna.... Smile

Edited by sun_423 - 05 May 2006 at 11:00pm

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jasminerahul

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Posted: 06 May 2006 at 1:15am | IP Logged
Part-6...The robbers make them get out of the car.They
                          ask 4 their ornaments,watch etc.They giv everything.Then
                          those guys:who's this superb model sab…?gf or…
                          Sujal becomes angry.Kashish gets scared.she goes closer 2 S
                          creaming:Sujal!
                          When they try 2 touch her,S shouts at them & beats.
                          S:how dare u try 2 misbehave with my wife?if u hurt
                          her,I'll kill u all.
                          A robber:whats going 2 happen if ur wife is hurt?
                          S:if sumthing bad is happening 2 ur life,wil u b able 2
                          liv?no!my wife is my life & if she's hurt,how can I liv?

                          K is shocked.
                          1 robber:u gave everything including the precious
                          ornaments.then why r u hesitsting 2 giv ur wife?
                          S beats him:wil any1 giv their life 2 sum1?
                          The robbers r speechless.They go.K is upset.   S:get
                          inside the car kashish.nothing wil happen 2 u when I'm
                          alive.so don't get scared.K gets inside the car.her mind
                          is full of the words S told the robbers.K smiles at S.S
                          does'nt see it.
                          That nite.K with a smile cums 2 the room.Her face
                          becomes dull seeing S sleeping.    K thinks:why do I
                          become dim?whats happening 2 me?
                          K dreams of her with S.song:I'm in luv…{Dhadkan}

                          When K gets up from the bed,she does'nt see S .she looks
                          on 4 sides.he sees the clock. K was shocked:10 0'
                          clock?Oh!
                          Esha cums:gud morning kashish.
                          K:I'm sorry mummiji.i'm late.
                          E:its ok.    K:where is sujal?    E:he went 2 office.i
                          thot of calling u b4 he went.but he did'nt want me 2 do
                          that as he wanted u 2 hav a gud sleep.
                          K smiles.   E:2day is sujal's b'day.    K:really?   
                          E:ya.but we don't celebrate like that.    K:but we
                          must celebrate it.its his 1st b'day with me.     E
                          smiles:sujalis lucky 2 hav a wife like u.    K smiles.
                          evening…K becomes upset:sujal did'nt reach yet..

                          K goes 2 the office.Gets inside sujal's room.S was
                          surprised 2 see K there:kashish!
                          K:why r u so late 2day? U r still in the office?u no
                          whats happening at home now?
                          S:whats happening?is everything ok?u look tensed
                          K:now itself we've 2 go home.otherwise it'l b a problem

MysticRiver

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Posted: 06 May 2006 at 2:24am | IP Logged
hmmmmm jasmine shabash bohat achcha likha hain tumne...padke maza aa gaya... Clap
tho atlast kashish ko sujal ki emiyat ka tho patah chala.. chalo joh bhi hua dher se hi sahi magar achcha hua... Wink
ab sujal ke liye yeh uska sabsa achcha b'day hoga.. aur aaj shayad usse   kashish ka pyaar mil jaye... LOL kyun kya kehthi ho jasmine... Tongue
dear plz forth coming parts zara romantic likhna.. Embarrassed
& plz continue soon...i'll be waiting..... Smile Big smile

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Posted: 06 May 2006 at 2:41am | IP Logged
hay jasmine very gud......atlast kashish ka dil pighall hi gaya..........suprtbbbbbb

jasminerahul

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Posted: 06 May 2006 at 11:42am | IP Logged
part-7...Sujal:ya,now itself we'll go home.
                          Sujal-kashish reach home.they get inside the house.S was
                          surprised 2 see a big party there. S looks at K with
                          wonder:this…
                          K smiles:happy b'day sujal.      S smiles.   Esha:how is
                          the decoration?everything is done by kashish.
                          S smiles:thanku kashish.
                          S cuts the b'day cake.He gives the piece 2 E.E puts a
                          piece into S's mouth.S looks at K.He wants 2 giv a piece
                          2 K.but as he's tensed whether she'l like it,his hand
                          shivers.
                          K tells in her mind:won't u giv me a lovly piece
                          sujal?its natural that he hesitates 2 giv.its bcoz of my
                          earlier behaviour 2wards him.
                          E:sujal,giv a piece 2 kashish..
                          S was tensed.he looks at K.K smiles.S keeps a piece on
                          her hand. K:thanks sujal

                          K:I wud like 2 sing a song 4 my husband in this happy
                          occasion.
                          S was surprised. K goes near her:seene mein dil{koi
                          aapsa}.

                          That nite both of them in their room. S:I dunno how
                          thank u 4 giving me a surprise grand b'th day
                          party.i'vent had such a nice party in my life.
                          K smiles. S:r u not feeling sleepy?
                          K says in her mind:when we r in luv,we won't b able 2
                          sleep.
                          K:I'm not sleepy
                          S:ok..i feel sleepy.so gudnite
                          S goes 2 sleep.K becomes dull. K thinks:sujal still
                          thinks that I'm not happy with him.that's why he's
                          keeping a distance.how can I reveal my luv 4 him?

                          WAIT 4 THE HOLI SPECIAL EPISODE


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Posted: 06 May 2006 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
well done...your story is great..update soon

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Posted: 06 May 2006 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
Clap

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Posted: 06 May 2006 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
nice story...plz cont it soon

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