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Part-3..Kashish cums in a grand violet sari.Sujal cud'nt
                          take his eyes off her.
                          S:kashish…u look really nice.
                          S's arms go 2 her face.K moves away.S becomes dull.
                          K:we'll go.
                          K walks out.
                          S-K reach the party place. 1 guy announces:now the
                          famous baby doll is going 2 perform .we ask all the
                          cuples especially the newly married cuple Sujal-kashish 2
                          dance 2 the song.
                          S smiles at kashish. K:plz sujal.my mind is not allowing me
                          2 dance.
                          S was shocked:why?
                          K:sujal,I'm not feeling well.
                          S:kashish,then we'll go 2 a doctor
                          K:no need.it wil b ok if I take rest.
                          K's cell rings.It was kusum:kashish,how r u?
                          K:fine mama.   Ku:how is sujal?    K:fine.how r u? &
                          papa..
                          Ku:we both r fine.kashish…keep sujal happy.don't giv him
                          chance 2 become sad.he's gr8 kashish.he gave u a new life.

                          K becomes upset:now we r at a party.so bye mama.
                          Ku:bye.

                          KAshish thinks:I shud'nt make sujal sad.
                          K looks at S.he looks sad. K smiles at S.S becomes very
                          happy.K:sujal,now I'm ok.we'll dance 2gether.
                          S was thrilled:really?   K:ya.
                          Babydoll performs:Aksar…{Dhadkan}.S-K 2gether.S looks at
                          K. Seeing K's dull face,S's face becomes dull.After the
                          song got stopped K moves away from S.S becomes dull.
                          S thinks:why do I feel that kashish is keeping a distance
                          with me?


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nice partz jasmine........like da prev. storiez....ths story z awsum 2......plz continue it soon....
hey surya... all ur detailed comments 4 jasmine'z story r pretty interestin... Smile ...i like ur feedbak...

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hmm...jasmine a good part.... Smile Big smile
tho jasmine yeh kashish apne ateet se bahar kab niklegi yaar aur kab sujal ke pyaar ko samjhegi... Cry
par no prblem no tension woh kehthe hain na ki sabar ka phal meeta hotha hain tho is hisaab se jab kashish sujal se pyaar karne lagegi tho duniya ki koi taakat usse sujal se judaa nahi kar sakthi chahe woh kashish ka ateet hi kyun na ho... ya koi qayamat kyun na ho...Wink kyun tumhe kya lagtha hain main sahi hoon...
plz agla part jaldi likhna..... Smile Tongue Big smile
thanks fiza mere comments pe comment karne ke liye.... Embarrassed Big smile Embarrassed

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Part-4...Kashish is infront of the mirror.she's trying 2
                          remove her necklace.Sujal cums:shall I help u?   K:4
                          what?    S:I'll help u 2 remove ur necklace.
                          K:no thanks.i myself will remove it.
                          S becomes dull.K removes it. K:Sujal,wil u plz go out,I
                          want 2 change my dress.
                          S:ok.    S goes out.   S thinks:how much I dreamt about
                          my life with kashish?is it shattering?is it true that
                          dreams won't cum true?
                          S becomes upset.He goes back 2 the bedroom.there K was
                          sleeping. S looks at her with sad eyes.S was sleepless &
                          walks out. K opens her eyes & tells in her mind:I'm
                          sorry Sujal,I still can't luv u.that's why I'm avoiding
                          u.plz 4giv me.
                          K's eyes r full of tears. K thinks:I don't think I can
                          ever luv sujal.poor guy.he loves me very much.but he's
                          not getting anything from his wife.

                          S's mom Esha tells:sujal,take kashish out 4 lunch.
                          K:no need mummiji.
                          E:no matter.sujal has 2 take kashish out.wives won't force
                          their husbands 2 take them out.but husbands shud behave
                          knowing their wives' desires.
                          S thinks:I'm happy 2 take kashishout.but I doubt whether
                          kashish wil b happy.

                          S-K r sitting in a restaurant. S:kashish,if my mom had'nt
                          asked 2 cum with me 4 a lunch here,wud u hav cum with
                          me?
                          K was speechless. S says in his mind:I no kashish,u wud've
                          cum with me.
                          S:kashish..u look very pretty now
                          K:thanks   S:not only now,u r always pretty,u r very
                          fair.Am I that bad looking? fair?I no that I'm not
                          fair.but I'm a that dark?
                          K:u r not dark.u r very fair.very attractive also.
                          S smiles:really?   K:ya.   S:u no kashish,I'm so lucky 2
                          hear a complement from u.i value ur comment more than
                          anybody else's comment.
                          K feels pity.

                          The next day,S-K go 2 stay in K's house. K tells
                          S:sujal,can I sleep with my mom 2nite?
                          S:what?

                          WILL SUJAL ALLOW KASHISH 2 B WITH KUSUM DURING NITE?

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