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golu_1677 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 May 2006 at 12:03am | IP Logged
great part jasmine. Bring sujal and kashish together soon

MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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Posts: 79310

Posted: 19 May 2006 at 12:34am | IP Logged
jasmineeeeeeeeeee dear ur justtttttt tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooddddddddddddddddddddddddd......... Clap teri story padke maza aa gaya... Clap tho sujal ,kashish ab ek hone jaa rahe hain.. coollllll.......... Embarrassed jasmine me doubting yeh piyush ko kissne maara.. kahiin sujal ne tho nahi... Cry    please    is &nbs p; confusion aur suspense ko jald se jald khatam karo.... Big smile i really hope it is not sujal , let it be charu maza aa jayega.... LOL
please continue soon....... Smile Tongue Big smile   
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 May 2006 at 1:07am | IP Logged
Part-26....OMkar:the real killer is…
                          Suddenly Sujal cums:I'm the killer of piyush
                          Tia:no!papa is lying 2 save me.i killed him.
                          Kashish-sujal see each other.they r very emotional. S:the
                          specs got from piyush's house is mine.
                          O:why did u kill piyush?
                          S:he's my enemy.he tortured my kashish.he tried 2 make her
                          mad.he put my poor kashish in mental hospital eventho she
                          was'nt I decided 2 kill him.but I cud'nt kill
                          him.when I lost kashish & tia,I was fed up of life.The
                          accident & its aftereffects destroyed me completely.the
                          only relief was tia's letters.Recently I got tia's
                          "Dear papa,I'm writing thi letter 2 tell u a big truth
                          that I'm melting into nothing bcoz of heavy pain.why did
                          u giv me 2 dad?u cud've brought me up.bcoz of the devil
                          who came b4 me as my dad,I can't liv peacefully.i'vent
                          felt happiness since I got separated from my papa &
                          mama.My dad is killing me inch by inch.i'vent felt
                          secure here.bcoz of dad only u had a big accident that
                          made u paralysed.I realised that he only put mama into
                          the mental asylum tho she was perfectly alright.He is
                          torturing me like anything.i cant breath in this
                          I've only option b4 me ie suicide.u won't b able 2 see
                          me or my letter as I'm going 2 die.i'm fed up of this
                          life.Luv urs only daughter Tia."

                          S:I cud'nt tolerate it.i went there during nite.i saw
                          the doors open.i got inside & saw piyush lying down.he
                          became conscious.he became so angry that he came 2
                          attack me.

                          S escapes from his attack. S:u destroyed kashish's & Tia's
                          life.i can't allow u 2 liv anymore.otherwise,tIa won't
                          get a gud life at all.
                          S:I hit his head on the wall & thus he died.i was very
                          happy with what I did as it was 4 tia.i was planning 2
                          inform this 2 the police.but b4 that I fainted.then I
                          became conscious only 2 days back.I never new that bcoz
                          of my deed,my daughter was getting punished.
                          Kashish-tia cry. T hugs S:papa,u did all these 4 me.

                          Sujal gets arrested.
After 5yrs,he gets released from the
                          jail.He was surprised 2 see Tia there with Ranveer & a
                          small baby. T:papa,we got married.this is our baby.His
                          name is Suka.Sujal papa's Su & kashish mama's Ka.Suka…this
                          is ur dada.
                          S smiles.S takes him & hugs.They go near the car.S was
                          surprised 2 see Kashish there.K:Sujal!
                          K falls on his chest.S hugs her. S:how long I was
                          waiting 4 this moment
                          K:me too       Ranveer:let them hav a romantic moment
                          peacefully.we'll stand sumwhere else.
                          Tia-Ranveer smile.They go.S-K r alone & they share
                          romantic moments.

                          THE END

KulBin Senior Member

Joined: 24 September 2005
Posts: 946

Posted: 19 May 2006 at 1:08am | IP Logged
hey jasmine nice parts... Clap Cry gr8 gng... Clap
plz cont soon... & plz s-k 2gether... Smile
MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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Posts: 79310

Posted: 19 May 2006 at 1:31am | IP Logged
jasmine you write very very very very very very damn well........ Clap i just love ur story.... it is so nice........ Clap dear tumne kya end diya hain.. lekin   sujal ko   panch saal ki saza kyun..... Cry tho atlast sujal ,kashish mil hi gaye... Embarrassed u know tia aur ranveer ke bachche ka naam acchcha hain... Tongue anyway dear a very nice ending.. happy ending...... Clap
now i can't tell u continue ur story  as  it  is  over  so please start writing a new story soon.. i'll be waiting.... LOL

Edited by sun_423 - 19 May 2006 at 1:37am
group_1223 Goldie

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Posts: 1551

Posted: 19 May 2006 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
awsum story had sooo many upz n downz.....gud job tho....u r an awsum writer..waitin 4 ur nxt story on s n Clap
KulBin Senior Member

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Posts: 946

Posted: 22 May 2006 at 5:05am | IP Logged
very nice story jasmine & a gr8 end...
anni_23 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 September 2007 at 3:23pm | IP Logged
Wow dear wht a story gr8888888888888 par itni juldi end kar diya but it was really nice aur end mei sujal kashish ko grandma grandpa bna diyaBig smile but it was so niceClapClapClap

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