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Posted: 17 years ago
well done...your story is great..update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Part-8...Holi….Kashish thinks:this is the day suitable 2
                          reveal my luv.
                          Akshat-charu cum:hi Sujal…
                          S:hi.when did u cum?
                          A:we came yesterday.only if we celebrate holi in our
                          country,there wil b joy.
                          C:since we were not there 4 ur wedding,we cud'nt see
                          kashish.plz introduce her.
                          S turns back.He sees K smiling at him.S goes near her.
                          K:happy holi
                          S:same 2 u.my friends hav cum from US.they want 2 meet
                          u.plz cum with me.
                          S-K go near Akshat-charu. C:hi kashish.sujal,ur wife looks
                          pretty
                          A:u both look gr8 2gether.
                          S:kashish…this is Akshat.this is his wife charu.
                          A:sujal is the 1 who supported our luv.he helped us 2
                          conduct our wedding.

                          A-C pour colour water on each other.they dance 2 Lets
                          play holi…
                          S-K look at them. S:they luv each other very much.
                          K:ya..sujal,all the cuples r putting colours on each
                          other.won't u put colours on me?
                          S was surprised:kumud..actually…I wanted 2 .but I thot u
                          won't like it.
                          S takes red color powder & puts it slowly on K's face
                          with his fingers.K did'nt take her eyes off him.She took
                          colour powder & throws it on her.They smile.
                          K:sujal…I luv u..
                          S becomes very happy:I luv u too.
                          they dance 2gether.

                          Nite.Kashish-sujal hav dressed well. S;kashish…actually 2day
                          is our 1st nite.
                          K smiles.S's fingers go thru her face.K becomes shy.

                          They go 2 switzerland 4 honeymoon.they go see the
                          beautiful place.
                          K:sujal,how much do u luv me?
                          S:u cannot measure my luv.u want 2 no how much I luv u?
                          S sings:tum dil{dhadkan}.K:u luv me that much?
                          K's eyes r filled up with tears with happiness.

                          A party.S-K dance 2gether.song:koi aapsa….
                          Unexpectedly during the dance K faints.S was
                          shocked:kashish!

                          What happened 2 kashish?

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Part-8...Holi….Kashish thinks:this is the day suitable 2
                          reveal my luv.
                          Akshat-charu cum:hi Sujal…
                          S:hi.when did u cum?
                          A:we came yesterday.only if we celebrate holi in our
                          country,there wil b joy.
                          C:since we were not there 4 ur wedding,we cud'nt see
                          kashish.plz introduce her.
                          S turns back.He sees K smiling at him.S goes near her.
                          K:happy holi
                          S:same 2 u.my friends hav cum from US.they want 2 meet
                          u.plz cum with me.
                          S-K go near Akshat-charu. C:hi kashish.sujal,ur wife looks
                          pretty
                          A:u both look gr8 2gether.
                          S:kashish…this is Akshat.this is his wife charu.
                          A:sujal is the 1 who supported our luv.he helped us 2
                          conduct our wedding.

                          A-C pour colour water on each other.they dance 2 Lets
                          play holi…
                          S-K look at them. S:they luv each other very much.
                          K:ya..sujal,all the cuples r putting colours on each
                          other.won't u put colours on me?
                          S was surprised:kumud..actually…I wanted 2 .but I thot u
                          won't like it.
                          S takes red color powder & puts it slowly on K's face
                          with his fingers.K did'nt take her eyes off him.She took
                          colour powder & throws it on her.They smile.
                          K:sujal…I luv u..
                          S becomes very happy:I luv u too.
                          they dance 2gether.

                          Nite.Kashish-sujal hav dressed well. S;kashish…actually 2day
                          is our 1st nite.
                          K smiles.S's fingers go thru her face.K becomes shy.

                          They go 2 switzerland 4 honeymoon.they go see the
                          beautiful place.
                          K:sujal,how much do u luv me?
                          S:u cannot measure my luv.u want 2 no how much I luv u?
                          S sings:tum dil{dhadkan}.K:u luv me that much?
                          K's eyes r filled up with tears with happiness.

                          A party.S-K dance 2gether.song:koi aapsa….
                          Unexpectedly during the dance K faints.S was
                          shocked:kashish!

                          What happened 2 kashish?

from where did kumud came here??😕

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Posted: 17 years ago
jasmine a very nice part.. atlast kashish ne sujal se keh hi diya that she loves him gre8.. 😳
i liked the part very much.. it was indeed very coollll......... 👏
kashish behosh ho gayi.. ab usse kya ho gaya.. kahiin woh pregnent tho hain... 😊 well plz sujal ,kashish ko hamesha saath rakhna.. unhe kabhi alag mat karna.. unki jodi saath mein achchi lagthi hain.... 😃
& plz continue soon.......... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
part-9....Kashish is hospitalized.sujal is tensed.Dr
                          cums.S:Dr,how is kashish.is she ok?
                          Dr smiles:why r u getting tensed?relax.
                          S:WHILE MY WIFE IS NOT WELL,HOW CAN I relax?
                          Dr smiles:u r going 2 b a father man.
                          S was surprised:really?
                          S runs 2 K. S:we r going 2 b parents
                          K becomes shy.

                          S-K at the dining table.S:hav this orange juice kashish.
                          K:enuf sujal.u made me eat so much.
                          S:u've 2 drink this 4 our baby.
                          K smiles.K drinks it.
                          S looks at K's stomach:when r u going 2 cum my baby.
                          K:u've so much of expectations about the baby.
                          S:naturally.u also.rite?
                          K:yes.being the mom i dream of a sweet baby like u.
                          S:but I long 4 a baby like u.
                          K says in her mind:no,my baby shud'nt hav my fate.

                          S cums happily 2 K:kashish,our company got a gud
                          project.it's a progress.
                          K:wow!that's a gud news.
                          S:everything is bcoz of u.if my kashish was'nt there with
                          me,I wud'nt hav been this much lucky.u r my luck kashish.
                          S goes 2 kiss her.Suddenly esha cums. E:sorry.
                          E goes with a smile.S-K become embarassed. S:did mom see
                          it?
                          K:4 that nothing really happened.
                          S:ya that's true.so…
                          S hugs her tightly.

                          S takes K 4 check up 2 Dr.Tashu.The next day,Sujal goes 2
                          colect the result.He meets Dr.Tashu. S:Dr,how is kashish's
                          & our baby's condition?everything is ok no?
                          T was tough:u r so educated.then also u don't know that
                          a lady shud'nt become pregnant b4 completing 1yr after
                          the delivery?
                          S smiles:what r u telling Dr?we got married recently.
                          T:that means u were living 2gether b4 marriage?
                          S:no Dr.this is our 1st child.
                          T:what nonsense!this is the 2nd child.
                          S:Dr,u've sum misundestanding.
                          T:its not difficult 4 a Dr 2 recognise a lady who has
                          delivered b4.b4 the check up kashish had told me that its
                          her 2nd pregnancy.
                          S was shocked.

                          IS TASHU TELLING THE TRUTH?

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Posted: 17 years ago
watttttttttt dear jasmine... what is this it is kashish's second child... 😭 is that tashu telling the truth... 😭 😭 😭 if she is lying then i'll kill that taashu.... 🤢 &   if it is the truth why did kashish hide such a big truth from sujal.... 🤢 🤢 🤢 ab bachara sujal.. plz don't make him cry.. 😭 i can't see him in pain.. 😭 😭 😭 but on second thoughts i think might be    sujal will be angry with kashish but then he will get kashish's first child home if   what taashu told is true... 😉
plz continue soon & don't seperate sujal & kashish... 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
whtz thiz mannnnnnnn??????????//// 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
jasmine plz continue soon.. i really can't wait to know what happens further... 😃   
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi jasmine dear... 😊
read ur story at a stretch.... 😉
really nice one.... 👏 i enjoyed reading it... 😛
so now s will cum to know the past of k... 😕
plz post the next part soon... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Part-10.....Tashu:bcoz of kashish's sudden pregnancy after
                          the 1st delivery,she's very weak.u've 2 take care of
                          her.
                          Sujal is shattered. S goes 2 see abhay-kusum.
                          A:sujal,what a gr8 surprise!cum inside.
                          S:I did'nt cum here 2 enjoy ur welum.i want 2 no a
                          truth.Kashish's Dr.Tashu told me that kashish has delivered
                          b4.is it true?
                          A-kusum r shocked.they weep. S:that means its true.
                          S is lost.his tears flow down.   S:who is ur daughter
                          ex-bf?
                          They keep silent.   S:I'm least bothered about
                          that.where is that child?
                          A:that baby is adopted by ur cusin Rishi who is at
                          states.that's 1 reason why kashish agreed 2 marry u.kashish
                          did'nt cheat u.we only compelled her 2 marry u.so plz
                          don't …
                          S:enuf of supporting ur daughter.
                          K:all the parents do the same 4 they wish 4 their
                          children's gud future.
                          S:do u think ur daughter got a gud life?I cannot luv her
                          anymore like I used 2 luv her b4.so her future is not as
                          gud as u think.my aim is 2 take revenge on her.
                          A-K r shocked. A:Sujal!
                          S:but my method is not 2 desert her or slap her 4
                          cheating on me.i'l not reveal that I came 2 no of her
                          future.i'l keep luving here.if I can I'l return her lost
                          baby.then she can't liv peacefully.bcoz each moment her
                          heart wil b paining due 2 the guilty feeling that she's
                          cheating on me by hiding her dirty past from her luving
                          trustworthy husband.
                          S was determint.he goes.A-K cry.

                          S's mind is full of his moments with kashish.song: sad
                          version of tere naam..
                          S returns home.K receives him with a smile:sujal,whats
                          the result?
                          S thinks about tashu telling that K is weak. S:u r
                          perfectly ok.
                          K smiles:what about our baby?
                          S:fine. K keeps her face on S's chest.S did'nt react.
                          K:this is a happy news.so giv me a hug.
                          S hugs her.but there was no passion or luv in that hug.

                          The next day,while S is about 2 go out,K:can u buy a
                          green sari 4 me?
                          S:ok,I'll.
                          S thinks:black is the perfect color 4 u as it's the
                          color of sin.u cheated on me kashish.
                          S's eyes is full of anger.

                          IN the evening,Sujal cums with the sari.K opens the
                          cover.it was a black sari.K:this is black.i told u 2 buy
                          a green sari.
                          S:sorry,I did'nt get it
                          K:but I don't like black.
                          S:its ok,black suits u.u look nice on black.
                          K smiles:really?tho its black, it looks nice.ur
                          selection is gud.how can ur selection b bad?I'm ur
                          selection no?
                          S stares at K.K was shy.S thinks:my selection was not
                          gud.now I understand that.
                          S:kashish,drap this sari.i want 2 see u in this sari.
                          K:ok.   K takes that sari 2 put it. S begins 2 move off
                          the room.    K:where r u going?u don't hav 2 go just
                          bcoz I'm drapping this sari.oh!u r going bcoz that day
                          while I was about 2 put sari,I told u 2 go out.that
                          time,we were just married,we were not so close 2each
                          other.but now its not like that.i'm even pregnant with
                          ur baby.so its ok,u can stay here.
                          S:no,I'll sit outside.
                          K cums out in that black sari with a smile.S:u look
                          extremely beautiful.
                          K smiles.
                          Months passed.K is admitted in the hospital.S sits near
                          K & looks at her. K:r u tensed?no need.see how cool I'm
                          eventho I'm the one who's going 2 deliver.

                          Sujal,abhay,kusum go 2 Dr.Tashu.   K:whats the matter Dr?

                          T:kashish's condition is complicated.a critical stage. All
                          r shocked.