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Posted: 17 years ago
Part-4...Kashish is infront of the mirror.she's trying 2
                          remove her necklace.Sujal cums:shall I help u?   K:4
                          what?    S:I'll help u 2 remove ur necklace.
                          K:no thanks.i myself will remove it.
                          S becomes dull.K removes it. K:Sujal,wil u plz go out,I
                          want 2 change my dress.
                          S:ok.    S goes out.   S thinks:how much I dreamt about
                          my life with kashish?is it shattering?is it true that
                          dreams won't cum true?
                          S becomes upset.He goes back 2 the bedroom.there K was
                          sleeping. S looks at her with sad eyes.S was sleepless &
                          walks out. K opens her eyes & tells in her mind:I'm
                          sorry Sujal,I still can't luv u.that's why I'm avoiding
                          u.plz 4giv me.
                          K's eyes r full of tears. K thinks:I don't think I can
                          ever luv sujal.poor guy.he loves me very much.but he's
                          not getting anything from his wife.

                          S's mom Esha tells:sujal,take kashish out 4 lunch.
                          K:no need mummiji.
                          E:no matter.sujal has 2 take kashish out.wives won't force
                          their husbands 2 take them out.but husbands shud behave
                          knowing their wives' desires.
                          S thinks:I'm happy 2 take kashishout.but I doubt whether
                          kashish wil b happy.

                          S-K r sitting in a restaurant. S:kashish,if my mom had'nt
                          asked 2 cum with me 4 a lunch here,wud u hav cum with
                          me?
                          K was speechless. S says in his mind:I no kashish,u wud've
                          cum with me.
                          S:kashish..u look very pretty now
                          K:thanks   S:not only now,u r always pretty,u r very
                          fair.Am I that bad looking? fair?I no that I'm not
                          fair.but I'm a that dark?
                          K:u r not dark.u r very fair.very attractive also.
                          S smiles:really?   K:ya.   S:u no kashish,I'm so lucky 2
                          hear a complement from u.i value ur comment more than
                          anybody else's comment.
                          K feels pity.

                          The next day,S-K go 2 stay in K's house. K tells
                          S:sujal,can I sleep with my mom 2nite?
                          S:what?

                          WILL SUJAL ALLOW KASHISH 2 B WITH KUSUM DURING NITE?
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Posted: 17 years ago
jasmine good dear... 😊 πŸ˜› πŸ˜ƒ
u know what jasmine us kashish ki tho main.. 🀒 woh bechare sujal ko itna kyun tadpa rahi hain.. woh kyun nahi sujal ke pyaar ko samaj paa rahi hain.. 😭
ek kaam karo jasmine sujal ke zindagi mein get somebody else.. isse shayad kashish ko apni ghalti aur sujal ke liye pyaar    samaj aa jaye... πŸ˜‰
dear plz agla part jaldi likhna.... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
hay jasmine.......superb..........very gudddddd πŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
Part-5....Kashish:can I sleep with my mom ?
                          Sujal:kashish..hum aapke hain kaun?
                          K:husband
                          S:r u sure?   K:u tied mangalsuthra around my neck.u put
                          sindoor on my maang.
                          S:just bcoz of that I became ur husband?
                          K:that's enuff no?no1 wil tell that u r not my husband.
                          S:infront of public we r a cuple.but b4 us…
                          K turns back as she felt it unbearable.
                          S:as u wish u go with ur mom.
                          K's eyes rose.

                          K goes near kusum:mama,2nite I'm going 2 sleep with u.i
                          really missed u all these days.
                          Ku smiles.

                          The next day at a park.Sujal with worries looks at K.
                          S:kashish,don't u luv me?
                          K felt it unbearable.she kept silent.   S:plz don't
                          avoid me.
                          K's eyes rose. He sings:dil ne..{dhadkan}.he dreams K
                          also singing it with him.K:tum bhi mujse pyar karlo..
                          S:u don't hav 2 tell me 2 luv u.i luv u kashish.
                          S hugs her.within a second he realses that it was a
                          dream.K sees this with pity.S wipes his tears.

                          Sujal-kashish r attending a pooja.Esha tells them:pray 2
                          god that by next yr there wil b a baby with u.
                          S-K's face become dull.
                          S:whats this mama?we just started enjoying our married
                          life & why r u in a hurry 2 hav a grandchild.its
                          oldfashion2 hav kids immediately.now cuples prefer kids
                          only after sum yrs.
                          E:sujal,don't b silly.
                          S goes with a sad face.K goes inside:u don't like kids?
                          S:ya I like.
                          S thinks:I want 2 b a papa.how can I tell u that I lied
                          2 mama bcoz I did'nt want 2 make u upset.
                          K thinks:did he talk like that 4 hiding his worries from
                          me?

                          Sujal,kashish r traveling in the car during nite.A cuple of
                          robbers cum infront of them.
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Posted: 17 years ago
hay superb..........chakas..... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ ....yaar sujal kai saath kash ka behaviour accha karaoooooooooo plzzzzzzzz..
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Posted: 17 years ago
jasmine bohat achche... πŸ‘
ab sujal ko shayad chot lage kashish sujal ko dard   mein dekhkhar shayad woh bardhast na kar paye aur woh yeh bhi samaj jaye ki sujal uske dil mein ek special jagah bana chuka hain aur woh   dheere dheere sujal ke kareeb aane ki koshish kare.. πŸ˜‰ kyun dear ??
par haan ab tho mujhe kashish pe bohat ghussa aa raha hain agar uska koi ateet tha tho is mein sujal ki kya ghalthi kashish kyun sujal ko tadpa rahi hain , kyun woh sujal ke pyaar ko samaj nahi rahi hain... 😭
plz un dono ko jaldi milwana... πŸ˜›
agla part jaldi likhna.... 😊 Edited by sun_423 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Part-6...The robbers make them get out of the car.They
                          ask 4 their ornaments,watch etc.They giv everything.Then
                          those guys:who's this superb model sab…?gf or…
                          Sujal becomes angry.Kashish gets scared.she goes closer 2 S
                          creaming:Sujal!
                          When they try 2 touch her,S shouts at them & beats.
                          S:how dare u try 2 misbehave with my wife?if u hurt
                          her,I'll kill u all.
                          A robber:whats going 2 happen if ur wife is hurt?
                          S:if sumthing bad is happening 2 ur life,wil u b able 2
                          liv?no!my wife is my life & if she's hurt,how can I liv?

                          K is shocked.
                          1 robber:u gave everything including the precious
                          ornaments.then why r u hesitsting 2 giv ur wife?
                          S beats him:wil any1 giv their life 2 sum1?
                          The robbers r speechless.They go.K is upset.   S:get
                          inside the car kashish.nothing wil happen 2 u when I'm
                          alive.so don't get scared.K gets inside the car.her mind
                          is full of the words S told the robbers.K smiles at S.S
                          does'nt see it.
                          That nite.K with a smile cums 2 the room.Her face
                          becomes dull seeing S sleeping.    K thinks:why do I
                          become dim?whats happening 2 me?
                          K dreams of her with S.song:I'm in luv…{Dhadkan}

                          When K gets up from the bed,she does'nt see S .she looks
                          on 4 sides.he sees the clock. K was shocked:10 0'
                          clock?Oh!
                          Esha cums:gud morning kashish.
                          K:I'm sorry mummiji.i'm late.
                          E:its ok.    K:where is sujal?    E:he went 2 office.i
                          thot of calling u b4 he went.but he did'nt want me 2 do
                          that as he wanted u 2 hav a gud sleep.
                          K smiles.   E:2day is sujal's b'day.    K:really?   
                          E:ya.but we don't celebrate like that.    K:but we
                          must celebrate it.its his 1st b'day with me.     E
                          smiles:sujalis lucky 2 hav a wife like u.    K smiles.
                          evening…K becomes upset:sujal did'nt reach yet..

                          K goes 2 the office.Gets inside sujal's room.S was
                          surprised 2 see K there:kashish!
                          K:why r u so late 2day? U r still in the office?u no
                          whats happening at home now?
                          S:whats happening?is everything ok?u look tensed
                          K:now itself we've 2 go home.otherwise it'l b a problem
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Posted: 17 years ago
hmmmmm jasmine shabash bohat achcha likha hain tumne...padke maza aa gaya... πŸ‘
tho atlast kashish ko sujal ki emiyat ka tho patah chala.. chalo joh bhi hua dher se hi sahi magar achcha hua... πŸ˜‰
ab sujal ke liye yeh uska sabsa achcha b'day hoga.. aur aaj shayad usse   kashish ka pyaar mil jaye... πŸ˜† kyun kya kehthi ho jasmine... πŸ˜›
dear plz forth coming parts zara romantic likhna.. 😳
& plz continue soon...i'll be waiting..... 😊 πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 17 years ago
hay jasmine very gud......atlast kashish ka dil pighall hi gaya..........suprtbbbbbb
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Posted: 17 years ago
part-7...Sujal:ya,now itself we'll go home.
                          Sujal-kashish reach home.they get inside the house.S was
                          surprised 2 see a big party there. S looks at K with
                          wonder:this…
                          K smiles:happy b'day sujal.      S smiles.   Esha:how is
                          the decoration?everything is done by kashish.
                          S smiles:thanku kashish.
                          S cuts the b'day cake.He gives the piece 2 E.E puts a
                          piece into S's mouth.S looks at K.He wants 2 giv a piece
                          2 K.but as he's tensed whether she'l like it,his hand
                          shivers.
                          K tells in her mind:won't u giv me a lovly piece
                          sujal?its natural that he hesitates 2 giv.its bcoz of my
                          earlier behaviour 2wards him.
                          E:sujal,giv a piece 2 kashish..
                          S was tensed.he looks at K.K smiles.S keeps a piece on
                          her hand. K:thanks sujal

                          K:I wud like 2 sing a song 4 my husband in this happy
                          occasion.
                          S was surprised. K goes near her:seene mein dil{koi
                          aapsa}.

                          That nite both of them in their room. S:I dunno how
                          thank u 4 giving me a surprise grand b'th day
                          party.i'vent had such a nice party in my life.
                          K smiles. S:r u not feeling sleepy?
                          K says in her mind:when we r in luv,we won't b able 2
                          sleep.
                          K:I'm not sleepy
                          S:ok..i feel sleepy.so gudnite
                          S goes 2 sleep.K becomes dull. K thinks:sujal still
                          thinks that I'm not happy with him.that's why he's
                          keeping a distance.how can I reveal my luv 4 him?

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