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jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 May 2006 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
Part-1...Sujal is looking at the photo of kashish. S:I
                          can't 4get my 1st meeting with u.
                          S recalls.K cums 2 S's office 4 interview.S cud'nt
                          take eyes ff her.It was luv at 1st site.S goes & asks her dad
                          Abhay:I wud like 2 marry kashish?will u plz conduct our
                          A was surprised.
                          S:finally that day has cum.2day we'll get married.
                          S smiles.
                          Kashish has dressed up like a bride.K weeps in her house.
                          K:I feel that I'm doing a mistake.
                        Her mom Kusum:no,don't b guilty.we've told everything 2 sujal.but
                          promise that u'll never talk about this 2 sujal.
                          K:ok mama,bcozs I want 2 4get my past.but I doubt
                          whether I can luv sujal.still I don't feel like marrying
                          Kusum becomes upset:u've 2 luv sujal beti.he's such a
                          nice guy.
                          K's eyes r full of tears.
                          Kusum goes near Abhay:abhay,I lied 2 kashish that we've
                          told everything 2 sujal.that's how she agreed 4 this
                          marriage.if sujal cums 2 no everything what'll b kashish's
                          A becomes upset:lets hope 4 the best.

                          Kashish -sujal enter the mandap.they get married. K's mind
                          was full of…{Dhadkan}

                          K is sitting inside the decorated bedroom.S
                          enters.K gets tensed.

Iqbal Neha1 IF-Dazzler
Iqbal Neha1
Iqbal Neha1

Joined: 01 February 2006
Posts: 4104

Posted: 01 May 2006 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
that was really good
i hope the next part is as good as the first
im really lookin forward to know what is kashish's past which sujal doesnt know. Smile Smile Smile
continue soon
group_1223 Goldie

Joined: 26 January 2005
Posts: 1553

Posted: 01 May 2006 at 9:31pm | IP Logged
nice part...continue soon....da story seemz awsummm....
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 02 July 2005
Posts: 16971

Posted: 01 May 2006 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
MysticRiver IF-Addictz

Joined: 16 October 2004
Posts: 50950

Posted: 02 May 2006 at 12:42am | IP Logged
hey jasmine... Smile
tumne naya fanfic shuru kiya.. good... Big smile
aur is fanfic ke baare mein main kya karoon it was coollllll like all your other stories... Clap
par yeh kya ab yeh kashish ka ateet kaun hain.. Dead
aur agar ab kashish ne sujal ko rulaya ya dhuk pohanch chaya tho main us kashish ko main... Angry
aur haan us ateet ko kashish aur sujal ki zindagi se durr hi rakho.. LOL
aur haan kashish ko tho kissi bhi cheez ki fikhar honi hi nahi chahiye kyunke sujal ek aisa shaks hain jisse agar hum na chahe bhi pyaar kar hi baith the hain.. Embarrassed
kyun kya kehthi ho ?? Wink
plz agli part jaldi likhna........... me  waiting...Tongue 

Edited by sun_423 - 02 May 2006 at 1:05am
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 02 July 2005
Posts: 16971

Posted: 02 May 2006 at 1:03am | IP Logged
Part-2..Sujal smiles at kashish.K did'nt smile properly.
                          S:kashish,2day my dream came true.i was waiting 2 get u.i
                          just can't believe that now u r mine.only mine.
                          K becomes upset. S:u no what I felt when I saw u 1st?u r
                          my wife.that's why did'nt employ u there.what did u feel
                          when u saw me 1st?
                          K was speechless. S:I no that u also felt the same.
                          K becomes upset.K thinks:eventho he nos everything,why
                          he's talking like this?he's so nice.i don't deserve him.

S cums near K.S holds her hand & keeps on her chest:u r
                          my luck.
                          K feels discomfort.she wants 2 get away from S.
                          K:I'm tired after the function.can I sleep?
                          S:sure…sleep.b fresh.
                          K:thanku sujal.u r an understanding other guy
                          can b so soft in this nite.
                          K sleeps.S smiles.

                          The next morning kashish brings bed coffee 4 sujal. S:thanku
                          S starts drinking. S:did u drink coffee?
                          S extends hiss cup:drink this
                          K:this is urs no?
                          S:we'll share it
                          K:I'm sorry sujal.i don't like drinking from other's cup.

                          S becomes dull. K:don't feel bad plz.
                          S:its ok.

                          Sujal cums in the evening. S:kashish,ger ready.we've 2 go 4
                          a party.
                          K:sorry sujal.i'm not coming 4 the party.
                          S:kashish,what r u telling?my friends arranged this party
                          4 us.plz cum with me kashish.
                          K:ok,let me wear sari.
                          S:thanks kashish4 cuming with me.
                          S sits there.K takes the sari. K:I've 2 wear sari.
                          S:ok..   K:so plz go out of this room.
                          S was embarrassed:ok,I'm sorry.
                          S goes out. S thinks:why do I feel that kashish is
                          avoiding me?is my feeling true?
MysticRiver IF-Addictz

Joined: 16 October 2004
Posts: 50950

Posted: 02 May 2006 at 1:25am | IP Logged
hey jasmineeeeeee dear.... Tongue
thanku so much for posting the second part.. Big smile
it was very nice like always...keep up the good work... Clap
& first of all why is kashish behaving like this with bechara sujal who is always trying to be nice to her... Cry
u know what kuch aisa karo ki sujal ko sachchayi ka patah chal jaye kyunke shayad iske baad sujal will try to win over kashish's heart by giving her all the love & care.. Embarrassed
aur haan agar kashish sujal ke saath aise hi behave karthi rahi tho she is right she does not deserve sujal... Wink
dear plz continue soon.. me will wait for you to continue.... Smile    

Edited by sun_423 - 02 May 2006 at 1:33am
Innocent_Angel Senior Member

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Posts: 657

Posted: 02 May 2006 at 5:04am | IP Logged
hay jasmine it'z fascinating.........gud going Clap but yaar itna rude behaviour sujal kai satth Cry

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