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shahidlover24

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Posted: 27 April 2006 at 9:16pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by griffinmonster

oh so we can nominate ours or some one else hmm better start it fast can't wait

Yup...You can either nominate yourself or someone else's fan fictionSmile

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pakigal34

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Posted: 28 April 2006 at 4:55am | IP Logged
okayyyy i'm gonna be first to nominate!!!
lol
okayy
7 Guys and 1 Girl
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kuch kahi unkahi <3

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aromi

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Posted: 28 April 2006 at 7:47am | IP Logged

now.. i have 3 threads with almost 25 stories in there..difficult to choose..then too i'll doo...

okz.....

NATZ>(not availaible for the moment)...so not posting..

 

RAJEEV_1 FOR PYAAR KE RANG...

griffy.fz

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Posted: 28 April 2006 at 4:04pm | IP Logged
umm now this is frankly very tough job
i'll right now nominate one and then later after thinking edit it and post my secone nomination

1] KUCH KUCH HOTA HAI by Desi Pride aka karishma
and secone one i still have to think

nsa4657

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Posted: 28 April 2006 at 7:45pm | IP Logged
good idea!!
i nominate Dk&Disha:New Love Story by Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli
dont know for second yet

komalsirwani

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Posted: 29 April 2006 at 12:12am | IP Logged
gr88 idea Clap Clap

..oneOone..

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Posted: 29 April 2006 at 1:28am | IP Logged
hey
nice idea
but
i want 2 nominate three stories.........waisay tau bohut zyada mujhay acchi lagti hain.......likin iss waqt

PYAR K RANG by rajeev1 aka farah ji
KHAWAHISH by shruti_gauri aka shruti di
DIL KIA KARAY by adildagr88 aka adi

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ana

anugam

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Posted: 29 April 2006 at 2:01am | IP Logged
hey chek this story of mine...

Phir wahi raat hai…phir vahi raat hai khwaab ki…

Na jaane ye naya suraj kya dikhane wala hai.kya raaj apne seene me chipaye,maang me bhare sindoor se bhi jyada chamak raha hai.lekin aaj ka din bada hi khaas hai
Na jaane sab kis raaj ke khlne ke intajar me the.savere se hi chaul(poor building cum dwelling in dense areas) me ek ajeeb si bhagdad hai.ek ajeeb sa ehsaas,jo shayad kabhi nahi tha

Raziya ne to ugte suraj se pehle hi apni namaaj ka sajda ada kar chuki thi.phir bhi itni subha itni chehal pehal kabhi nahi thi.suhani,pushpa,lataa,mehek sab ki sab na jane kitni mannte liye baba ke darbaar me matha tek aai thi
Saare samaj sevak aur sakshi didi bhi vanhi hamare saath thi.aisa pehle kabhi nahi hua tha.sab ek dusre ka itna khyaal kar rahi thi itna pyaar kar rahi thi jaise madhu makhi ke chatte se shahad tapak reah ho.
Kabhi kabhi us kaali raat ko soch ke dil dehel jata tha.aanke dabdaba rahi thi aur palke bhig gaee.

Kanhi gam ka mausam tha kanhi ibaadaton ka,kanhi khushiyon ka mahole tha kanhi aashon ka.bawajood iske jindagi jindagi me kushi hansi ki meethi phuharon ka silsila bhi tha.
Kamla ki beti aur shanno ki kafi pat jati thi.vo usko aur baaki sabhi ladkiyon ko English padhati thi.ya yon kanhe ki unko good morning, good night,hello,hi sikha tit hi.us din kamla ki beti usko hello how are you seekha rahi thi.laakh koshisho baad shabbo boli hello hobri you.

Lekin vo kafi kuch seekh chuki thi.good night,welcome,have a nice day aur bhi bahut kuch.lekin agar sab huch ek saath bolna pade to shayad English ko bhi sharam aajati.
Hello,how are good morning you come I am fine thank you aur jo kuch bhi hindi filmo se sikha vo bhi bole deti thi shut up….
Court ke orders ke baad to jaise jindagi theher si gaee.jindagi khatam ho gaee thi.
N odhne ko kuch n khane ko kuch.pet me dhadhakti aag aur gharwaalo ki jimmedari aur n jane kitni pareshaniyan.

Lagta tha samaj hame acha dekhna nahi chahta tha
Kamla to shayad ye sab kuch she na paai.
Hamesh kehti thi main to jindagi bhar na chungi,badi deewani thi madhuri ki
Kamar hilati to sab ke sab jhoom uthte te
Lekin us bar ki chaka chond aur lal pili roshni ke baad to din ka suraj tha.aisa suraj janha sab log apni asliyat chupate hain,janha sab apne aap ko mahatma samajhte hain
Dance bars ke band ho jane ke baad bhi log use naachte dekhna chahte the voh bhi naachna chahti thi par log aur bhi bahut kuch chahte the.
Bebas thi magar uska paani khatm nahi hua tha.ek din kuch deewane usko utha kar le gaye,do mahine pehle hi uski laash naake par mili…..

Kamla ki ek beti hai,padhti hai,kuch English main kehti hai aai doctor na jane kya…
Magar yanha to kismet kuch aur hi hai…

Kaun jaane na jane kitni hi ladkiyan mar gayi,kitni maari gayi,aur na jane kitni mar rahin hai.sakshi didi ki aankhe nam thi magar raziya bolte bolter one lagi.
Siskiyan le le kar kuch boli
Rote rote boli thank you didi…didi thank you.
Main sach me buri nahi hoon…main vaishyaa nahi hoon…main vaishyaa nahi hoon.
Razita ko dekh sakshi apni sudh budh kho chuki thi.badan me ek bizli daud padi…kitni aag thi usme.
Society se buri tarha haari aur piti hui aurat ki juban use andar tak cheer gaye.uski man aur aatma rone lagi….
Usne raziya ko samjhaya aur raziya sakshi ke gale lag kar rone lagi..sakshi uski aag mehsoos kar sakti thi…
Magar thode hi der me vo chup ho gayi, hansne lagi.
Boli sab kuch theek ho jaye ga aur bahar chal gayi…
Apne hi log aisa karenge to kya hoga is samaz ka…sakshi sochne lagi…

Bahar to mausam hi kuch aur tha.
Sab ki sab apni petiyan khol khol kar baithi thi.kapde dekh rahi thi…kabhi seene ko chamakti chunniyo se dakh kar shrmati thi..
Bahar se aati kuch ladkiyan to na jane kya kya lekar aai thi.. jhumke,bindi,chamk,lipstick na jane kya kya…
Kuch beauty parlor jana chahti thi
Bahar se ati vandna ko dekh sakshi kuch soch me padgayi thi.
Uske kamre me gayi to dekha vo ro rahi thi.pucha to boli phone karne gayi thi magar…..
Sakshi samaj gayi thi.vandna apni behan rosy ko phone karne gayi thi.
Rosy ki tarha na jane kitni ladkiyan galat rahon par nikal gayi thi.

Par bahar se sakshi ko kisi ne bula liya.
Bahar gayi to deka press reporters khade hain.
Ek reporter ne pucha how are you feeling mam? Are you positive for the decision?
Sakshi ne kaha yes it is wonderful. We ha dbeen working since a long time to prove this fact that is a seperare and a respectable industry and should not be taken as prostitution.it is good to see that the law is with us, with these girls.yes we all are very positive about the decision.tabhi kisi ne puch liya kya aap ko nahi lagta ki is kadam se prostitution aur bhad jayega?
Sakshi ne kaha hum aap ki is galatfehmi ko door karne ke liye hi yanha hai.ye ladkiyan prostitutes nahi hain.yanha kisi ko shauk nahi hai ki vo kuch havas ke mare logo ki bhook meetaye.but they are misused.they are forced to so out of their circumstances. And it is this society who wants them to be prostitutes,who wants to satisfy their lust. It is brutual exploitation. And it will continue till they get a platform like dance bars from where they can earn money.it is the only way and only source.no govt. can give them job,no society can give them job..

Charoon taraf hungama tha . kanhi log khush the aur kanhi log nare baziyan laga rahe the.
Kuch log bhadkile bhashan de rahe the.
Lata ek ko pehchan gayi.yeh to….
Haan yeh vahi samaj ke nagrik hain jo din ke ujale main na jane kya kya kehte hain magar raat ke saye me ye vahi saudagar hain jo in bebas ladkiyon ke sapne kharidte hain..

Court ki sunvaii shuru ho gayi thi….
Dil itna tej dhadak raha tha jaise abhi bahar aajaye ga.ek taraf na jane kya soch raha tha judge aur ham log na jane kya kya sapne bunne lage the…
Time tham sa gaya tha.sab kuch ruk gaya tha. Bas dil ki dhadkane tej ho rahi thi.tj bahut tej……tej tej aur va aa gaya…vo aagaya…..judge ne jaise hi hamare liye orders diye,vaise hi pahad me chipe jwalamukhi ki tarha hum sabki khushiyan phut gayi thi….sab uchal pade,dhole bajne lage,sab chillane lage,khushi ke mare sab ka make up gila ho chukka tha,reporters hamara interview lena chahte the,charon taraf phone bajne lage sab jhumne lage….itni khushi to hamari dooli uthne par bhi nahi hogi,hum sab marne vale the,itni khushiyan ro ro kar bura haal tha,sakshi didi bhi naach rahi ti,ek julus jo ki sirf hasna, khelna aur nachna janta tha bhad raha tha , koi rok tok nahi,madmast sa…
Kisi ne shabbo se puch liye kaisa lag raha hai?mare khushi ke aur camera dekh bol padi I am fine how are you tahnk you welcome aur na jane kya….


Chal me jaise diwali ban rahi thi…roshni itni ki malum bhi nahi tha ki din nahi raat thi,magar itni jagmghat thi ki mano swarg me hon.
Loud speakers full volume pe baj rahe the.sab naach rahe the,sara mahulla nach raha tha,sab jhoom rahe the,log mithaiyan bat rahe the,paisa uda rahe the,kanhi kabab ,kanhi chicken,kanhi sharab beh rahi thi….
Hawa bhi madhoshi me doob chuki thi,itni masti,itni khushi,sab pagal ho chuke the,
Na balloon ka hosh na odhni ki chinta,ghanto baad bhi vahi josh tha,ashikon ki bhid jut chuki thi.

Phir silsila churu ho chukka tha vadoon ka,yarion ka,mahobatton ka,kasmo ka, vadon ka aur ladkiyan sa kuch bhool kar sapno ke ashiyano me saj rahi thi

Aur achanak raat ke 3:30 baje sab ke sapne tut gaye,neend tuti,gana nachna thama,dekha to raziya,raziya baal bikhre,saare chehre pe lipstick,gale pe kharonche,sare kapde phate hue,har jagha se nuchi hui,kuch jallado ne use nanga karke,noch ke,cheer ke phek diya tha.vo to mano kuch samaj hi nahi parahi thi,na kuch boli,aankhe jaise pathar aur aansoo bhi jam gaye the,andar chali gayi.
Sakshi didi ne police bulwai……

Aur aaj das mahine baad aap police wale uski case ki khoje me dike ho..
Salo amiron ke bhadwo,kutto.
Hum to paise ke liye apni numaish karte hain magar tum sale kuch paise ke liye apni aatma ko hi bech daal te ho,salon tumhari ma behno ko amirjada nanga kar ke chale jayenge to bhi tum paisa kha kar chup hp jana.
Tum to bar me nachne ke layak bhi nahi,tum jaiso ko to rando ki jagha baithana chahiye.thhooo.
Aur raziya us pe thuk ke chali gayi…..
Itna sab kuch hua magar ab aaoo huzur tunko sitaron pe le chalon,dil dub jai aise baharoon me le chalon……tej gano par kamar hilti gayi,note udte gaye, pet bharte gaye jism bikte gaye aatma marti gayi,iman bikte gaye…..
Phir vahi raat hai…….raat hai khwaab ki……..

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