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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 54
 
 
 
kaisa ye pyaar hai...
 

 

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He hugged her from back.
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Maan: maaf bhi krdo
Tum janti ho na tumhari narazgi mujhe biklul achi nhi lagti

Geet: 
Maan: kuch to kho na
Tum bak bak machine ki tarah jb bolti ho na''.tbhi achi lagti ho
She make o shaped face'..mummer "bak bak machine"
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Kha mujhe
Ab to bilkul baat nhi krni''.
He makes her angrier'..

Maan: mein tumhari saari baatein manta hu
She turns and now both face to each other'and said "saari baatein mante hai aap meri"
He nodded.
Geet: jhoothe'.khi ke
Ek baat to mante nhi aap
Aur khte hai
Geet mein to tumhari saari baatein manta hu
Maan: mein to tumhara gulam hu na
Aur tum khti ho''.
Geet: khud ko gulam khte hai
Aur mujhe itna pareshan karte hai
He pulled her cheeks and said you looking so cute ''jb tum complain krti ho
Geet: aapko ye sb majak lag rha hai

She takes step for going but he held her wrist and plays the  music''

mere dil me hai joru,
dil kee dhadakan me joru

He pulled her and encircled the waist''..

meree aankho me joru, 
meree saanso me joru

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arey aage joru pichhe joru, 
daaye joru baaye joru
joru joru joru joru joru...

meera: devv''

sham savere abb mai joru joru kahunga
mai joru ka gulam banake rahunga


He sat on his knees''..and held her wrist and pulled her'..she fall down on him''.
Meera: dev leave me'..

mai toh joru ka gulam, joru joru ka gulam banake rahunga


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sham savere abb mai

mai joru ka gulam arey banake rahunga
mai joru ka gulam, joru joru ka gulam banake rahunga

He kissed on her cheek'

Geet: maan
Stop the music''.
He denied''.

He goes outside''.

Geet: ab ye kha gye''
Kitne cute lag rhe the''.

He came and sees her smiley face''.
Maan(think): madam ko hassi aa rhi hai'..

She saw he came and he hide something in hands'.
Geet: kaha gye the aap'..aur aapke hatho mein kya hai''.

He came close to her and whisper into her ear "miss kr rhi thi"
Geet: no
She turn and he face her back.
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hai kasam rab kee na ishk duja karu

He come front of her '
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She shocked seeing puja thali in his hand''
He does aarti ''..

mai toh din rat joru kee puja karu

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arey joru maiya kee jay ho jay ho
mai toh joru ka gulam banake rahunga



joru bole toh jagu, joru bole toh sou
joru bole toh hans du, joru bole toh rou
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joru ke liye har sitam abb sahunga
mai toh joru ka gulam banake rahunga

She makes pout face'

Geet: maine aap pe kb sitam  kiya
 Wo to aap krte ho

Maan: geet woh to''.ye kh rha hai
Geet: oh
To aap joru ke gulam bhi nhi fir
Maan(mummer):- le  maan tu firse fass gya

Ye ladkiya itni complicated kyun hoti hai

Geet: aap jo mann me badbda  rhe hai ''.mujhe sb sunai de rha hai

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joru shadee se pahale lage apsara
dil lubhaye javani kee saree ada

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kyun sach kadava lagata hai na ha
jahan bachcha ho jaye saree rangat kho jaye

  maan: sshhh
I love you geet''..
Koi bhi cheez, wajh'.mera pyaar tumhare liye km nhi kr sakti
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Geet: I know maan
I love you too'.
She hugged him''.

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ada koyee bivee kee nahee shauhar ko bhaye
dilruba mai kabhee tujhako dhokha na dunga
mai toh joru ka gulam banake rahunga

She laughed on his antics and hugged him and said "it's ok dev"
Meera: maaf kiya
He came out from hug and kissed on her cheek and said "thanks meera"
Dev: thank god tum maan gyi
Nhi to mein khudko''she placed palm on his lip...Stop him for saying more word'
Meera: ye tumhare liye itna jaruri tha kya
Dev: ha meera'..
Both pass the smile.
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Geet: maan mujhe aapko kuch btana hai
Maan: kya mishty
Geet: maan
Mujhe na'''
Wo hum'''
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He cupped her face' "bolo na mishty"
Geet (thought) : kal btati hu maan ko''.

Maan: bolo na
Geet
Geet: kuch nhi''.kal batayungi''
Maan: abhi batane mein kya problem hai
Geet: kha na kal
Maan: ok...as you wish madam
So abhi'''
He scooped her in his arms and placed on bed''
Maan: romance time
 
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part 55
Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan is too good yaar
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
vow superb one
add me to ur pm list
cont soon
lovely ff
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Posted: 11 years ago

how romantic... 

awesome part...


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Posted: 11 years ago
awww sooo cute update yar,loved it a lot.
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lovely update buddy
do cont soon
thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi
the up is really good
mann and geet convo woh so sweet and so as dev and meera
me loved it throughly and waiting for the romantic part
plz cont soona dn pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
chalo meera aur geet dono hi maan gaye...maaf bhi kar diye...maan aur dev ko shanti mila...bach gaya dono...he he he...

wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago

lovely update

maan manofying geet

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Amazing Update 
Continue Soon 
Thank You So Much For The PM