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ok pls continue it Clap

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plz yaar, continue.

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hey great update plzzz continue soon!!!

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when u continuing this ff Krishi

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hurry up Krishi. i wanna know what happens next!

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"Jantha hoo aur Akanksha ko kaha bi. Don't worry I will talk to her." Sharath walked out angrily and nearly slammed his bedroom door with Akanksha in the room, "TUJE MUKTI KO ZABARDASTH KEER KILANA ZARURI THA KYA?"

Akanksha is in tears, "Ji... sorry.. v-vo ma ne kaha th-" she tried to explain but Sharath cut her off, "Kya teri ma Mukti ko mujse zyada janthi hai? NAHI NA THEI PROBLEM KYA HAI? TUME THO PATHA HAI KE MUKTI IS SHADI SHE KUSH NAHI HAI AUR USE LAGTHA HAI KE VO TUME SNEHA KE JAJE NAHI DE PAYEGI."

"I'm sorry main baas..." seeing her tears Sharath cooled down, "Deko Akanksha, main yeah tho nahi keheraha hoon ke tu vohi karo jo main chahatha hoon. Main baas yahe keha hoon ke Mukti ke mamle mai tum thoda se dyan se kaam lelo aur muje puche bagair koi kadam math lo. Kai yea kadam tuje door na lejaye use."

"I understand aur haan mai zarur koshish tho karungi... Mukti ki dill jeethne ke liya. Yaa aap mere saath hai?" she aksed looking into his eyes, he sighed and nodded gently hugging her for comfert more for him self than her. He needed that comfert at that time just for one purpouse, to find comfert in his life where he felt so alone. "Please take care of your self all right, Mukti is in a lot of pain now. She needs no more lectures from mum and dad."

"I'll try my best to stay out of her way Sharath." she replied, "Aur haan kya muje es waqth use baath karni chahiye?"

"Umm... haan shay - nahi, she's not at home, kai bahar ja rahi hai." she smiled through her tears, "Baad mai then."

"Excuse me..." Sharath showed her the ringing her phone and walked away from her, "Haan choto bolo."

"Biya mai Karan ke ghar thak jaa rahi hoon." she replied, "Kya achanak?"

"Haan thoda sa kaam hai mai aab chalthi hoon thoda sa kas kaam bhi hai." she replied, "Muje aane mai dher ho saktha hai."

"Don't worry about that, yahan situation mai handle kardunga." she replied, "Please, muje kafi badi mood out hogya hai. By...

"By..." he cut the line and ran a hand thorugh his hair Akanksha slowly placed a hand on his shoudler, "Kya vo bahoth karab mood mai hai?"

"Mujse ithni kaam boli thi ofcouse she is aur haan aaj dinner ke liya nahi aayegi." Sharath added lightly, inside he was worried, she was driving too fast. Something she does only when she is very upset or is going to save some one from something big. Iska mathlab hai ke vo Karan se milne nahi ja rahi hao, mujse vo joot kyun bol rahi thi?

Mukti was driving as she picked up her phone and dilled a number, "It's me, Mukti suno tume mere liya ek kaam karna padega. There is something you must know about from you vo nayi kaam jo Appo*na karne ja rahi haai vo kya hai?"

The voice on the other end replied, "Ma'am hum aap ko yeah baath malum karne mai thoda sa waqth laga saktha hai."

"Kambaqth waqth hi nahi hai mere paas. You must work harder bahoth loghon ke jaan ismai shamil hai." Mukti replied urgently, the girl on the other side, "Ajeeb hai aap jaise insan logon ko bhi logon ke jaan ke bare mai phikar rehthi hai."

"Jis baath ke baare mai tu puri tu nahi janthi uske baare mai baath maath karo." Mukti snapped, muje baas yeahe bolo ke tuje kaam ke liya kithne paison ke zarurath hai. Nothing more nothing less thab thak tum muje vo information nahi doge jo mai chahathi hoonn."

"Aare aajb hai aap ma'am teek hai.... boldethi hoon. lekin yea tho bathayie ke ke aap ko chahiye kya?" she asked, "Apni email check karo vahan tume sari details milega aur han dobara contact karne ke koshis maath karo. Us Email aur muje koi connetion nahi hai."

"Ji ma'am." she replied submisivly Mukti cut the line, it rang again the next second, "Haan Yudi bolo."

"Kaam hogaya?" she sighed, "Nahi aab thak tho nahi lekin haan she will do it, kafi tempted hai vo she will do this, use paison ki zarurath hai."

"How can you be so sure?" he asked, "Your forgetting who I higered for the job."

"Then why does Sharath not know as yet?" he countered her, "Aabhi aabhi uske duse shadi hua hai... abi use yeah kaam par involve karna problem hogayega. He needs time with Akanksha aur waise tum yeah bhool gaye ho kya ke yeah rishta banaya gaya tha, pyar se juda nahi."

"Haan haan baba yaad hai." he replied, "Aare Mukti ek minute there is a fax message comming inn. Zara inthzar karo na..."


Mukti kept driving when Prem suddenly came back, "MUKTI YOU THERE?"

"Haan kya hua koi problem..." she was cut of by Prem, "PROBLEM KA BAAP AARAHA HAI, U.S SE T.J AANE WALA HAI."

"T- T.J? K-kyun?" there was a fear in Mukti's voice, "Kai koi gadbad tho nahi hua na? Kya tumne level one ko inform kar diya?"

"Nahi aabhi karne walahoon Mukti there is somehting else as well..." he paused, she snapped at him, "KYA RE?"

"Koi tho hai jo hamare kaam ke baare mai bahar leek karna shuri kardiya hai." he replied, "Iska sif ek solution hai Prem we need to meet in our place. Jaldi!"

"Aur ek aur important baath hai. Karan ko maath bulana for now..." she added cutting the line, Prem turned to look at his best friend next to him confsued, "Kya hua ise, she always want you to know first?"

"Mera hone wala bacha... she is worried about it bro jantha hoon use." he replied, Prem nodded, 'If you say so."

"Muje jaana hoga apna kyal rakna." he toched him lightly before leaving the place. Prem took a can of his bear and gulped it down, "Aab hum kya kare?"

Krishi

Sorry sorry sorry I was a bit stuck now it can go on if I get loads of support

shakthi258

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Posted: 06 September 2008 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
Sorry guys thoda sa problems tha

Update:

"Jantha hoo aur Akanksha ko kaha bi. Don't worry I will talk to her." Sharath walked out angrily and nearly slammed his bedroom door with Akanksha in the room, "TUJE MUKTI KO ZABARDASTH KEER KILANA ZARURI THA KYA?"

Akanksha is in tears, "Ji... sorry.. v-vo ma ne kaha th-" she tried to explain but Sharath cut her off, "Kya teri ma Mukti ko mujse zyada janthi hai? NAHI NA THEI PROBLEM KYA HAI? TUME THO PATHA HAI KE MUKTI IS SHADI SHE KUSH NAHI HAI AUR USE LAGTHA HAI KE VO TUME SNEHA KE JAJE NAHI DE PAYEGI."

"I'm sorry main baas..." seeing her tears Sharath cooled down, "Deko Akanksha, main yeah tho nahi keheraha hoon ke tu vohi karo jo main chahatha hoon. Main baas yahe keha hoon ke Mukti ke mamle mai tum thoda se dyan se kaam lelo aur muje puche bagair koi kadam math lo. Kai yea kadam tuje door na lejaye use."

"I understand aur haan mai zarur koshish tho karungi... Mukti ki dill jeethne ke liya. Yaa aap mere saath hai?" she aksed looking into his eyes, he sighed and nodded gently hugging her for comfert more for him self than her. He needed that comfert at that time just for one purpouse, to find comfert in his life where he felt so alone. "Please take care of your self all right, Mukti is in a lot of pain now. She needs no more lectures from mum and dad."

"I'll try my best to stay out of her way Sharath." she replied, "Aur haan kya muje es waqth use baath karni chahiye?"

"Umm... haan shay - nahi, she's not at home, kai bahar ja rahi hai." she smiled through her tears, "Baad mai then."

"Excuse me..." Sharath showed her the ringing her phone and walked away from her, "Haan choto bolo."

"Biya mai Karan ke ghar thak jaa rahi hoon." she replied, "Kya achanak?"

"Haan thoda sa kaam hai mai aab chalthi hoon thoda sa kas kaam bhi hai." she replied, "Muje aane mai dher ho saktha hai."

"Don't worry about that, yahan situation mai handle kardunga." she replied, "Please, muje kafi badi mood out hogya hai. By...

"By..." he cut the line and ran a hand thorugh his hair Akanksha slowly placed a hand on his shoudler, "Kya vo bahoth karab mood mai hai?"

"Mujse ithni kaam boli thi ofcouse she is aur haan aaj dinner ke liya nahi aayegi." Sharath added lightly, inside he was worried, she was driving too fast. Something she does only when she is very upset or is going to save some one from something big. Iska mathlab hai ke vo Karan se milne nahi ja rahi hao, mujse vo joot kyun bol rahi thi?

Mukti was driving as she picked up her phone and dilled a number, "It's me, Mukti suno tume mere liya ek kaam karna padega. There is something you must know about from you vo nayi kaam jo Appo*na karne ja rahi haai vo kya hai?"

The voice on the other end replied, "Ma'am hum aap ko yeah baath malum karne mai thoda sa waqth laga saktha hai."

"Kambaqth waqth hi nahi hai mere paas. You must work harder bahoth loghon ke jaan ismai shamil hai." Mukti replied urgently, the girl on the other side, "Ajeeb hai aap jaise insan logon ko bhi logon ke jaan ke bare mai phikar rehthi hai."

"Jis baath ke baare mai tu puri tu nahi janthi uske baare mai baath maath karo." Mukti snapped, muje baas yeahe bolo ke tuje kaam ke liya kithne paison ke zarurath hai. Nothing more nothing less thab thak tum muje vo information nahi doge jo mai chahathi hoonn."

"Aare aajb hai aap ma'am teek hai.... boldethi hoon. lekin yea tho bathayie ke ke aap ko chahiye kya?" she asked, "Apni email check karo vahan tume sari details milega aur han dobara contact karne ke koshis maath karo. Us Email aur muje koi connetion nahi hai."

"Ji ma'am." she replied submisivly Mukti cut the line, it rang again the next second, "Haan Yudi bolo."

"Kaam hogaya?" she sighed, "Nahi aab thak tho nahi lekin haan she will do it, kafi tempted hai vo she will do this, use paison ki zarurath hai."

"How can you be so sure?" he asked, "Your forgetting who I higered for the job."

"Then why does Sharath not know as yet?" he countered her, "Aabhi aabhi uske duse shadi hua hai... abi use yeah kaam par involve karna problem hogayega. He needs time with Akanksha aur waise tum yeah bhool gaye ho kya ke yeah rishta banaya gaya tha, pyar se juda nahi."

"Haan haan baba yaad hai." he replied, "Aare Mukti ek minute there is a fax message comming inn. Zara inthzar karo na..."


Mukti kept driving when Prem suddenly came back, "MUKTI YOU THERE?"

"Haan kya hua koi problem..." she was cut of by Prem, "PROBLEM KA BAAP AARAHA HAI, U.S SE T.J AANE WALA HAI."

"T- T.J? K-kyun?" there was a fear in Mukti's voice, "Kai koi gadbad tho nahi hua na? Kya tumne level one ko inform kar diya?"

"Nahi aabhi karne walahoon Mukti there is somehting else as well..." he paused, she snapped at him, "KYA RE?"

"Koi tho hai jo hamare kaam ke baare mai bahar leek karna shuri kardiya hai." he replied, "Iska sif ek solution hai Prem we need to meet in our place. Jaldi!"

"Aur ek aur important baath hai. Karan ko maath bulana for now..." she added cutting the line, Prem turned to look at his best friend next to him confsued, "Kya hua ise, she always want you to know first?"

"Mera hone wala bacha... she is worried about it bro jantha hoon use." he replied, Prem nodded, 'If you say so."

"Muje jaana hoga apna kyal rakna." he toched him lightly before leaving the place. Prem took a can of his bear and gulped it down, "Aab hum kya kare?"

Krishi

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