OS - Melting into darkness (Completed) - Page 3

Thanks choti fatima, i cant make arnav all mushy lovey... he needs his ASR qualities too 😉

wow...beautiful piece...could actually imagine it...so probable  a situation...this is the intensity that can get the beautiful romance of our leads back on track...wonderful OS 👏

Wow u left me speechless!
Awesome OS!

great end to the scene Fatima
liked how u kept it real
thanks for continuing and ending it brilliantly !

assi toh fan ho gaye ji twadde (not that I wasn't impressed before:) )

thank you everyone for liking the scene

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great end to the scene Fatima
liked how u kept it real
thanks for continuing and ending it brilliantly !

assi toh fan ho gaye ji twadde (not that I wasn't impressed before:) )

oh wow... i have a fan, im so on the clouds today 😃

Your OS was good but why the creep in it?

@lara3110 - I could not think of any other way for khushi to realize the difference between shyam and arnav... complete oppsites and her feelings of fear and security from one to the other

i also think the person to find out abt khushi and arnav should be shyam, anyone else and the story doesnt rreally move forward

believe me i didnt want to write abt him but it just sort of flowed together 😕

loved it..it was really good.