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Posted: 10 January 2012 at 2:16pm | IP Logged



Hi all wrote some lines after such a long time...wanted to share it with you all...i know i am not a good poet at all so please ignore my silly mistakes.

Pyaar ki suno hai ye ek daastan
Basa hai jisme ek ladki ka jahan



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Wo bholi si , gumsum si,
har gali se gujarti thi
Chup-Chup ke ek ladke ko
Woh to Dekha karti thi


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Karne lagi thi pyaar usse
Par kaise kare izhaar usse
Phir ladke ne kiya pyaar ka izhaar
Par kiya ladki ne kyun inkaar

Asli baat thi sabse chupi
Musibat main thi ladki phasi
Behen ke pyaar se hokar majboor
Ladki ne kiya apna sapna choor-choor,



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Ladki ka dil toot gaya
Pyaar ka jahan usse rooth gaya.




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Phir aaya ek pagal ladka
Dekh jise Ladki ka dil dhadka
Par phir suru hui takraar
Ladki ko tha pyaar se inkaar











Edited by edwardcullen19 - 13 January 2012 at 3:17am

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Posted: 10 January 2012 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
i know i am not a good poet at all...so guys please bear my poetry
here just want to share one thing with you all, some members prefer to go to Kinshuk's and Neha's new show forums rather than staying here...i am not saying that it's not good but please try to be active here too
many members try a lot to make this forum active and i am quite sad with the response they got from you all...please friends, don't remain quite and post your views about topics made in the forum

about the poem it's not the whole poem...i will complete it with it's second part

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Posted: 10 January 2012 at 4:53pm | IP Logged
Very nice lines Neeti and looking forward to more.. Aww miss my NivRen :(

Neeti, ccbm forum is the first forum I joined and it will always be special just like NivRen/KinHa.

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Posted: 10 January 2012 at 5:19pm | IP Logged
Lovely thread Neeti. 
Miss CCBM and Nivren.Cry 

Nivren is the only jodi I fell in love with till now. They will always remain in my heart and in my mind.


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Very nice post i loved the poetry keep writing

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Posted: 10 January 2012 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
Neetika.. beautiful post Clap... really appreciate your efforts and love it... 

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beautiful poem niti sweets..luv it...

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What an awesome worddds... loved them... really u r making me full of happiness ...Missing NivRen so much ... Keep it up Girl Wink

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