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MagicianPrayas

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Posted: 10 January 2012 at 10:28am | IP Logged

hi priansBig smileSmile

how r u all

i hope u all r watching PR& may be also enjoying PR.

Although leap has happen in the PR but I haven't seen any dramatic changes in it

There is hardly any improvement in the script of PR only thing is happen is that by bringing some new characters .leap is an old tried & tested formula which is used by the creative team for to retain its current audience & also looking for the new audience sometime it works & sometime its not, but in case of PR its too early to comment on it but even BT is only focus on its other serial rather on PR sometimes I feel pity on the condition of PR.

But I salute to the actors who r still giving their best effort & its also work somewhere that's why PR is still in the top 10 serials in terms of TRP chart & also the leading serial of zee tv, but its script which is not helping them at all.

Now lets talk about the two central characters of this show Archana & Manav.

They both still travelling in the same boat once again they both r separated but this time is only thing different their time period was in double digit figure i.e 18 years. Hope they will both reunite soon & the focus of script also little bit more on new generation characters .

 

If Don's friends have think that Don will stop writing its compositions than its their biggest mistake.ROFL

After more than 7 months I m back with a new topic post so its quiet obvious my topic post mostly contains my compositions after all I m too possessive of my shayars Image.ROFL

Hope u all will likemy this new composition.

Till then take care all & thanksSmileBig smile





Ek gumsum raat mein main kis dhund mein khoya tha
chehre par muskaan thi par dil hi dil mein main bahut roya tha
aaj bhikhre hue kyun mere halaat hain
na jaane kyun ishq mein haare hue mere zazbaat hain
yeh kaisa itefaq hain yeh kaisi aahat hain
dil mein toofan uth rahe hain par kyun ho rahi mujhe gabhrahaat hain 


zindagi kuch yun nakaamiyon ke sahare guzar rahi hain
mere na chahte hue bhi yeh kyun mujhe ateet mein le ja rahi hain
itne andhere hain ab meri zindagi mein
log khush hain kyunki bahar chandni raat hain
aaj shayad meri ankhaein bhar aayi hain na jaane who kaunsi baat hain
lafzoon mein bayaan nahin kar sakta hoon yeh mere toote armaano ki barsaat hain


achanak ek tasveer meri ankhone ke samne kuch yun aa gayi hain
jis ladki ki woh tasveer hain shayad woh mere dil mein sama gayi hain
hum unhe ab door se hi nihaare lage hain
is matlabi duniya mein ko hum bhi ab pehchaan lage hain
ab to meri kismat ki sitare bhi chamatkar dikhane lage hain
khuda ne humare liye bhi kisiko banaya  hain
yeh baat hum poore shaher ko batane lage hain
mann mein ab bhi bahut uljhaane hain kaise kahe ki ab hum unhe chahne lage hain
neend to hum se bahut door hain unke khwab aa aa kar ab humein jalane lage hain


beimaan mausam mein hum dono ek doosre ke itne paas aa jaye
siskiyaan leti hui kaash woh bhi ek baar meri baahon mein aa jaye
taqleef mein hum kuch yun hain yeh saare mere khwab hain
unke dard bhare sawaalon ke mere paas nahin koi jawab hain
is shaher mein unki khoobsurati ke deewane bade behisaab hain
pyaar mein nakaam hone ke liye logo ne diye humein kiee khitab hain
woh humein kabhi padhkar ki bhi na samjh saki hum un ke liye ek aisi kitab hain


unki bahakti aankhon ne humein ishaaro mein samajhaya hain
woh mere naseeb mein nahin hain phir maine unse dil kyun lagaya hain
kitna ajeeb sach kaha hain unhone is sach ne mujhe bahut hasaya hain
waqt ne mujhe lakar kis jagah par fasaya hain
dil mein ek chhoti khwashish baaki hain kaash unse ek mulaqat ho jaye 
mushkil yeh nahin hain woh kuch samajhti nahin hain
mushkil tab hogi jab who mere pyaar ko samajh jaye
haqeeqat mein na sahi kaash kabhi khwaboon mein hi woh mere saath ek shaam bitaye
is dil ko thoda sa sukoon tab milega jab mushkiloon se bhari meri zindagi thodi si asaan ho jaye
hum ab fikkr nahin hain unke pyaar mein hum apni zindagi bhi har jaye



woh mujhse ek mulaqat karne ko taiyaar ho gayi
dil ko kuch yun laga ki woh is shayar ke pyaar mein giraaftar ho  gayi
unhone mujhe se is andaz mein kaha 
"aap kyun lagta hain main bhi aapse pyaar karti hoon
aap shayar hain isliye shayad main bhi aapko koi shayari hi lagti hoon
yeh pyaar hain yaa aapka koi unkaha mazak hain
bhavish ka to pata nahin par majdhar mein zaroor aapka aaj hain
aap kyun mujhse pyaar karte hain iske pichhe kya gehra raaz hain
par aapko yeh samajhnaa hoga shayari aur haqeeqat mein bahut antar hota hain
yeh pyaar nahin bas humare darmiyaan sirf insaniyat ka rishta hain
jo har ek insaan ka doosre insaan se hota hain
ab aap bhi yeh baat ko maann li jiye 
zindagi mein jo bhi hota hain achhe ke liye hota hain"


ab humari baari thi kuch kehne kii
aaj ke baad hum phir shayad kabhi nahin milenge
par aapke saath bitaye gaye yeh kuch lamhe hamesha mere saath rahenge 
meri aur aapki kahaani shuru hone se pehle hi khatm ho gayi hain
par yakeen maaniye is kahaani kii wajah se meri zindagi bahut roshan ho gayi hain
kabhi socha nahin tha ki aapke bina zindagi kaise hogi
par itna yakeen hain jaise bhi hogi meri liye zindagi bahut achhi hogi


mere paas sirf pyaar ke alwaa aapko dene ke liye nahin koi aur nazraana hain
main to shayad aapko kabhi nahin bhool paonga 
par aap se guzaarish hain aapko mujhe hamesha ke liye bhool jaana hain
aapse kiya hua yeh waada mujhe hamesha ke liye nibhaana hain
galti se bhi hum kabhi kisi raaste par mile to ek nazar dekh kar mujhe phirse aapko aage badh jaana hain
zindagi mein pyaar se badhkar aur cheezein bhi hain ab kahin jaa kar yeh baat mera dil maana hain
jo kabhi aapke dil tak nahin puchha hain yeh woh khoobsurat fasaana hain














 

 



Edited by acre - 10 January 2012 at 11:49am

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Posted: 10 January 2012 at 10:54am | IP Logged
nice post acre Smile

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Posted: 10 January 2012 at 10:58am | IP Logged
As usual Awesome, Superb yaar :)
waise bahut dino ke IF mein tumhara koi post dekhne ko mila...dekh kar accha laga.

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Posted: 10 January 2012 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Wowww acre..ahem ahem ;-)
I just loved it to the bottom of my heart...
Beautiful poetry...mein tau fan ho gayi :p :D
Awesome superb love each and every word of your shayari
Chalo yeh raha ek shair...meine Nahin likha par aap dekhte hi samjh jao ge ke yeh meine kis keliye likha hai :D

Khushion se naraz hai meri zindagi,
Pyar ki mohtaz hai meri zindagi,
Has leti hoon logon ko dikhane ke liye,Varna dard ki kitaab hai meri zindagi…..

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Posted: 10 January 2012 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
Hi Shikhar , these r the lines that I liked the most

na jaane kyun ishq mein haare hue mere zazbaat hain

woh humein kabhi padhkar ki bhi na samjh saki hum un ke liye ek aisi kitab hain

mushkil yeh nahin hain woh kuch samajhti nahin hain
mushkil tab hogi jab who mere pyaar ko samajh jaye

bhavish ka to pata nahin par majdhar mein zaroor aapka aaj hain

kabhi socha nahin tha ki aapke bina zindagi kaise hogi
par itna yakeen hain jaise bhi hogi meri liye zindagi bahut achhi hogi


zindagi mein pyaar se badhkar aur cheezein bhi hain ab kahin jaa kar yeh baat mera dil maana hain

These were the lines I loved the most .

You have written very well and from the heart as always . Bahut Khoob .

Keep t it up . I sensed a practical maturity in ur shayari today and I liked it .Smile

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Posted: 10 January 2012 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
nice job, thanks for sharing. Big smile

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Posted: 10 January 2012 at 6:25pm | IP Logged
Hey Shikhar, how are you doing? You've posted after so many days!

I think this is your best shayari till date, in terms of concept, composition and lines. The ending was bitter sweet.

Really nice work!

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Posted: 10 January 2012 at 8:02pm | IP Logged
Acreji kaise hain aap... Tongue Nice to see a post from you Embarrassed..
 
Bahut achche Shayar ji Clap 

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