Originally posted by Blushsarika
Aww... It was soo... Cute and such a romantic update.
Best update read so far. You have put so many super cute moments in this update.
It was such a lovely update that ,can read it numerous times.
Seeing the reactions of DB and Col. Verma, possibility is that,Ashni have to face there disaproval in future .Would love to read how you are going to handle it.
--if not DB but Col. Verma is surely gonna give this story a little twist.. bt wud it turn out to b gud or bad forAshNi.. tht u will need to wait and read.
Throughout the chapter all the conversations between ashutosh and nidhi were so lovely ,innocent and cute.
Expressions shown were awesome.
Hats off to you for writting it so beautifully.
--Thnx.. i luv thr conversations so much.. it has tht spark tht i luv so much...
Both of them knew what they feel for each other . But hesitated to accept in front of each other.
Here both know each others naino ki bhasha.
Without expressing there feelings for each other. You worded there feeling beautifully.
--i have made thm read and understand each others naino ki bhasa forcefully .. and also left thm guessing for a while abt each other's feelings.. . i believe the fun is lost once confession is done.. ..
Liked the way they teased each other.
In the restaurent song choosen was perfect.love that song.
Atmosphere created was so very heart touching.
Being in love is such a beautiful feeling.
Awakwardness to face each other
Ashu's protection for her when he realised that people were looking at her.aww...--Ashu can b both a perfect gentleman and a pretty teaser...but looking at his growing care and concern and an overpowering sense of protectiveness for Nidhi.. i wonder wer it wud lead him in this r'ship... hmm.
In the hospital there phone conve and the idea about the password thing was very good.
Best line was-apparently coz I think it's my house and my laptop.
--the whole last part of password thing jst came to my mind wen i was writing tht scene.. i m pleasantly surprised tht u all actually luved it..
Overall it was long and fab update.,worth for such long wait
just can't wait for the next update
would be happy if you give us double treat this weekend
so very eagerly waiting waiting for the next update.
--Oh.. so sorry.. double treat wont possible.. bt i will try to post at least one chapter..
Thanks for the pm and such lovely long chapter.