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Posted: 29 May 2012 at 11:58am | IP Logged
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rafi di aap itne dino se ise post nahi kiya tha.
Y y y ??

thanks nidi dat u made Rafi di post the chap.
Di this was very realistic and loved the way u described the gal..
Thanks for pm and plz plz pretty plz keep updating this.



Edited by asmaju - 29 May 2012 at 12:19pm

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Posted: 29 May 2012 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
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Great Start Rafi. Thumbs Up

Loved how you described Alizey, waiting to see how her character matures in the coming years. 

Very realistic picture of life in middle east. More so from a girl of Alizey's age.

Liked the touch of humor you gave with the the whole scarf and plumbers overall part.

Waiting for the next part.


P.S - I am a keralite Smile



Edited by Sudha-SK - 29 May 2012 at 5:40pm

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Well for the moment i will reserve my comment. I have a mixed feeling about the update. Its not that it was not written beautifully or anything else. It was awesomely written. But i was expecting much more hard hitting update. This post have ssome chik flick type feeling. May be its only for me. Will look forward for the next update.
Waise btw really gulf countries mein Keralites bhare hue hain kya ? My brother who is in Bahrain also tells me the same thing. I didn't believe him then but now i am thinking he is right. 

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Posted: 29 May 2012 at 12:27pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by marauder

Well for the moment i will reserve my comment. I have a mixed feeling about the update. Its not that it was not written beautifully or anything else. It was awesomely written. But i was expecting much more hard hitting update. This post have ssome chik flick type feeling. May be its only for me. Will look forward for the next update.
Waise btw really gulf countries mein Keralites bhare hue hain kya ? My brother who is in Bahrain also tells me the same thing. I didn't believe him then but now i am thinking he is right. 
 

Shishir the story IS gonna sound like that for a while .. its spans over 16 years .. Alizey is 13 at this point of the story  .. the characters will grow as the story does. And yes .. ur bro is right . 


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rafi di aap itne dino se ise post nahi kiya tha.
Y y y ??

thanks nidi dat u made Rafi di post the chap.
Di this was very realistic and loved the way u described the gal..
Thanks for pm and plz plz pretty plz keep updating this.


Thank you so much Asma .. and it was Nidhi who made me Update LOL
Thank you once again Embarrassed


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Posted: 29 May 2012 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
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Res. Sorry Rafz will have to edit tomorrow. Unhappy

No worries ! Embarrassed

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Posted: 29 May 2012 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
loved alizey's take on her classmates...LOL

we always tend to do that no matter where we go...school...college,...office...we tend to segregate them acc to our opinion...(which is true most of the time..or rather all the time..Tongue)

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hah , great start i muat say, rafi , you brought up in the UAE? (you mentioned autobiographical so )

i live in saudi arabia (neighbours) , passed out of international indian school , which i must say matches your school description so much except the co-ed and the uniform.. on a serious note a very good description of alisey's attitude.. i think i will love her..

will you be updating more often here?? im hoping yes!!

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