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IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06 (Page 83)

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 4:55am | IP Logged
Oh wow! Arnav, ultimate monster here.. He did all of this in rage an now.. He can't see her like this! And poor khushi, she is so broken:s but payal doesn't know about the force Arnav used huh? Hmm I wonder what Arnav could do to ever redeem himself because reading a khushi like this has got me shivering! Nice writing and great update!
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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 7:13am | IP Logged
OMG this story is awesome I read the whole thing in one go and it actually almost made me cry. The way you captured Khushi's emotions and her turmoil was  absolutely amazing. I hope you update more of this cos it is amazing and you are an amazing writer. You've got a gift that's quite a rarity. You manage to get into the readers head and set the scene in there perfectly. You have defo got a gift with words. Oh and may I have the link to Chapter 7? because I clicked on the page but I could not find it on page 72

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Posted: 10 April 2012 at 6:16am | IP Logged
I love your FF. please please please update soon!!!   PM me when you do as it takes me forever to find it.

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 5:28am | IP Logged
Read all d 7 parts..d nly thng i cn say is dat my heart got heavy aftr reading dis..n i dnt knw hw to remove dis feelin of depression frm my mind..wat hppnd wid khushi z d worst thng dat cn hppn wid a woman..n m vry sensitive abt d topic..m lost 4 words..dnt knw wat 2 say..bt i wud like to c her out of dis nytmare soon..

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 1:11am | IP Logged
ok. this is my favorite. you will write more Smile do it. Do it now!Tongue
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Posted: 21 April 2012 at 5:59pm | IP Logged

It is beautifuIIy written

I Ioved it Big smile

pIease pm me when you update hiru



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Posted: 22 April 2012 at 5:41am | IP Logged
hey... great update.. brilliant way to put things, depection of her feelings is amazing...hope she gets back to normal soon. plz update soon Smile
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Posted: 22 April 2012 at 8:43am | IP Logged
read it all in one go... beautifully written.. plz update soonBig smile

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