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Posted: 06 January 2012 at 9:59am | IP Logged
walking in the corridor
waiting for the maha sabha to start
sati came to the door
and saw sumthing that pierced her heart

standing there with a smile on his face
was shiv along with his trishul
his heart beat increased its pace
but he kept his face calm and cool

he walked up to her as he had to enter the place
sati wondered what to do, where to look
but couldent get her eyes of him and watched him walk in grace
finally back to senses from the attendent had the plate she took

she took the crimson from the plate
 and moved forward to put the tika for shiv
her heart was beating so fast
that the heartbeat could be herd by shiv

as she touched his forhead
 he got a shvier up his spine
even though his face dint have a smile
his heart had a beaming shine

they both felt they had sumthing
a strong connction
that bounded them so strongly
which was the result of thier attraction

as they both got back their senses
shiv realised he had to go inside
he walked adhead and she behind him
though they wished they could walk side by side...

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Posted: 06 January 2012 at 9:59am | IP Logged
my forst poem on sati and shiv
hope u liked it!!!!!
pls do comment!!!
:)

it is also posted in dkdm editorial


Edited by kajen_9 - 06 January 2012 at 10:02am

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Posted: 06 January 2012 at 11:27am | IP Logged
well done! Clap
very nice work.

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Posted: 06 January 2012 at 11:41am | IP Logged
I like it !!!
You write well

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Posted: 06 January 2012 at 9:04pm | IP Logged
OMG a poem on Shiva and Shakti...umm Confused,..aw..ex... I;m short of wordsLOL

Most Lovely Heartpoem i have read till date..Loved it so muchStar

ClapGood work palClap

Keep up the good work!!


Edited by Killer_Shark - 06 January 2012 at 9:05pm

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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 3:08am | IP Logged

Nice poemClap

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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 4:06am | IP Logged
dint expect such a creation for myhto show its really awesome keep doing such creations in future too yaarClap

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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 10:09am | IP Logged
Btw did all this happen in real (i.e; in the show) or its ua idea

If this happens naa tere muh main ghee shakaar..alll rich chocolates


Edited by Killer_Shark - 07 January 2012 at 10:11am

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