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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: anamika143


arey its good...and its very nice that u tried n it really is very good

thanks yaar

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: anamika143

SCENE 1:

KRIYA IS GOING 2WARDS CANTEEN...
ON ENTERING SHE SAW THAT REY WAS TALKING TO AN UNKNOWN GIRL...
THE GIRL GAVE HUG TO REY AND WENT AWAY...
KRIYA THEN GOES 2WARDS REY...
 
 
 

 
Kriya:"Hi rey" says very very sweetly n gives a gorgeous smile
Rey(completely lost in her smile n gives a dreamy look just like the one during the trip): Hi
Kriya:"rey ek baat puchun??"
Rey:"haan pucho"
Kriya:"woh ladki koun thi??"
Rey:"kounsi ladki???"
Kriya:"wohi jisne aapko abhi abhi hug kiya"
Rey:"oh woh...woh toh...(comes back to his senses)"
Rey in his mind: oh toh isiliye yeh baatcutter mujhse itni sweet ho rahi hai...pyaari pyaari smile de kar sab kuch nikalwana chahti hai...upar se deepika toh andar hi andar jhansi ki rani hai yeh
ab jo bhi mein kahun uska galat matlab hi nikalegi yeh...kya karun?? sach hi bata deta hoon...waise bhi aajkal meri baatcutter bahut sweet hogayi hai
Kriya:"REY!!!"
Rey jumps up
Rey:haan haan bolo kya hua
Kriya: mein aapse kuch puch rahi hoon aur aap apne hi khyalon mein ghum ho
Rey: sorry baba...i was just...acha chodo...tum uss ladki ke baare mein puch rahi thi na?
Kriya: haan koun thi woh? aur usne aapko hug kyu kiya???
Rey: arey woh humari coll mein nayi aayi hai...uska naam Sanjana hai...Rdx sir ne mujhe usse pura coll dikhane ko kaha tha...toh bas wohi kar raha tha...aur woh bahut friendly types hai...aur usne mujhe hug isiliye kiya kyunki usse lagta hai ki mein uska bahut acha dost hoon aur thank u kehke hug kiya...
Kriya(murmuring): acha dost?? huh iss sanjana ko toh mein chodungi nahi...Mere Rey ko hug kaise kiya uiss chudail ne!!!
Rey hears her...n is very happy
Rey: mera rey?? toh miss dehradun aap jealous ho rahi hai ki aapke ilawa bhi hume kisine hug karne ki koshish ki?
Kriya: Mein? nahi mein jealous nahi ho rahi
Rey: jhuti!!
Kriya: nahi mein nahi woh toh...haan woh Romaira haina...usse jealousy feel ho rahi hai...kisine chabhilal ko jo hug kiya toh...
Rey pulls her close n whispers : par miss romaira raichand...chabhilal toh sirf aapka hai...aur aapka hi rahega...koi theesra humare beech nahi aasakta
LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA
Rey leaves her slowly...Kriya blushes n is about to leave but turns back
Kriya: romaira aur chabhilal...kriya aur rey...ek hi hai..haina?
Rey: yep...aur jitna pyaar chabhilal romaira se karta hai...usse kahin zyada pyaar rey kria se karta hai...aur chahe kitni bhi ladkiyan rey pe fida ho...uske liye sirf kriya important hai...aur humesha rahegi...isiliye kriya ko jealous feel karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai
Kriya: par kriya thodi possessive types hai
Rey: aur rey ko yeh fact pasand hai
Kriya blushes : toh hum chale...class ke liye der ho jayegi
Rey: hmm chalo
 
n they go to class n sit together n do sweet cute romance
 
i hope u guys like it...jaise maine scene imagine kiya waise hi likh diya
agar koi improvement karni ho toh plz do tell
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
@twilightmystery it was superb 
very cute yr
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: luv_arsha

@twilightmystery it was superb 

very cute yr

 
 
thank u so much 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: anamika143

Less people interested??

 
give the next scene jaldi jaldi

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Posted: 12 years ago
@twilightmystery: it was awesome yar. I loved it. U r a very gud writer.
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Posted: 12 years ago

SCENE 1:

KRIYA IS GOING 2WARDS CANTEEN...
ON ENTERING SHE SAW THAT REY WAS TALKING TO AN UNKNOWN GIRL...
THE GIRL GAVE HUG TO REY AND WENT AWAY...
KRIYA THEN GOES 2WARDS REY...

Kriya has that "gusse waala" look on her face.
Rey thinks that kriya is jealous-  he kinda likes dis n smiles n says "hi" to kriya.
kriya is fuming wid anger,she stomps her foot n goes inside d class.
rey: uh oh!! mar gaaya tu rey! uski aankho main itna gussa! *lloks up* meri baat-cutter ke universe ji! pl mujhe bacha lena aaj.
rey goes inside the class n sees dat kriya is sittg next 2...
SHARON! n sharon ko bhi koi prob nahi hain lettg kriya sit nxt 2 her!
(hint- K & S r sisters! but evry1 one knows abt der relatnshp!)
rey goes n sits nxt 2 swayam n dey r sittg diagonaly 2wds dem so dat bth of dem can c der lady-loves.
rey looks at kriya n swayam looks at sharon.
both kriya n sharon r angry wid der boys!
kriya noticed dis.
kriya 2 sharon: kya hua? tum swayam se baat kyun nahi kar rahi?
phirse jhagda?
sharon: aur nahi toh kya! jab bhi dekho yeh ladka... yeh ladka irritate karta rehta hain!
kriya: ab kya kiya swayam ne?
sharon: wahi.. jisme woh best hain...
kriya: kya?
sharon: OVER-SMART BAN NE KI KOSHISH!
kriya (hittg her fore-head): hey universe ji! *kinda hittg sharon on the back of her head* iss jhalli ka na kuch nahi ho sakta hain! tum dono bhi na bewaja jhagda karte rehte ho! n end main rote rehte ho! tum dono ko na "sabse stupid cheezo pe jhagda karne ka" na award milna chahiye!
den she realises: mein bhi rey se itni stupidd si baat pe gussa hu! jhalli *hits her head*
both the gurls chuck der egos n plan to patch-up wid der boys.
after class,
kriya chup-chaap se rey ko fire escape le jaati hain.
rey is all hairan-pareshaan ki kriya ke mind main kya khichdi pak rahi hain!
rey: kriya... tumne mujhe yaha kyun...?
b4 he cud complete, she kissed him on his cheek.
kriya: i'm sorry rey. dey hug!!
meanwhile, sharon goes to the boys' locker room.
swayam: tum... yaha... tumhe yaha nahi...
sharon goes upto him n hugs him tightly.
sharon: i'm sorry swayam! i love u.
swayam: it's ok. n i luv u 2! he hugs her 2!
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Posted: 12 years ago
SCENE 2-
LATE EVENING TYM,
REY N KRIYA IN THE REHEARSAL HALL...
IMAGINE DIL SE REY(😳😳😳)...LAST SCENE
EXCEPT FOR D FACT THAT REY'S EYES R OPEN
REY N KRIYA IN TOTAL ROMEO JULIET MOOD...

OTHER SIDE:
SWAYAM GOING TO ENTER REHEARSAL HALL (TO TALK TO REY)
SEES KRIYAASH,
THINKS
CHALO REY SE KAL BAAT KAR LETA HOON
SMILES
AND TURNS AROUND AND FRM FAR AWAY IN THE CORRIDOR SEES SHARON MARCHING 2WARDS REHEARSAL HALL...
CONTINUE

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Posted: 12 years ago
GUYZ PLZ PLAY MY GAME ALSO

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: SELENASACHDEVA

GUYZ PLZ PLAY MY GAME ALSO



DEAR I M ALREADY PLAYING UR GAME...
U ALSO PLAY MINE 1

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