maneet ff

sona27

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Posted: 03 January 2012 at 2:18am | IP Logged

HEY I HAVE BEEN A SILENT READER OF MANY MAAN AND GEET FF
SO HERE I'M TRYING MY HAND WRITING A FF FOR ALL OF U READERS THERE
I HOPE U ALL WILL LIKE IT DO TELL ME IF ITS GOOD OR NOT

ITS A STORY OF MAAN N GEET

MAAN SINGH KHURANA
A handsome 25 year old man who has recently joined his dad business ie Khurana Group of Companies . He has completed his MBA from london . He is very loving and caring in nature.
He loves his family too the core n can do anything for them . He has a elder brother who is his mentor in life.

YASH SINGH KHURANA
He is maan's elder brother n mentor . He is 28 years old n happily married to meera . He has a son ayaan who is sole of the family .

MEERA SINGH KHURANA
She yash's wife n very good friend of maan . She loves maan like her small brother n helps him whenever he is in any problem .

SAVITRI SINGH KHURANA
She is the loving dadima of the khurana children . She is modern in thinking and loves all the children to the core . Ayaan is her life .

VEERAN SINGH KHURANA
He is maan father n MD of Khurana Group. he is strict n shrude on business front but extremely loving n caring on family front.

AVANTIKA KHURANA
She is maan mom n good social worker. She aleays there whenver her children need n loves meera like her own daughter .

SANJANA KHURANA
She is the only daughter of khurana who is loved n pampered by her elder brothers alot. Her brothers lovingly call her Sanju.

So this is the loving khurana family . Now the HANDA FAMILY .

GEET HANDA
Abeautiful girl who is 24 year old n recently completed her hotel management course.
She is the apple of eye of every member of handa family . She plans to join her father in managing the Handa Chains of Hotels with her brothers . She loves her family alot.

BALRAJ HANDA
He is geet Darji n the head of the family . He loves n pampers geet alot she is the first girl child in the family after generations but strict at times also.

RANVEER HANDA
He is geet father n MD of Handa Chains of Hotels . He loves his daughter alot n can do anything to fulfil her wish .

RANO HANDA
She is geet mother n a house wife . She is very sweet yet at times strict in nature.

ARJUN HANDA
He is geet elder bother n very protective about her but he can do anything to get one beautiful simle on his sisters face .

SIMRAN HANDA
She is wife of arjun n sweet bhabhi of geet . She is soon going to be a mom n is very excited about this face of her life .

This a story where both the famlies will decide the future of maan n geet but unaware of the relation boyh maan n geet share .

So these r the two familes
do tell me about ur like of the above n should i continue or not
plz suggest a good name for ff

PROLOGUE

Morning in Handa Haweli
Geet : hey babaji aaj phir late ho gyi plzz mujhe bacha lena usske gusse warna vo toh mujhe ni ni geet aisa ni sochte vo aisa kuch ni karega
ab sochna chod jaldi se ja aur usse mana le

Here geet runs downstairs towards the exit when darji says...

Darji : arre geet puttar tu kahan ja rahi hai vo bhi itni jaldi main ki apne darji se milna hi bhul gyi?

Geet : ni darji aisa ni hai aur aisa kabhi ni ho sakta li geet aap se milne bina kahi jae
vo toh main todhi jaldi main thi isliye sorry darji plz mujhe maaf kar dijiye

Darji : are ni puttar main samajh sakta hoon ki tu koi jaruri kam nal ja rahi hogi chal koi ni ja aur tu jis kam se ja rahi hai vo thik se ho jae yeh meri dua hai

Geet : thank u darji ur d best ab main chalti hun bye

Same time in Khurana Mansion,at breakfast table

Dadima : gud morning every one . Meera ye yash aur maan kaha hai beta ?

Meera : gud mrng dadima yash toh papaji ke saath study mein hai aur maan vo toh subha subha kahin chala gya bina batae thdhi der pehle mummyji bhi puch rahi thi

Dadima : kya kare is ladke ka pta ni kahan gya hoga ?

Meera : kuch ni hota dadima aa jaega thori der mein

At same time in a beautiful park a man is sitting n waiting for some one arrival...

man :kyaa karu is ladki ka main kabhi bhi tym pe aa ni sakti aur main agar late ho jau toh mujhe se gussa ho jati hai aane do aaj main bhi baat ni karunga usse

suddenly a girl comes n hugs him from back n says...

girl : sorry sorry sorry plz mujhee maaf kr do plzzz

will boy forgive d girl or not ?
who r dese two?
this is all for now plzz tell me should i continue or not
plzz hit d LIKE button to n encurage me
PLZZ PEOPLE OUT THERE DO COMMENT

Edited by sona27 - 03 January 2012 at 3:38am

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Posted: 03 January 2012 at 3:35am | IP Logged

nice start ...

add me in u r pmlist dear ...

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sona27

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Posted: 03 January 2012 at 4:09am | IP Logged

Originally posted by payalpari

nice start ...

add me in u r pmlist dear ...

THANKS for d like dear Smile

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awesomepooja

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Posted: 27 January 2012 at 4:09am | IP Logged

Hey sona,
Interesting intro.
Cont soon.
Add me in ur pm list.

goldenmoon

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Posted: 01 February 2012 at 2:49am | IP Logged

nice start

continue soon

KreyaArshiLover

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Posted: 02 February 2012 at 11:45am | IP Logged

Nice plz add me on your pm list

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Posted: 02 February 2012 at 9:20pm | IP Logged

awesome cs n prologue...
loved it...
thank u very much fr such a lovely one...
continue soon plz...
waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

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